Douluo: Shocked! I Am Bibi Dong's Parent and Son

There are some old clichés that cannot be avoided when writing Dou Yi, but the writing is much better than other studios. I don't know why no one reads it.

I've never read this book, so I'd like to ask. Bibi Dong went to the killing city alone and brought a child with him when he came back? Does Qianxunji think that he got angry for messing around inside? After all, he also knows what the killing city is like 😰

After reading everyone's comments recently, I have also gone through deep reflection. When I write novels, I tend to have brain problems, so sometimes there will be problems where the previous text does not match the later text. If you see it, you can point it out directly (just post it here, I will check it every day), and you will make corrections immediately after seeing it. Then I plan to keep writing this book, no matter what. So you can rest assured, and based on the content of my outline, I should be able to write a million words. The problems everyone pointed out are good medicine, and I also hope that my works will become better! ! ! Then I will answer some questions: There is a debate about the timeline, and I forcibly changed it for the sake of the beginning of the plot (if you don't like it, can you forgive me) Then about the heroine, my outline has multiple heroines, but there will definitely not be more than four (because if there are too many, it will be the same as a stallion). You can also guess who it will be. Finally, I would like to reiterate my point of view. There are 1,000 Hamlets in the eyes of 1,000 people. If you don't like the settings and ideas of this work, the easiest thing is to read what you like (that's how I am). Everyone can discuss and put forward their opinions, but don't be too extreme in attacking them. Finally, I would like to thank the readers who supported this book. You are the motivation for me to write!

Can't you change your name? I feel this name

No, my friend, is there something wrong with the writing of the Killing City? Isn't it true that 10 people enter the arena and only 1 emerges? How come it has become a duel?

Do you think anyone would like the protagonist to go undercover in the Tiandou Empire? Do you think anyone would like a plot where the results of the agency's calculations remain unchanged? Do you think there are people who would like to say that in a world where strength is supreme, they say they are ordered by God to live forever? If you can't even distinguish these, even if your entire book is free, how many people will be willing to read it?

This book does have many shortcomings. You can point them out and I will revise them one by one. There are also novels with thousands of people and different tastes. There are a thousand Hamlets in the eyes of a thousand people. Just choose what you like to read. If you don't like it, please don't criticize me.