I Work in American Comics and Take over Arkham at the Beginning.

Emm, how did Quicksilver outrun The Flash?

How can Thanos compare with Darkseid? Thanos is even less worthy of Darkseid's eyes if he has one of the six gems, okay? Normally people are at the multiverse level, right?

You can learn from the management of Arkham in "The Days of the American Comic"

All I can say is that it's very poisonous. Why is Charles crazy? It's because he knows that he is a comic book character after reading Deadpool's mind, and he can't accept being crazy. The protagonist just opens his heart and shows it to Charles. Isn't Charles crazy? Moreover, the way Charles is written is too different. It is impossible for Charles to look into other people's minds at will. It can only be said that the author does not have a deep understanding of comics. They should just follow the trend of spiritual teachers.

When a new author writes about such a confusing subject matter, you can tell at first glance that he is going to be thrown into the street.

I saw Chapter 24, but I didn't read it very carefully. What I saw is that my feet can now open a portal, and my hair can't, but the troubles are coming one after another. It's amazing. It feels like a mess.

Part 1: A trashy book that made me complain about the author.

Seeing that I'm annoyed, the protagonist has been causing trouble and he doesn't even know it. Why don't you just write a Hulk protagonist because he has a low IQ, so helping turns into causing trouble?

I only read Chapter 17, but with all due respect, I didn't understand what the author was trying to write. Of course, there may be a problem with my understanding or literary quality, but it's just my personal opinion. The beginning of the chapter was actually good. After finishing writing Professor By messy, I don't mean the connection of words, but the content looks messy. It gives me the impression that there is a hammer here and a stick here and there. I just arrange it how I want and write whatever comes to mind.

Damn it, you can beat Quicksilver in running, so why the hell do you need Quicksilver? It has a barren use🌝

Does the protagonist have no superpowers of his own? Just an ordinary person! He will still have to die after a hundred years. Only golden fingers can attract foreign aid and summon thugs?

After reading Chapter 8, the creativity is good. However, when writing, the description of the key points is too vague, and there is a feeling that the preface does not match the follow-up. This was more obvious at the beginning of inviting Professor

I was just about to look at the results when I saw that the catalog hadn't been updated in six days. Good guy, eunuch, was still in the daily guide.

Why are so many authors now going to East and West factories? Are wages high there or is there a huge shortage of people?

You ask me, what is Xichang? Now let me tell you that cases that cannot be solved by the East Factory will be solved by my West Factory. Also, listen carefully, I will kill those who Dongchang does not dare to kill, and I will take care of things that Dongchang does not dare to take care of. In a word, I want to control what Dongchang can control, and I want to control what Dongchang cannot control even more. I will kill first and then report, royal power has granted me! This is West Factory, is it clear enough?

There is a big problem with the description of Ancient One. Ancient One self-destructed because she wanted to fish after finding a successor. She will not have any side effects due to her physical death. As for Dormammu, he can only be beaten, and Ancient One is a ruthless character with a sledgehammer.

Emmm, I have read Chapter 81. To be honest, reading the author's book is like reading Grimm's Fairy Tales. The storyline is obviously written (organized) by the same person, but I feel no discomfort when reading each chapter individually. The transition is very abrupt. Some places could be described in more detail, but they are described with the Spring and Autumn style of writing. This makes the view of time very confusing and disorderly in many cases. The role of the protagonist is to wrap up several short stories at once. Things are like a thread in a book. The preface and follow-up are inconsistent, or the behavior is inconsistent. The characterization is also very rigid, the behavior is stereotyped, and the verbal expression is also a bit abrupt. It would be better to sort out the relationship, and also talk about the time point of view a little. The timeline ordering of Marvel and DC is quite confusing, and the story also has a lot of twists and turns. There is basically no in-depth contact and communication, and it is just based on stereotypes. It is completely the same. You all have the attitude that NPCs can act according to the script. There is no problem with this description, but the problem is that the author has to add a paragraph of his own thoughts, which leads to some unexpected situations. However, both the protagonist and the original staff seem to be very deliberate. Some problems that seem simple to Bruce and Tony have to be portrayed in a situation that no one knows. Although it may be the influence of the halo of intelligence (dog head), I still hope that it can be done. If you carefully describe the characters, some places seem too deliberate and some are too stupid. The author can look at better-written fan fiction. Don't force yourself on some parts, try to distribute them reasonably, and it is best to make the transitions a little more detailed and slow. Of course, I am not teaching the author to write a book. I hope all book friends can be merciful. After all, I don't have the ability to teach others to write a book. I just think the subject matter is good and I want the author to write it well to the end. After all, I read the novel Eunuch and I can't afford to get hurt.