Marvel's Dark Spider

The author wanted to write a cold male god, but there were too many descriptions of women, and the protagonist was unbearable and superficial, making him look like a loser. As a result, the protagonist turned into a cold and cold loser (frost goblin).

How should I put it? The creativity is very good, but the writing is so poor. Sometimes it reads like a false statement. The whole article feels like a running account and does not make people want to read it.

It came for the Black Shadow Corps, but it didn't work. The introduction is also written by Black Shadow Corps

Thanks for the comments. The concept and content of this book are okay, but as other readers have said, the writing is too poor and not vivid. This novel is more like some kind of game simulator than a novel. It just narrates the story, without a sense of substitution, and is dull.

The ideas are eye-catching, but the content is blinding.

Come on, you're Spider-Man, shouldn't you use your fists and webbing? What kind of knife are you playing with?

Good setting, interesting plot, how did the author turn the material into bricks? Some comments are more interesting than the main text, just like a person who wrote a paper based on connections and got an outline from a great master. And there are also typos (´-ωก`)

Get the spider suit? It's up to you, you can choose for yourself🤣🤣

Chapter 7: What the hell? Do you think a lot of people are chasing you and want to keep some of the essence and throw away the impurities?

Well written, but a bit nonsense

The writing in the studio is written like a running account, but something is wrong no matter how you look at it.

Well written, please try your best to code! I'm still waiting to see 👍

You write too much nonsense and have too many mental activities,

No, it didn't even introduce at the beginning whether the protagonist is a time traveler or something!

No matter what other people say, I like it very much anyway, and I hope it can exceed 2 million! ! !

He revealed all his abilities in one fell swoop!

I've read Chapter 24 now. I don't know what the meaning of your writing is. It makes me feel like the protagonist has no soul.

Come on, author, this book is just an exercise for you, but it's better than mine.

The writing is very good, but there is too little. It would be great if it could be updated twice.

One recommendation ticket per day

After seeing Chapter 44, what should I say? Try your best next time!