I Am in Xingyue, My Sister Is Ilia

The latest two pictures are forcibly arranged. Why don't you use the power of the Dragon King to directly crush Zhu Yue to death? She was injured in the first place, and you still have to fight Zhu Yue with the sword. It's not very reasonable. I hope the author can explain it.

What impressed me most about Ilya was the voice of one voice actor, and the other... Because of the budget, there were only a few female characters in the game and she had no route. 🙂

What should I say about this rare Mo Yiwen? The writing style needs to be improved, and the characterization is not detailed enough. However, I still don't want to give up such a rare work, so I will continue to read it. Come on, author

I have read more than seventy chapters now. Can you stop emphasizing that you are a little person or an ordinary person? I feel really awkward saying this.

The author recommends that you divide the paragraphs into more paragraphs, otherwise each paragraph may even exceed more than 100 words, which sometimes seems very laborious for readers. Control the paragraphs so that each paragraph does not exceed 50 words, and the reading experience will be better.

The plot is very bland and nothing exciting. You can't keep people around You, the male protagonist, have no special characteristics. Your character is just a tool, and your job is to promote the plot. The dialogue with other people is not nutritious, and few people on the heroine side have anything to say to the protagonist. Either he was asking for help, or his tone was tougher than anyone else's. The male protagonist has no sense of empathy, the female protagonist has no good character, and the article is not attractive. Bland, tasteless

Yeah haha

No, there was no Kiritsugu, so where did Illya come from? Is Ellie split?

I don't know if there is any hope

I finally met the girl version of Xiao En again. Since becoming the Otaku Demon King, it's rare to see Niang Shen and Niang En in Xingyue fan fiction. Come on, this book is finalized.

My younger sister is Illya, but Illya is artificial (artificial life form). In a sense, it is impossible for her to be born from my mother-in-law (so is my mother-in-law) in her ten-month pregnancy.

The main character is a coyote template. And the smell is too strong. What line is this?

I am the only trash left in the group

. . . It feels too bland and a bit boring,

Wow, first

There are actually people who write about type month! ! ! ! ! !

Wait, does this house have a girlfriend?