There Is Definitely Something Wrong with This Spell Card Master

After reading the introduction, I suggested some Genshin Impact 3, Ark, War Double, Azure, Marvel DC, Two Dimension (Zhutian Animation), Zhutian Fantasy (major fantasy works), weird fantasy (Cthulhu, Foundation) and so on 😏😏😏

Many readers say they don't understand why I become an anchor. Fortunately for me, I have no resistance to being an anchor. The problem is that when you make money as an anchor, you completely forget about drawing cards, right? Introduction to Kangkang, at least 80% of readers come here just to draw cards. Buying a wave of real-life equipment costs tens or even millions, and the improvement is only a little, and it is still a consumable. If you draw cards, 1,000 per time, 5,000,000 or 5,000 will directly penetrate the pool. Is the improvement not higher than your rocket launcher? When I see the author complaining about the great chapter that I missed, I can only say that there is nothing exciting about it until this chapter. I reluctantly persisted for 2b, but after looking at the chapter list, it was very far away. So, here comes the comment, keep a good rhythm😑

I just read a few chapters and I can't figure out why I want to be a host? Isn't it true that the protagonist has no privacy at all when taking risks? He may make a lot of money at the beginning, but it is not conducive to long-term development. He will sacrifice himself for small profits.

After reading the first part, I honestly didn't understand it. I felt that the rules of the world were inexplicable. I originally thought it was a spell card battle, but then I discovered that there was a fantasy dungeon. I thought it was an infinite dungeon stream, but the protagonist went to be a host? The style of painting is too messy, it's just a hodgepodge.

I rushed to the summons and rushed to Tifa. After Chapter 60, there is no trace. I am also a Buddha. A good prophet first picks up missing treasures and silently makes a fortune, and then pretends to be a pig to eat the tiger. How can he become a berserker and chop chop? Even if the berserker chops and chops, why don't pig's feet be exchanged for draws if they have money? More than 20 million and 4000 draws. Isn't it good to max out the skills and weapons first without talking about other materials? It's just a bunch of bells and whistles. . . .

I've read more than a dozen chapters, and it's actually okay to be a host. It was the 10% commission from the secret realm that got me. The first time the protagonist came out of the secret realm, the 10% commission from the platform was more than the platform spent on the protagonist in a month.

There are no big poisons, but there are small ones. There was too much data at the beginning, and the attitude of my colleagues was too disgusting. There is no need to write so much about data flow. In fact, most of the data that you think about carefully can be cut through at a glance. Also, it is too complicated and the world view setting is very large. The protagonist can be proficient in everything, but he cannot write about everything. Adventure, competition, card making. I just understand a little bit about the card making settings. I suddenly jumped to competition. I just understood a little bit. I ran to adventure again. The adventure is closely related to the world of the previous chapters. The worlds are different. It's very messy. My personal suggestion is to choose one or two main worlds to adventure through the novice stage. Confirm the main story first. Write carefully. If you want to write everything, you can't write anything well. It's too messy.

Thank you all for your generous rewards and readers who have been following the voting. I will not type out the names one by one, but I will keep them all in mind. Thank you for your love! 😊 I will read all the messages from readers one by one, and I will also seriously reflect on the criticism and suggestions. Thank you for your continued support. To be honest, I thought it was nothing at first. But as I got to the end, I felt more and more unprepared. I didn't have much in my stomach, and it was extremely difficult to write down the words. 🤕 4500 words, Shanhai takes five or six hours to code, sometimes the effect is not satisfactory, I always feel that some places are not written well. 😭 Thank you for giving me the motivation to persevere. I love you!(*^V^)/★*★!

Did you put it in the wrong category? Don't put it in light novels?

The result of reading one chapter a day is that fewer and fewer people are reading, fewer and fewer people are giving votes, insufficient income, and less and less motivation, and then a vicious cycle follows.

It's really a science fiction area that has everything except science fiction.

I am very interested in the setting and introduction, but the live broadcast and battles are written too dryly, and the emotional impact is not enough, making it a bit unbearable to watch.

To all Yanzu, Reba, and Yuyan Fenyan from all over the world: It is not easy for a newcomer to write a book, so I sincerely ask for your support. If you have any opinions, you can point them out, and I will accept them with an open mind. But forget about the unintelligent trolls and trolls, I can't stand them. Thanks to every reader who supports. --- Meeting you is a blessing in May in this world. May I have love in the clouds, in the vast sea, and in my heart.

Hurry up

The writing is okay, but is it that the capital of the extraordinary world is too kind to take 10%, and is it okay to give such a high treatment for no reason?

Let me tell you my opinion. When I saw Chapter 6, it was all water and there was no plot at all. It's all a bunch of settings, and people who don't understand whether they are game fans can really watch it. I rarely play games, so I don't really understand it. The settings are obviously pretty good, but it would be interesting if you weren't familiar with it. But when I read the narrative and paragraph comments of this chapter, I felt that those readers did not have the same feeling as me at all. So I can only say that this is my opinion.

So wouldn't it be better for the protagonist to sell the Sun Staircase seed himself? If the star element is replaced with a talisman, why don't you just do a violent attack?

The subscription is probably out of date. I read the chapter posted on the 17th on the 19th, and it turned out to be the 76th one to catch up on it.

There was quite a lot of nonsense, so I skipped through it. I didn't have any dyslexia at all, but the subject matter was still very attractive.

After reading Chapter 7, I felt a little complicated, and I had a premonition that the combat power system was about to collapse 🙂🙂😭

Don't write anymore? No updates for a day. Keep it, keep it, keep it, no more

Author, I have only read Chapter 4 of your work so far. I would like to make some suggestions: Originally in game novels, there will be many paragraphs introducing skills and equipment. These descriptions are necessary for the author to improve the content of the novel, and readers will look "very useless": "You can't hit the damage value you said when you wear this suit and use this skill!" After all, there are very few readers with such "statistics". Furthermore, you describe too much some unimportant scenes, such as the scene where the protagonist is riding in the car, or the card drawing interface. When these two situations are combined, I will have the feeling of "I see you writing a lot, but I don't know what the point is that you want to express...". Please describe in detail only the necessary plot or climax paragraphs, otherwise readers will really get tired. Above

I don't understand why the live broadcast is required, please let me know.

I thought it was card making, but I didn't expect it was card drawing. Goodbye

The green snake is gone now? I came here for the Green Snake, but you told me he was gone...

All kinds of things are piled together, making it a mess.

It's a pity not to make games, there are a lot of things that have nothing to do with the novel

Come on, the author's writing is very good. Follow your own ideas and don't be too toxic. Come on, it's very good.

Brother, excuse me. With the help of Guibao, Mengxin created a small account and wrote a book "Time Travel, It's Finally My Turn" to ask for advice and opinions.

In fact, there is a small suggestion that can make the look and feel very good, although I don't know whether you can hear it or not It is your display panel and dialogue Let's talk about the dialogue first. You have learned a sentence of "" in elementary school, right? Don't say a bunch of words with one "" Well, it's too laborious to look at like this. To be honest, it doesn't look particularly good. Although it's not a big problem, it's very awkward. Sometimes it's not clear where the ending is. The second one is display. If you want to show it, you either have to go directly [Material Card: XXxxx] Material: White Card x1 , a certain material