Hunter: Rise of Meteor Street

The writing is very good. I feel that the protagonist is very similar to Chrollo. He is cold and charming. Will Hisoka still face the brigade?

The top evil boy band in Hunter World does not accept refutation.

One of my favorite characters in Hunter—Kurapika

Munro

I simply read a few chapters. How should I put it? It feels a bit like reading a dark European and American fairy tale. The character depictions are a bit flat, but the battle scenes are well written. There is room for improvement. I will save it now.

The new book "Hunter's Scourge" has been published and will continue the plot of this book. If you don't want to give up and want to continue to follow it, you can save this book and read it. (Actually, I didn't plan to re-open a new book so soon, but after reading other hunter fanfics, I felt that it was not interesting, it was not very ridiculous, it was not very violent, it was not very dark, and it was better to blow off the water by myself.)

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I think Hunter, this work, this anime, this manga. There are a few points that attract viewers and readers the most. The first point is the ability to read, the balance of the ability, and the various strange uses of the ability. The second point is the world view, the addictive world view and the direction of the story. The third point is the characterization and description. In comics and animations, it should be better called characterization, maybe the psychological description of various characters and the description of battle scenes. Etc. As readers, we may not be able to help with the structure and direction of the story, as well as the characterization and psychological description. One reason is because the author already has an outline and the like, and the other is a matter of writing skills. I have no choice but to practice this on my own. But as for reading ability, if the author needs it greatly, I think as a reader, I can help the author with ideas and so on. For now, I am reading it with a book-by-book attitude. I hope the author can continue to work hard💪

Look at the special department.

I finally found a fanfic of the hunter of the pro-troupe group. The author must work hard.

Now that I have decided to stop here, let me summarize my feelings. The first is the problem of the protagonist's telekinesis. I personally think that what attracts me most when watching Hunter fan fiction is the protagonist's telekinesis ability. The more bizarre the better, the more bizarre the better, and the more fun it can be played, the better it looks. For example, Kate's reading and Nakuru's reading I think are very interesting. So I don't ask you to create a trait system. At least it should be a transformation system or a materialization system. As for the enhancement system and the release system of telekinesis, I think it is meaningless. In your book, the telekinesis ability of the main character in your book is only a flame fist. In a human-shaped little sun similar to Feitan, I have no sense of expectation at all. The second thing is the arrangement of the plot. I said I can't wait for the story of the Demon King... The early growth part is too long. You want to write a protagonist who grows steadily and slowly, and slowly learns many tricks through exercise and plot. However, readers will not give you this time. If your golden three chapters do not have enough attractive abilities and adventures, many people will not have the patience to read on. Furthermore, although you have laid some foreshadowings and written some angles that were not written by the old thief at the time, the biggest problem with originality is that there is no reader base. If there are no characters or plots that readers are familiar with for too long, many people will be at a loss and slowly either keep up or give up. The third problem is the writing style. A buddy also said it before. The plot seems dry. Although there are dialogues and content advancement, I do feel that it is relatively stiff. One is the language, and the other is the image creation of various protagonists and supporting characters. The image is not established. Except for the few people in the brigade, I have almost no deep impression of the other supporting characters. The author still has to work hard in this regard. I hope you can write better in your next book. See you soon.

The old thief seems to be ready to update. I hope those who write fan fiction can stick to it.

The author mentioned the Demon King, will he write about the Demon King later? I haven't read the fanfic about Demon King yet?

It's been a long time since anyone wrote about a hunter. The author is very attentive and has improved and extended many of the things that were mentioned briefly in the comics. There are no flaws in the logic. It can be seen that a lot of thought was put into it. As for the plot, I can't tell much at the early stage. There is still a lot of room for the experience of each member of the brigade to be used in the early stage. Please write a longer letter. I really like that fool. So far, there are no problems with the clues in the original work. Some of the plots in the original part are a little awkward, but it is not a big problem. Overall it is worth looking forward to, come on!

The author must not stop updating, I am your biggest fan.

With support, it's not easy. There are very few writers writing about hunters. I hope the author will persevere.

Come on. At least it's another one.

The recommendation vote has been cast. There are very few hunter fics that I feel are well written. Come on, the author.

Hisoka

More from the author I will keep it first

It's a sentimental book. The author has an extremely deep understanding of the original work so that he can write this kind of re-creation (not a novice fan). I can't design a complicated plot. I just wrote about hunters because the telekinesis power system is interesting and the hunter world is interesting. The protagonist is born purely to pursue the highest realm and only pursues power.

Waiting for the update, will there be any crossover with the main comic line?

In the ant chapter, there is something that the old thief really wants to express: the fragility of life and the complexity of human beings.

The protagonist is not prominent. Write more around the protagonist.

Let me ask a question, is Nitro's Hundred-Style Guanyin a concrete and real object, or is it more of a mind-infused punch or a "hard" attack method, because the strengthening system does not require a big move. There is no Guanyin statue in Baishi Guanyin, it is just an imaginary image. The reason why you can see it behind the Ant King is because the two are partially synchronized?

The masterpiece has been collected, read it slowly!

The fighting was well written, the protagonist did not stand out, it felt like it was a group show, and Sean felt like Toguro was indiscriminately involved.

This book feels very strange Who is the protagonist?

Hey, it's over? ? ? Funny me. . . Uncomfortable.

There is a plot, and the story is logically connected. The author often uses narrative writing, which seems okay. But when it comes to the dialogue between characters, it seems very dry. It's so dry that every dialogue is necessary for the normal progression of the plot, but it just feels like it's ineffective. It's like two frigid people holding a script and comparing lines, which makes the whole text feel soft and sluggish. It's kind of like the author arranged the time, place and characters, and then threw in a cause, and the plot began to flow naturally like water, but it was too natural, and the story seemed to have no ups and downs.