From Yan Jiecheng of the Siheyuan to the Big Screen

You don't change anything, you occasionally lick fools, and you pay half of Yan Pugui's salary. You have taken advantage of all these poisonous points. Although plain and simple is the best, your writing is not at this level. If there is no conflict, there is nothing interesting. It is not as good as someone who splits up the family directly because of the bitterness and hatred.

Okay okay. Many Siheyuan fanfics are successful because the protagonist has his own life, instead of living around the plot of Siheyuan, and cannot revolve around silly pillars. The second is that you don't have to be so violent in your life, even if there are no time travelers, Shazhu also has a few apartments in Beijing, two wives, and four children.

The protagonist has the IQ of a genius, the learning ability of a fool, and the system of Wang Zha, but it is the work of a fool. Do you know what God rewards hard work?

Yu Li's father's mentality is wrong. In that era, there were vouchers for supplies, food control, and many children at home. How could the old father have the mentality of feeling sorry for his cabbage being eaten by wild boars? In that era, if a daughter could find a boyfriend with good conditions, it would be too late to be happy, and it was impossible not to be unwilling.

Does Silly Zhu have an Oedipus complex when he falls in love with Qin Huairu? After all, he lost his mother in his early years and Qin was able to consciously become a mother after giving birth to a child. She and Banggeng are brothers, and naturally they don't care what Banggeng calls him. He supports Jia and Zhang as his grandmother.

I really don't understand why he is so good to his family? What about those who are indifferent to their own family? The people of the Yu family give whatever they want to their own younger brothers. Seeing them starving and even having a golden finger doesn't help them, I really can't understand. I can't stand it anymore.

This is the most disgusting novel in the Siheyuan. Otherwise, the good protagonist is gone and it is all about stupid pillars. If it doesn't work, just cut it. It's not material for writing novels.

If you just want to write about feelings, don't use the golden finger. If you are given the golden finger and you are such a waste, it is really rare. In comparison, your grades will not be good.

After reading dozens of chapters, I just can't stand it anymore. Let's talk about my feelings: It's like writing a chronicle of a courtyard house. It follows the plot completely and has almost nothing to do with the protagonist. . .

I feel like the title of this book is wrong. It should be "The Widow Qin Who Travels Through the Siheyuan Can Always Defeat the Traveler with System Easily"