A Wonderful Journey That Begins with Red Dead Redemption

Updates are so slow, even the production team's donkeys don't dare to take a break like this.

There was really a lot to write about the plot twenty years ago, including the history of Cornwall's fortune, Indian chief Luo Yu, five legendary gunmen in their prime, two husband-wife gunmen who should not have lived in seclusion, the Lemoyne Raiders, the Skinning Gang, the mysterious blind beggar, and the two major families of Rhodes. These are enough to write about twenty years later. The legendary bounty bandits online plus the main plot of several million words are no problem.

The plot begins in 1899. The protagonist traveled twenty years earlier, to 1879. Has the protagonist ever thought about rebelling against the United States? Build a country on your own. That year. The fifth year of the reign of Emperor Guangxu of the Qing Dynasty. The Japanese army took full control of Ryukyu. The king of Ryukyu was exiled. Is the protagonist just a robber?

Can the author write less about other people's plots and push more about the main plot? I feel like the protagonist in these chapters has almost become a stranger.

I found an Easter egg that I don't know if it was buried by the author. The protagonist's name is Joseph Jon, which means his English name is Joseph Jon. The abbreviation is JOJO. Then here comes the problem. When will the protagonist awaken his substitute?

In the United States, white people are the king of chaebols. With money and a pistol, they complete the primitive accumulation of capital, monopolize regional industries, upstream, midstream and downstream, and then expand. If acquisitions fail, they collude with gangs, suppress them, and the trust is established.

Let me give you some advice: First, we in China have no sense of English names and can't remember them, and readers are lazy. So every time a character appears again, give them a number one, such as the old version of the grocery store Second, the author's characterization is very lacking, and he does not describe the characters' clothing, occupation, personality, and psychological activities. The story has been told flatly, making the work lack color.

Joy The picture is from Fatal Pleasure, slightly modified.

First of all, thank you for your support. Yunfei hopes that everyone can give more opinions. Good or bad, I can accept it. After all, when a person thinks, he will inevitably miss something.

I don't know if you, the author, have ever played Hunting Duel. I feel that this is a very suitable background for my cousin, and his power level is quite high.

It would be more reasonable and better-looking if the portable space could be removed, or the portable space could be opened only when no one is around. What I am writing now is a complete game novel, and the others seem to be NPCs.

This book can be renamed "An Irregular Journey Starting from Red Dead Redemption"

I feel that Qiao Yi can go to Saint Denis to become a big dog owner, buy a few shops, start to establish a gang, and consider buying an oil field and a piece of land to become a farmer. If there is food, he can make wine, tobacco and alcohol with a high profit margin. You can first establish a family force with Joey as the core leader. Just like the mafia godfather, adopt a few children to be your right-hand man. The immigration wave in the 19th century will be absorbed into your family, and you will gradually gain the right to speak in the political city. In the future, you can exonerate Arthur Morgan and Hosea Adachi. The protagonist has already met Charles. The protagonist can try to help the aboriginal people appropriately. It's too miserable. At least don't let the Americans take Indian children to orphanages, exterminate their culture, and destroy their language. In this way, the skinning gang may no longer exist in the future.

How should I put it, the plot feels a bit slow, and with the lack of updates, it feels a bit boring. Many chapters feel like they are gone in one or two sentences.

The protagonist can stand out a little more and be more ambitious. I feel that the current protagonist is like a little follower. Although he is very capable, he is still a follower. If you are the protagonist and does not occupy the C position and becomes the core of the team, how can you give everyone a sense of involvement? I feel that you can be more radical and you can recruit a whole team with the protagonist's ability. Kill gunmen, and then control some gold mines. Set a small goal first, such as becoming a capitalist and then entering the political arena. Otherwise, if the protagonist enters the political arena from the police force, he feels that there is no future. At most, he can become a police sergeant. It will take time to move up. And based on the national conditions of the United States, high All officials have capital behind them. Your protagonist has no capital behind him. How can he become a high-ranking official? Even if capital is attracted to support him for various reasons later, it would be better to be a capitalist himself. Of course, if the author wants to write, the final ending is an old man lying on a rocking chair in a hut in the desert, recalling his incredible life. I have nothing to say about the life of a cowboy, but since I wrote it, I have to make it awesome. Not to mention overthrowing the United States and establishing a new country, I must at least become a very important figure in the history of the United States. For example, the president, governor, big capitalist, can't end up with a legendary cowboy. It feels unworthy.

There have been a lot of western games recently. The online mode plot of Big Cousin and Wild West can be linked together. There are pig-headed men in Wild West in Cousin.

It's very bland, it doesn't have the happy endings of a western movie, the protagonist's character is very awkward, or rather reserved, there's no young lady, bad review! ! !

What is it about? This has nothing to do with Red Dead Redemption. Instead, it smells like a Western fantasy.

I am scared to read this update by the author. There are too many eunuchs like this and I dare not read it at all.