Dayao Is a Demon Who Helps His Younger Brother

The protagonist weighs only 80 kilograms and is as tall as a hairball. If anyone beats him, all he needs to do is use strength to overpower James.

Although the protagonist is lazy, the author is not lazy at all Writing one sentence after another of nonsense that readers are not interested in It is indeed not necessary at all, and writing is not your strong point. Just make the story good-looking.

This guy. . . . Do you think the NBA is run by your own company? . . . . .

In addition to completing the task, you don't want to play. Even if you are very good in the end, what's the point? If you don't want to play basketball, it seems like someone is forcing you every day, so you have money to do other things. The same problem was with the last book. The book is actually good. You always engage in non-mainstream activities. You wrote about playing in your 30s, which made many people depressed. Wouldn't it be better if you put a little more effort into writing this book? The style is different. You can write whatever you want, but it should be more enjoyable! Personal suggestions, for reference only

I have written several books, but I still have no common sense at all, and the dialogue is stinky, long, and full of nonsense. Do you really watch football? If you don't have the ability, just change your profession. After working for so long, you still don't know your ability?

After looking at more than a dozen pictures, I am still introducing the properties, this water. . .

You are such a fucking talent! Dayao's twin brother, standard version and pocket version 😰 Dayao has a shoehorned face. Can you still see the face in the standard version, but can you see the face in the pocket version?

You created a new way of writing. You pooped ten chapters. You made the story bad in the first ten chapters, which lowered the evaluation of the whole book by 10 points.

This is too long-winded and the various descriptions are so nonsense. I only read two or three chapters and my head hurts.

The description of the game is so thorough that two to three hundred words of nonsense are inserted between every action of the players. From the psychological activities of opponents to teammates to coaches, to old memories, to tactical analysis, the coherent and tense plot of the game is written sparsely, and there are also witty remarks that are thought to be humorous.

The creativity is quite good, but there is too much nonsense, verbosity, self-pleasure mode, let's go!

The publishing rights of more than a dozen novels can be exchanged for more than 100,000 yuan. It is not a one-time transaction of so many books. The setting is very bad. It is easy to make money after becoming famous. Paper books were still popular in the 1990s. If you reach 10% of Huang Yi's, you can still have enough food and clothing.

It's 150,000 words and the protagonist hasn't shown the ability to survive in the NBA 😒

If you can't even write online novels well, writing American drama scripts will be a bigger problem. Different cultural systems will test your thinking and writing skills.

Three chapters, I really can't stand it anymore.

Not suitable for basketball fans, but suitable for people who are semi-savvy.

To be honest, I don't know what I read. I don't like this way of writing.

What's going on? Chapters are always repeated.

There are too many typos, and sometimes I just can't understand them. Why don't you correct them?