The Wang Family of Family Cultivators

1. Running account, 2. Sometimes it becomes the first person, 3. No plug-ins, It's boring

It's too white, but the creativity is pretty good. It's probably because it's my first time writing a book that my writing skills are poor. There are a lot of typos, but the writing is pretty good, and the settings are more reasonable than most family stories. The author should practice his writing skills in the future and then start again.

It's just starting! It's all water now! I really can't watch it

There were so many typos that people pointed out but no one was able to correct them.

There are too many typos and many places cannot be read clearly. Please check the author carefully before posting!

Uh-huh... That is to say... Can you please add double quotation marks? Let's not talk about typos and writing style. It's normal for newbies, and these don't happen overnight, but the lack of double quotation marks in the speaking part is really uncomfortable!

I feel that the author could consider the way the family started as a casual cultivator and rebuild it before starting again. The author restarted three times and corrected many wrong settings.

I spent dozens of chapters in vain, and the book is about to enter the palace. Hehe, I'm sorry, I'm sorry. I hope the author will write better and better, come on!

A paragraph has several hundred words... It's dazzling. Go check out the paragraphs on the tomato side. It's so comfortable.

The writing is messy, in vernacular, and full of typos. Some sentences don't make sense. Articles written by science students

This is a running account! ! ! !

I just read the first chapter, and after reading a little bit, I felt it was too white, and the characters were not well described. Characterization is very important in a good work. I have not written a book, and my Chinese is not good, but I have read novels for so many years, and once I saw Douyin, a leaf fell, ➕adjectives➕verbs➕time, etc., In the end I felt completely different!

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