Eerie: You Call This a Daily Stream?

If you have any problems, you can point them out, such as where I was poisoned, where I was smitten, etc. Ah Huang looked at this collection and it just kept falling, and he didn't know where the problem was. It would be great if someone could help point out the problem (´▽`)ノ♪ Probably the collection just went up, and then fell down again after a while. I really don't know where the writing is wrong. Please help Ah Huang!

Maybe the introduction is not very good, the content is quite good, but many people read the introduction first when reading the book. It is better to put the adjective "Midnight Knock on the Door" in the novel into the introduction. Of course, everything depends on the author. Up to now, the only thing that can really be said bad about this book is the introduction and the title.

I would like to ask the author if he has a book club. Although my pocket is cleaner than my face, I still have a heart for improvement.

After reading this article, I suddenly felt a drop of nectar suddenly falling from the turbid sky; a bright light suddenly appeared on the dark earth; a surge of blood suddenly filled my empty chest; two springs of water filled my dry eyes. What a great article! What a great article!

After reading Chapter 70, how can I put it, I probably understand why the book is so cold. The author's writing style is okay and the story is smooth. However, for a supernatural novel, the feeling of not taking the right path is the last thing that should appear first. It is a Taoist priest. Once a supernatural novel shows someone other than the protagonist who can deal with the supernatural, the sense of terror will be reduced or even disappear, because it can be dealt with. How can it be scary? Secondly, in my personal opinion, the author did not make good use of the setting of Thousand Faces. For example, if in the first story, the person who could see the protagonist as a girl was not the fat guy accompanying him, but the anchor who had more roles, wouldn't it be more interesting? Looking at it now, the setting of Thousand Faces has no substantial meaning, that is, it is not used for the purpose, and it is just like an ordinary background setting. This is a pity in my opinion, and it is even a waste of this setting Then there is a problem with the rhythm of the plot. The whole feeling is very bland and not scary at all. , Chapter 70 adds a Taoist priest who kills supernatural beings with his mouth, and it becomes even less scary. The author has also read novels about air-conditioning, and he should also know what is scary about air-conditioning novels. The two most important points are the realistic writing style, and the setting that only supernatural beings can be used to deal with supernatural beings, because Chen Ge must conquer this setting first. Only a supernatural being can deal with supernatural beings. In addition, Chen Ge's own force value is not that he can directly deal with supernatural beings, but he can deal with things other than supernatural beings. For example, the Ghost Story Association. To put it simply, the protagonist must not be able to directly deal with supernatural beings, so that readers will be afraid of the situation that the protagonist faces, and the author's In addition to being able to directly deal with supernatural Taoist priests, the book also has a prop that is like a bug, offering incense As long as there is this thing, the protagonist will not face too scary situations, and the readers will not feel afraid. It is really a pity for this book to say so much. I hope the author can write better, come on

The Yang in Fatty's Eyes

I usually read reviews before reading a book. How can this author handle it?

What does "can't understand" mean? What are the benefits of receiving a tip? What's the benefit of tipping an anchor and being tricked? What is the main line of the story? I really don't understand. Can anyone explain it to me?

I finished reading it in one go. How come it's so popular? I can't write hundreds of chapters to keep my brothers happy🙄

Very well written, all booked, monthly tickets provided