Xuanhuan: From the Start, I Trick the Saintess into Joining the Demon Cult!

Author, I really admire you, as long as the girl who is good with the male protagonist is either dead or disabled, except Baoer. Also, I know that you wanted to give the male protagonist a exclusive setting, but it seemed that this setting was broken later by a girl from the Demon Rat Clan. Really, you either give the male protagonist a professional setting and don't change it, or you don't set it up in the first place. Otherwise, you may have a bit of a breakdown in the setting of the male protagonist later on, and you may also forcefully write down the two childhood sweethearts of the male protagonist. In fact, to be honest, sometimes it doesn't mean how exaggerated the plot is to make it interesting. At least others should feel comfortable when reading the novel. Your plot is uncomfortable for others to watch. Where do you get the traffic?

If you are single, you should not have an affair with another woman. If you have an affair, the female partner will be forced to die for the sake of the insurance policy setting. It's not so much about a single woman, but more about a stallion story that highlights the male and female partners.

Author, do you know why your book is obviously very good, but why no one reads it? I took a look at your comment section. In fact, there were a lot of newcomers who wanted to read it, but they were dismissed hahaha.

If you write about a harem, you should write about a harem. You want to believe those eunuch readers and write a single female protagonist. Regardless of genre, I don't understand what is wrong with some Qidian readers now. They all like novels without women, do they like to watch two men together, or do they like to watch someone wielding a knife to commit suicide? My personal opinion is that the readers who used to like harems are getting old, they no longer have the energy to see women, and they are annoyed when they see women. When they see the protagonist, they think of their own pain, so they all like women-free novels.

I specially set a starting point to scold you. What do you mean, you either write about a single female protagonist or a harem. It is so nondescript. I can tolerate writing so many female protagonists who like the male protagonist, but then the abuse starts directly. I really accepted it. You will definitely get better results in the harem book. Am I really a bastard?

The beginning is amazing. The villain is about to be killed by the heroine. He confesses his love to the heroine before he dies. The contrast between the heroine's concubine and Xiao Bai is very suitable to my taste. I am also going for this single heroine. The author has also written many female side characters in the back. I can understand it. In fact, it doesn't matter if the hero has a harem. It's just some manipulations by the author later. I have to use it. The character's death drives the plot, but the author also wrote it very decisively. It's good that the protagonist is also decisive in killing. However, there are many typos in the first part, which greatly affects the perception. In fact, if this novel is written along the sweet text, it will be quite good. The male protagonist has been away from home for many years, and the female protagonist has a difficult delivery of her second child. The compensation for returning home feels a bit...

I have been a bookworm for more than ten years and started reading again after giving up reading for four years! I used to be a fan of Third Uncle from the Southern School, Ergen, Mao Ni, Dancing, and Chen Dong. To be honest, since it is a free VIP reading, I am not qualified to say that the book is bad. I am just expressing some of my opinions on the book. As follows: I first saw a video about this novel on Douyin, and then quit reading novels after four years of teaching, so this novel was the target of my break. Overall, the beginning of the novel is very suspenseful. This is undeniable. It is more attractive to use the system to show that the male protagonist Jiang Han has a time-travel identity. However, the problem with the loopholes in the article is that the role of the system is man-made or a kind of creator existence. This cannot be verified. In addition, the male protagonist has no doubts about this. The last step is to integrate the system framework, which gives people a sense of haste. The reason is because the author should not have a framework and follow-up in advance, such as first in the form of a sect, and then the Great Inflammation. Dynasty, and the sudden appearance of Langya Kingdom and later Dashen, etc., Are to forcefully speed up the pace of the article in order to cultivate the protagonist. However, there are many supporting characters, but they are created quickly and without follow-up, and there is no value for the supporting characters. In addition, in the plot I watched recently, Zhou Baoer was summoned to the upper world, the problem of five national stones, was stolen and snatched too suddenly, and there is no more content after Zhou Baoer regained his memory, all show that the author is a bit too fast. In addition, there is a problem with the character setting, disguise technique, voice, and the name of the protagonist. Why can't we do without Jiang Han or Jiang every time? There is a problem with the nature of a traitor. In addition, the description of the skills is too outrageous. It seems that if you go to an enemy country to be a traitor, you will be like a fool and can't find the problem. In addition, there are supporting characters. Whether it is a girl who has a relationship with Jiang Han or not, the protagonist is deliberately described as having an affair with the girls around him, but he also deliberately emphasizes that he has a wife, so the character's personality does not match. In addition, Introducing Ye Chen as the king of the harem to set off Jiang Han felt like he was setting up a memorial arch. In the end, he was a little eager to achieve success in terms of cultivation, opportunities, and upgrading. Overall, the author is of a higher standard compared to the flow-style novels, but may not have enough experience to write this. There is also a lack of coherence in the narrative of the plot, and the lack of distinction and system structure between fantasy martial arts and fairy novels. Finally, there is not enough detail in the connection of the article and the digging and filling of holes. It can be written slowly, and it will be better if the content is fuller!

It shouldn't be posted on the starting point, Tomato is about the same

To be honest, I can only use four words to express "a complete mess". 1. Have you filled the kingfisher's pit? I was resurrected and went to Sakura Country. Have you filled in this pit? No? 2. What does the male protagonist think of that rat girl? Since leaving that place, the hero has never mentioned her. 3. There is also the girl in the brothel who died in an unknown way. She just simply liked the male protagonist and you killed her directly before even ten chapters. 4. Another thing is that Jiang Han's second wife seems to have died of old age. 5. What happened to Jiang Han's third son in the end? The early stage of this novel is really good. This novel, starting from the sect, looks a bit like a fairy tale at the beginning, and then the plot becomes a bit like a martial arts novel, and then it becomes a bit like a dynasty. But what is inevitable is that when you continue writing, you will abandon the previous taste, which makes it look very messy. Also, the setting of your novel is actually very large. You also wrote that the male protagonist Jiang Han traveled back in time, and then Jiang Han found the old grandfather on the earth during the holiday, or found the bug of the time travel. This also shows that the earth and that world are actually in the same universe. Alas, it was a pity that I wanted to write more...

His writing is actually pretty good, although it's a little bit toxic, but I feel like he's getting better and better the more he writes. All in all, it's quite interesting, but it's a little overwhelming to see how popular it is. . .