Pet Beast Simulator

Seriously, brother, it's best to change the first five chapters. It's too discouraging In the first and second chapters, it can be pointed out that the protagonist can see that the aunt treats him well and is not specifically targeting him. After the third chapter, he still uses curse words to the protagonist. How do you attract readers? 🤔 Your twist is too abrupt and it is very likely that the plot has not yet turned around. I can't finish these golden three chapters and just give up. No matter how exciting your subsequent plot is, you have no idea if people don't read it. You are a boss and you can be willful. Brothers, we newbies should pay more attention to the new book. Whether the results are good or not is another matter. Don't let people criticize you anymore...

Speaking of whether this is a solo or a harem, I think it's best to have no heroine👌🏻

I just want the author to read more about the title when writing a book. After all, you can't lose the core selling point.

Interested friends can leave their comments here: Name, gender, pet, and approximate abilities

When writing this kind of novel, I personally feel that it is more developmental. Don't write that kind of mindless plot.

If it wasn't for eunuchs, I would book them all. Don't be eunuchs. Come on.

Come on (ง •̀_•́)ง

I finished watching it without realizing it, and I couldn't get enough.

Currently, I have read that Chapter 8 Weiweidu can be chased. When I saw the title of Learning Thunder Escape, I suddenly thought of it. Thunder Escape: A Thousand Birds Changed into a Thousand Dogs

It's great, I hope the author doesn't give up

It's quite beautiful! ! ! Come on, author! ! ! !

When I read Chapter 5, I felt that the protagonist was so aggrieved -_-||

Is there such a thing as Shen Nong? This introduction and character pictures put me off.

It can be seen that the author is working hard on the new book. There are not many poisonous points and can be pursued, but there are some suggestions that I hope the author can read. 1. I have read many books similar to simulators. The key is the power of the simulation and the advancement of the plot. Can you grasp the rhythm well and highlight the exciting points without being blunt? 2. I really hope there can be more simulations. 3. Can pets be contracted for more points? 4. The evolution of the simulator can also be considered. 5. Personally, I prefer low-key development. The pig's feet in the macro world are not clear, and the surrounding environment is unclear. If you don't develop slowly, you will die. I think everyone in time knows this truth.

The author would like to advise you not to make the plug-in too powerful. If the plug-in is too powerful, you will feel out of balance.

If you choose a red fox at the beginning, your popularity will explode if you are chosen by the Six Paths Sage to become the Nine-Tails in Naruto World. Thinking about the protagonist turning into the nine-tailed chakra mode, he would be very handsome, and frame a few tailed beasts to directly abuse the enemy!

Come on, author, you have already invested, please support me by ordering for the first time

The recommendation has been voted in. Please give me another monthly vote to encourage me. Keep writing and don't enter the palace.

Very well written, keep up the good work

If you keep writing, you will definitely become popular, keep working hard. It would be even better if the supporting characters could be described with more flesh and blood.

Author, your book is similar to (Pet Beast Simulator), even the introduction is very similar to the content in it! It's just that the author of this book is not very diligent in updating it. . . . .