I Cut Off My Son's Basketball System

Let me tell you a few points. First, you can see that the author is a newcomer. Second, the entry point is amazing and the writing style is okay. Third, it is the reason why I posted this article. The poisonous point is to predict the ranking of the draft. This point is too poisonous. Your registration is not over yet. How did you know those people? You said you predicted the top ten in the first round. Even if it is in the top twenty, you can come back. After all, they are still popular rookies and they have already confirmed their participation. This kind of toxicity is not bad, but not too poisonous. If you do it all, it will be poisonous and explosive. I hope the author will revise it early, otherwise there will be many people who want to quit. After all, there are only so many people who read basketball articles. They are switching between several books. To be honest, the NBA rules and conditions are relatively clear. And the bet should be real, don't make any fancy things, just be honest and say that this year's team is the last one in the second round. After all, you have to go to the summer league to level up. Generally speaking, the head coach and general manager don't care much about this position in the second half of the second round. And pig's feet are as young as the NBA. Although there are more than 30 rookies in the NBA, almost all of them are already famous stars. They didn't come for various reasons. For a novice in their 30s, I can only say that I can't complain. I suggest that it should be changed to something smaller and more appropriate. . . This is what I saw and summarized here. I hope the author can make the changes at least a little more reasonable and not create conflicts like this. . . I also hope that the author can write better and better

The writing is a bit too procrastinating, and the main plot is too slow, which may block some readers... Another thing is that some characteristics of the male protagonist can be revealed, such as height and weight. If there is a blow, it should be given some sweetness~ Now it is all a blow...

Before Chapter 48, this book seemed very exciting and eye-catching. After Chapter 48, I deliberately suppressed the pig's trotter IQ. A player is doing the job of an excellent scout. He is very capable and spends his own money to do things for the team. He can only get a basic salary and is not for sale. Is this a deliberate insult to the pig's trotter's intelligence or to the reader's intelligence? Interesting? Is this setting interesting to the author? Also, this novel has no passionate commentary, no passionate collisions, no hard training, no enthusiastic scenes, no comments from media fans, no endless trash talk, nothing! There is nothing!

The pace is a bit slow. If it is explained in three chapters, the protagonist is a retired wrestling and Sanda athlete. He is in good physical condition and is about two meters tall. He is thirty-five years old. He has retired. His wife has run away. His son is sick and needs treatment. He has gone to the United States. He has no money for treatment. Because he met Why did Yiyong get to know NBA executives and introduce him to the team's work of cleaning and helping to pick up balls, and then the system was credited. The character of the protagonist is perseverance, hard work, defense, fighting, doing dirty work, and grabbing rebounds, just like Rodman. Isn't it interesting?

The more realistic the previous writing is, the more unbearable this poisonous point will be. Does the author understand what it means to successfully predict all picks? If you can successfully predict most of them, it means that you know all the NBA teams well and know all the inside information, and understand the thoughts of all team owners, managers and coaches. You can even get into their heads and understand everything about them, including their draft strategies, and what choices they will make in a very short time when encountering unexpected situations, and they themselves do not even know what they will do in that situation! ! ! ! ! Predict them all successfully? That only means you can see the future! ! ! Using a procrastinating and slow plot to reflect authenticity, and then using an incredible plot to overturn it?

The protagonist is only in his 30s, but his character is like that of a 60-year-old farmer. He stutters and grinds on doing things. I really felt like vomiting blood after reading the first 10 chapters. Aren't you in your prime in your 30s? Even if you are old for playing basketball, it cannot be because you have a bad personality.

This is not unconventional, this is too poisonous. The author's first two books were okay, why did he write them like this?

. . . After seeing the age of the protagonist, I have no desire to continue reading.

You can still play basketball in your 30s. This setting is too fake.

Rory, you are so embarrassed, and you are deliberately suppressing it. Go and read Dong Wangyi's, that's how exciting it is from beginning to end. Why is it so stressful to read a basketball novel? It's so depressing.

The author goes too far in self-pleasure. There is no future in being verbose and procrastinating.

Did the author write it for himself? The first five chapters are enough to put off most readers. If you want to make some money from your novel, you'd better change it.

New theme, it feels like your eyes are shining brightly

If you want to play basketball in your 30s and want to enter the NBA, you have to perform amazingly. You are already at your peak at the age of 27. It can be said that you are at the end of your career in your 30s. It is basically impossible for other teams to want you, unless you are an indispensable championship puzzle.

I feel that the points system is ridiculous. There are too few basic points, the task points may be exaggerated, and the overall points distribution is unbalanced. A victory in an NBA-level game only requires 20 points. So, a complete victory in 82 games in the NBA season only yields 1,640 points. A complete victory in the regular season in twenty years only yields 32,800 points. The pig's feet are already over 30 years old. These millions of points are an impossible task!

My only expectation for this book is that my son will participate in the college draft and compete with his father on the same stage. Judging from the speed of updates, it will probably be a long time ago.

Just by reading the introduction, I knew that this book would be a must-have in this day and age.

Does the author like Korean women so much that he must write about it? After reading dozens of chapters, I still don't know whether the protagonist is a ball player or a busker. Where is the ink on what?

Brother, please update more... I am very optimistic about such a good book. Although it is not very popular, I will support it if I can every month. I hope it will become more and more exciting. There will be rewards every month in the future. I hope the author can persevere.

It seems that there are a lot of NBA fans on the sports channel. No wonder they are not afraid of boycotts.

The novel angle and the delicate writing style are very attractive. I hope the updates will be more effective. Please add more.

It feels a bit like a novice novel. I read the ninety chapters patiently. There are problems with the background setting of the protagonist of the novel, and there will be logical conflicts with the subsequent plots. There are many unreasonable places. The interesting points in the previous chapters are not particularly well captured. I don't know if the paid chapters have improved. Generally speaking, I can read it. Old authors usually have flashes in their writings, so I'll just keep it for now.

It's very sad. It's a really good basketball article. It's no worse than the complaints. Why is it not so popular?

Write about Korea. . . I feel that the absence of this plot will not affect the development of the book. Why must I write it? It feels quite disgusting.

I saw the latest I'm telling the truth. The more I look at it, the less interesting it becomes. It feels like I'm not far away from abandoning the book. Hey, mouse tail juice.

The book is pretty good. You set the protagonist to be too old, which makes it difficult to write! It's time to retire in a few years, and I'll probably become a eunuch. I've been raising eunuchs for a while. The basic settings cannot be too outrageous, otherwise there will be more and more poisonous points. What a pity this book is.

Niubi

The sexy operation is about to begin, the real protagonist Xiaofeng is about to appear

Very good, writes true feelings

This book is surprisingly good. It doesn't have a too brainless plot. It's food and can be eaten. Those who are short on books can read it. I just feel that the author may not have done a good job in publicity. I originally wanted to dive, but I just couldn't bear it. According to the number of chapters, it is almost on the shelves. Not many people will read it. I hope the author can run it well. (5 yuan per article, delete this article)