Weird: Do You Call This a Daily Anchor?

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If you have any problems, you can point them out, such as where I was poisoned, where I was smitten, etc. Ah Huang looked at this collection and it just kept falling, and he didn't know where the problem was. It would be great if someone could help point out the problem (´▽｀)ノ♪ Probably the collection just went up, and then fell down again after a while. I really don't know where the writing is wrong. Please help Ah Huang!

Maybe the introduction is not very good, the content is quite good, but many people read the introduction first when reading the book. It is better to put the adjective "Midnight Knock on the Door" in the novel into the introduction. Of course, everything depends on the author. Up to now, the only thing that can really be said bad about this book is the introduction and the title.

I would like to ask the author if he has a book club. Although my pocket is cleaner than my face, I still have a heart for improvement.

After reading this article, I suddenly felt a drop of nectar suddenly falling from the turbid sky; a bright light suddenly appeared on the dark earth; a surge of blood suddenly filled my empty chest; two springs of water filled my dry eyes. What a great article! What a great article!

After reading Chapter 70, how can I put it, I probably understand why the book is so cold. The author's writing style is okay and the story is smooth. However, for a supernatural novel, the feeling of not taking the right path is the last thing that should appear first. It is a Taoist priest. Once a supernatural novel shows someone other than the protagonist who can deal with the supernatural, the sense of terror will be reduced or even disappear, because it can be dealt with. How can it be scary? Secondly, in my personal opinion, the author did not make good use of the setting of Thousand Faces. For example, if in the first story, the person who could see the protagonist as a girl was not the fat guy accompanying him, but the anchor who had more roles, wouldn't it be more interesting? Looking at it now, the setting of Thousand Faces has no substantial meaning, that is, it is not used for the purpose, and it is just like an ordinary background setting. This is a pity in my opinion, and it is even a waste of this setting Then there is a problem with the rhythm of the plot. The whole feeling is very bland and not scary at all. , Chapter 70 adds a Taoist priest who kills supernatural beings with his mouth, and it becomes even less scary. The author has also read novels about air-conditioning, and he should also know what is scary about air-conditioning novels. The two most important points are the realistic writing style, and the setting that only supernatural beings can be used to deal with supernatural beings, because Chen Ge must conquer this setting first. Only a supernatural being can deal with supernatural beings. In addition, Chen Ge's own force value is not that he can directly deal with supernatural beings, but he can deal with things other than supernatural beings. For example, the Ghost Story Association. To put it simply, the protagonist must not be able to directly deal with supernatural beings, so that readers will be afraid of the situation that the protagonist faces, and the author's In addition to being able to directly deal with supernatural Taoist priests, the book also has a prop that is like a bug, offering incense As long as there is this thing, the protagonist will not face too scary situations, and the readers will not feel afraid. It is really a pity for this book to say so much. I hope the author can write better, come on

The Yang in Fatty's Eyes

I finished reading it in one go. How come it's so popular? I can't write hundreds of chapters to keep my brothers happy🙄

What does "can't understand" mean? What are the benefits of receiving a tip? What's the benefit of tipping an anchor and being tricked? What is the main line of the story? I really don't understand. Can anyone explain it to me?

I usually read reviews before reading a book. How can this author handle it?

I have written so many weird things that I feel uncomfortable if only a few people die.

The introduction of this novel is really unattractive, but the content is okay. The story is very smooth and attractive. I read it from beginning to end in one go. The introduction did not attract me. I was completely invested in it from the second chapter. Although the amusement park is over, it still feels like something is missing. The case is not finished. The relationship between the characters is not completely clear. I haven't gone back to work after applying. I still have a job in reality. Then I started to do the task. I dug a lot of holes and haven't filled them in. I finished reading it. The update is too slow! Totally not enough🥺🥺🥺

It is recommended that the author finish writing one million words, no matter what the grade. Won't you have experience next time?

Very well written, all booked, monthly tickets provided

I feel that it is because of the problems with Chunqiu's writing style. Many things are not explained clearly, which makes the reading experience not very good and I can't feel the scary atmosphere.

It's all booked, come on, author, don't be sent to the bathroom.

It's not scary. It's not full of supernatural elements. In fact, it doesn't matter whether the weirdness can be eliminated or not. The main thing is that it makes people feel fear, which is not the case. Come on, keep practicing, you will definitely get better. Also, don't keep adding fat people, it's too cliche. The writing should be novel. Don't be afraid of countless shortcomings in a book, but it must have a bright spot. Otherwise, no one will read it. Write down the bright spots so that people will remember the characteristics of your book. Don't be afraid of mistakes. Everyone has a different definition of a good book. I think a good book is like a girlfriend. You like the advantages and the shortcomings. If you can tolerate it, it is a good book. It is not afraid of poison and writes in a style. You can see that people are reading the dog-licking white lotus, urban soldier, king, actor, and teddy series, so write boldly. You can learn from the horror elements first, such as books like Aoba Supernatural Agency. You can learn from books and add your own modifications, and you will definitely get traffic. Come on! There are not many people who write about supernatural beings. I hope you can publish good works.

Huang Ju has the talent to become a god, but I can't find you in the group.

How to say

Live broadcast often? Changwei?

After reading the introduction, I thought the protagonist was a ghost, alas.

Is it a happy article? He just has a lot of emojis and likes to make jokes.

It's so miserable. Have you ever considered opening a new book?

Damn, the last time I saw it was last year.

I've been busy lately and haven't been chasing it, but it's actually on the shelves. I'll order it all, although it's not much. .

This book is in class with that teacher. When he opened the door, a few students stared blankly with big eyes. (My fifth): Humph! Stubborn. Weak flowers and weak lessons

After reading more than 20 chapters, I feel that it is not good, not scary, at least not to me, and there are some problems with the setting. You can refer to Super Horror Live Room and several other live room books. Although there are some problems, the plot and the description of ghosts will give me goosebumps.