I'm an NBA Goalkeeper

The title of the book is good for highlighting and attracting readers. The flaw is that the description limits the protagonist's development space, making people mistakenly think that the protagonist (in the future) is a defender. I don't know if the author has an outline. Will the protagonist change from a defensive blue-collar player to a star player with both offense and defense, or will he be a top-notch defensive player with a second-rate or higher offense? In general, most people prefer offense to defense. If the protagonist does not transform, this book can only gain the attention of a small number of readers. After reading the latest chapter, I felt that the author's handling of interpersonal relationships was okay. The potential female protagonist was not quickly won by the male protagonist, but the plot was progressed relatively steadily, which was well received. There are also interpersonal relationships in the alliance, just two or three ordinary friends, which is okay. In addition to the need for the plot to make Zhang Yanan and his wife have a closer relationship with the male protagonist, the overall description of interpersonal relationships is better. It is not like some cool novels where the protagonist just takes the lead casually, which is very fake.

If the starting lineup doesn't change from the previous one, don't write it down. Also, the height.

Good brother, please hurry up. It's not enough.

You can change the title of the book to "The NBA Journey of Mentally Retarded Children"

I feel that the author describes the protagonist's heart as too cowardly. After reading basketball articles for so long, I have never seen anyone who was traded by the team cry in front of others and feel all kinds of grievances. Is it necessary to write like this?

This is the story of a mentally retarded man who used the system to cause chaos in the NBA.

After a season is over, you can consider adding some heroine, daily life, exercise, encounters, and other plots. If it is always a game and you watch too much, you may get bored. It is okay to add some plots appropriately (ps: don't be too watery). Personal advice, don't spray if you don't like it.

I cried because of the Mavericks trade 😥😥😥😥How many giant babies can do such a thing? The author said that he is a bookworm in his 10s and doesn't understand this common sense?

This book is surprisingly good. It doesn't have a too brainless plot. It's food and can be eaten. Those who are short on books can read it. I just feel that the author may not have done a good job in publicity. I originally wanted to dive, but I couldn't help it. According to the number of chapters, it is almost on the shelves. Not many people will read it. I hope the author can run it well.

It's too slow and it feels like the protagonist was written by the author as a fool. Defense requires experience, but dunking doesn't. The physical quality of the protagonist can be improved. Attack the rim in one step. It's also easy to pick and roll, as long as your body is wide enough and your feet are stable enough. Also, the football goalkeeper has a hand to throw the ball, so the penalty difference is understandable, but it would be strange if he couldn't score even one of 10 goals. At least he could score 3 out of 10.

I hate bad guys. In the Yankee NBA, they would rather be suspended for dozens of games than be tough. They would dunk on your head and be tough from the front. Are you still embarrassed? If you give Du a helping hand, you will be treated favorably, but you can use your face to show off your face.

I'm vomiting. I suggest you add some IQ.

Seeing Chapter 21, the protagonist has gone to the NBA. With such a good body, wouldn't the coach know how to get into the palace? Just grab the rebound and just dunk it. . . . Is the author trying to force his wits down?

The data of 25+15+3 is not worth 30+5+3? ? ? Still far behind? ? ? ? Really funny,

But after more than a hundred chapters, why is this protagonist still acting like a fool, with his IQ and EQ being ridiculously low? A girl pops up at every turn. You can write that the protagonist is pretending to be stupid, but you still need to add a psychological description of the protagonist to tell us that he is not pretending, but that he is really stupid. Several female characters exposed the protagonist's lack of emotional intelligence, and the scene where All-Stars licked Rose even showed off his IQ. It's okay for the author to like Rose, but arranging the protagonist All-Star to grab rebounds and pass them to the opponent is really touching. This book is probably the end of it. I hope that when starting a new story, I can write an outline first, at least list the character traits of the protagonist and then develop the plot around it, and don't make some illogical things. There are not many sports articles to read, so I hope there will be another good author.

The author must first understand the NBA, release the physical test of the protagonist, and directly draft him in the first round. A lot of times team managers take bets, especially on rebuilding teams. Talent is No. 1. Talent is the upper limit, skill is the lower limit.

Why are your writings getting more and more stupid? Forget it, just write yours.

After reading some previous comments, it seems that the results are not very good... I skipped watching, the rhythm is indeed too problematic, and some settings are also problematic... To put it briefly The protagonist's dual quotient is a bit low. Didn't I start watching the video when I entered the league? The basic tactics should be able to run, but it took a month or two to understand the basic concepts, blocking There are problems with poor pick-picking and poor offensive ability... The other protagonist naturally likes to defend, which is fine, but you only know the feeling of dunking on the court... The system is too weakened and basically useless. There is a badge in the middle of the plot (I feel that I can know the technical characteristics by checking it before the game), and it is too stupid, basically In addition to competition, this is competition (and I really haven't grown up. I just want to say, can I unlock more badges? Is it okay to upgrade the badges... Can some of the skills be passed on to the system, so that the protagonist can really learn it? Olajuwon can become a super giant in more than two years. This protagonist will probably wait until 077 to see... And there is a big problem, the author should also know the previous one There are some problems in the chapter, but they have not been repaired. I think few people can see the protagonist learning to dunk... Also, the player's numerical value is too ridiculous. This rating is Lei, the driver with defects in his peak period is 180, and the Spark's free throw is 185?

The more I watch it, the more embarrassing it becomes. I cried when I was traded. What's the use of being so big? I don't believe that someone who has practiced football and sports since childhood doesn't know what the NBA is about. The more I watch it, the more I feel that the protagonist is a mentally retarded child.

Looking at the title, NBA goalkeeper, my first impression is that the protagonist should be the best in the NBA. If you are better than the protagonist, you have the capital to enter the NBA. If you are not better than the protagonist, you will not be able to do it. In daily games, the protagonist's mantra is "Welcome to the NBA."

The off-field plot is too disgusting, and it won't be so bad if you have some snacks and learn something from TV. I really wanted to delete this book when I read it at the end. My eyes feel strengthened

Specific content, Big Fool's NBA journey

After reading Chapter 20, the setting is very good, but the main character is forced to lose his mind, and the author doesn't even understand the rules of basketball. I'm convinced.

Find a factory to work in

The number of words in the entire article is as low as that of a pig's feet and a retard.

Don't look at it, it's extremely toxic, and there's no sense of immersion at all. People who have never played basketball will directly participate in the draft. What are you thinking?

It makes people not like it. What the hell is that after Chapter 200? What kind of concert is it? Isn't it embarrassing?

This is Slam Dunk 2008, China's Sakuragi Hanamichi travels to the United States!

I bought it too early, the back part is so bad, the heroine is so annoying, like a madman, the back part is completely unwatchable

I am super, big spring, the sense of substitution is -20, the sense of immersion in 216 is -30, Chapter 4, I am retired and still have to be kidnapped, poisonous, running away with a bag, this book is called, My Slave Life