Douluo Dalu: Rewriting Memories, Every Goddess Chases After Me

I think the starting point is a bit limited in your subject matter. Have you considered other websites and writing something that everyone likes to read (dog head saves life)

The male protagonist is a green slave. He cuts off Bibi Dong's beard in advance, and Cao steals the little dancing mother. But at this time, A Yin's beard can be cut off. Instead of cutting off A Yin's beard, A Yin and Tang Hao have a child. No matter how awesome it is, isn't this a green slave? The author pushes girls to others and then takes them away. I really can't stand it.

This book belongs to the kind of book that you won't wear when you see a pair of good shoes, but you have to let others wear them first before they look like bad shoes. It's great!

I'm a little speechless. The protagonist has been boasting for a long time, but it's just a three-hundred-year soul ring?

Too lazy to say anything, just take a look for yourselves

I still have some opinions to mention. It stands to reason that the author has a fan before, which shouldn't be the case. It's a bit toxic. These chapters are all about Bibi Dong and Yu Xiaogang. Although I know that I want to torture Yu Xiaogang, but there will be too many scenes. You don't dare to fall out with Qianxunji. I understand. Yu Xiaogang, why are you still having an affair with him? I really don't understand that as a fan writer, you shouldn't know what others are reading, and it can be seen that you know. Seeing 20 chapters here, it is not possible, but if you can turn the tide later, I apologize to you and hope the author can improve. After all, it is hard to find Douluo fans now, and there are no good QQ people commenting on your own love. It is indeed almost the same. Yu Xiaogang has more scenes than the protagonist, so why not restart it? I'm just making an objective evaluation, I'm not going to criticize you. The book is really not good, so do your best

Shen Nong's Test of Poison: No Thanks The story is wrong, the plot I wrote is forgotten, the time is confusing, and there are all kinds of repetitions. Poisonous Point: The Three Lives Martial Soul is very dramatic. The exposed seventh soul skill of the Death Scythe Martial Soul, the Martial Soul Avatar, has to be changed to a beast soul avatar's name or some kind of mantis giant price drop. The harem poison is that the previous generation and the next generation are poisonous, and the plot is not explained in any detail and is forced to be written in various ways. The timeline is so confusing that in one chapter, Qian Renxue can be born twice, as a newborn baby because Bibi Dong was named Bibi Dong, and in the next chapter, the maid's belly will be reborn in 10 months, as if it is funny. After being reborn, I studied memory implantation for one month, Bibi Dong made a breakthrough in cultivation for half a year and went to find him for one month, then she awakened her martial soul and added her first soul ring for one month, then jumped three years, then went to Tiandou, ate fairy grass, and jumped to the plan for Qian Renxue to be born smoothly. The most outrageous thing is that Qian Renxue is only 3 years older than Tang San. How many years have you jumped? Have you forgotten the timeline you wrote when you changed the settings? The original setting has been changed by you, 9 years old, level 21, 13 years old Soul Saint~ Please taste it carefully, taste it slowly, I will help you solve the pitfall of Bibi Dong knowing about Dugu Bo, memory implantation, no thanks, stop writing, there is no achievement

You used Xier's photo to trick people into coming in, right?

Why don't you find someone similar to yourself for Qian Xunji? Do you have a brain problem? Damn it, if you want Qian Renxue, why don't you just have a child with the male protagonist? Then it's your own child, and you can take care of someone else's child? Is Bibi Dong such a fool? Raising a child that has no blood relationship with her but is the child of her enemy. She could almost kill her own daughter, let alone the daughter of Qian Xunji who is not her biological child. I knew at a glance that the author wanted Qian Renxue to be the male protagonist. Why is this necessary?

I can't stand it when I go to A Yin. You can be a villain, doing evil and robbing people, or you can be a good person, playing pure love or harem. But you chose to write the protagonist as a disgusting thing who instigates other people's marriages, claiming that he likes beautiful wives. This kind of protagonist is trash who is disgusted by both the villain and the protagonist.