Family: Jiuli Family

Author, in your setting of the golden elixir stage, do different people form different elixirs?

The author should strive to update once a day.

Author, I personally think that if you want a book to become popular, you must first write well, and secondly, write in large quantities and control enough. The quality of writing is okay, but the speed is beyond the reach of others. The current top of Qinglian is too poisonous, but it can be improved! The results are still good. I think this book is very well written, and it is relatively good among family novels, so the author will work hard and this book will take off immediately!

Brother, write seriously. Why do I feel like I am invincible when I read it? The supporting characters are also smart. The follower of the protagonist has been the leader of the clan for more than ten years. It feels like his brain has been kicked by a donkey.

For the first time, I saw that the spiritual consciousness and cultivation of immortal cultivators are cultivated separately. After finally cultivating to the ninth level of Qi Condensation, it turns out that you have to cultivate your spiritual consciousness from a mortal to the ninth level of Qi Condensation in order to break through the foundation. It's really funny. You cultivators are cultivators. It must be a defective product of cultivation. The cultivation level does not increase the spiritual consciousness. A cultivator in the late stage of Qi training was unexpectedly killed by a monster with a level of spiritual consciousness. He was also turned into a zombie. Author, you are really awesome. The protagonist lost an arm after experiencing the first battle. On the battlefield, he became one-armed. It was so well written and real. The protagonist has nothing but the memory of an ordinary person from Blue Star. His performance is not as good as that of a native. The head of the Yang family, a native who is also the founder of the Foundation Establishment Dzogchen, looks like the boss of the Baodan sect. When a father beats his son, the protagonist cannot defeat the enemies in the early stage of foundation building. This is the first time I see a time traveler protagonist choosing to cultivate a hundred arts instead of being an alchemist to become a spiritual cultivator. This is the same as not choosing to buy rice and become a farmer on earth.

Sorry, it sucks and I can't stand it.

When you break through, your Qi Hai and Divine Sense are higher than those of ordinary people. In the end, there is nothing surprising about it. You can't even defeat people in the realm. It's a complete joke if you harass others, and the fighting scenes are not colorful at all.

The wind blows and the dragon flies. The boss is typing, I'm watching. 😡

It's a bit unreasonable to have people from several families on one island. It's better to make the main island belong to the protagonist's family, and the additional islands belong to the subsidiary families. Otherwise, what if there is a rebellion on one island? In addition, I am really looking forward to the ending of Tianhai Sect. I hope that Tianhai Sect will be destroyed. A Jindan-level force plunders the resources of its subordinates. I have nothing to say. However, the description of the foundation-building pills of Su family monks in the sect as defective products shows that Tianhai Sect has gone too far in suppressing them.

To sum up: great power comes from group fights. Even if the third-level clan protection formation self-destructs and builds foundations, only a few people will be killed. It is also magical that only a few people will be killed when refining Qi. The protagonist has an unprecedented breakthrough, but he can't even beat others of the same level... In addition, I don't know if I should say it. When I read the book, there is always a word "stitch monster" in my mind.

I had no intention of competing, but people were unpredictable. Have I changed, or is this the way this world is. 😐

What are you writing about in 69 and 70? You have to tell me if I give you a reward. What are you writing? You have to change people. The gap in combat power is so huge in an instant. The dialogue is the same as a junior high school student's composition.

Come on, write well, this book will become popular.

The overall idea is pretty good. But some settings are very illogical. For example, the size of the island is related to the size of the main mission map. Cultivation of immortality cannot be based on ordinary people's thinking. How could it be possible for outsiders to live in the headquarters of a family that cultivates immortality? This is a taboo.

Does the author have any misunderstanding about the land area? There are three foundation-building families and millions of people in less than 20,000 square kilometers of land. When did the world of cultivation become so narrow?

The writing style is quite good, but the division of realms is a bit complicated, like a nouveau riche and a boy who just throws away his money.

Su Ziming: If I had known that I would be so good after my breakthrough, why would I have bothered so much?

I can't stand it anymore just seeing the promotion to the first level spiritual planter. Entry-level and first-level spiritual planters all plant seeds, based on survival rate. Medicinal materials must be harvested and not planted. For starters, planting is enough. At the first level, seeds must be planted. Plant every day, your medicinal field is really big, and you don't have to follow the seasons, as long as you plant it, it will survive. Once the seeds are alive, there is no need to fertilize or water them, just plant them every day.

It's so funny that the family has no harem, hahahaha, 666

Someone recommended it, but after looking at the catalog, who dares to read it?

I started out with fewer books than you, but now I have twice as many.

In the world of cultivating immortals, the elimination rate is so high. There is no family lineage for the heroine, and there is no harem. I don't know what you think, being a father and a wet nurse to a large family?

The book is pretty good. Why does the author often stop updating?

It's too elementary, just this dialogue, this description, I can't stand it until the second chapter. You are a new author and I won't criticize you. It's just like talking to a primary school student. You said, I said, I was shocked. The setting is that spiritual weapons are lower than magic weapons. There are hidden levels within the family. Shouldn't you hide your dirty hands when you go to the outside market to buy and sell? In Lingzhi's description, if you don't write about Dongtian, you should write about beads or something. There is no golden finger. With your brain that all the cultivation methods and career choices are decided by your grandfather, you can cultivate into Nascent Soul, which is embarrassing even if you think about it.

After reading Chapter 8, there are so many poisonous points that you are really not suitable for writing novels.

Write one chapter a week, one chapter has few words

Brother, if I give you two monthly votes, you will be better at updating. Otherwise no one would vote.

It's really not suitable for writing novels. What you write is considered to be average.

The writing of this book is too rough and has no sense of immersion!

In fact, we won't comment on how it is written, and we don't want to scold the author, but is there a problem with the update speed? We don't care whether the writing is good or bad, but the author is a student or a company employee. With this update speed, when I see the author, I want to pick it up and type. I actually think this book is okay