Swallowed Star: Opening the Heavens

I always feel that the author is trying to find trouble for the protagonist in order not to participate in the Genius Battle The domain requires five types of cities to upgrade, and there are still a lot of obstacles It is said that he does not want the protagonist to understand it too easily… And even the increase in understanding of the laws of such a domain is not the same Space Law It's the same as being slow The shortcoming of the protagonist's plug-in is to use time talent In terms of time, there is nothing to say to increase the difficulty of the protagonist's training It's normal to have to give up But the protagonist's space talent is not even as good as Bolan, so that's too much With or without this plug-in, it makes no difference

Leave a mark! When I saw Chapter 40, it was too bland, with no passion at all, and it was obviously a pig's foot! In addition, you did not write about the genetic level in the original setting, but you wrote about the soul and physical qualities that are beyond your own level. How is this different from the genetic level in the original work? Isn't this the genetic level? But since the author didn't follow the original plot, he probably wanted to write something of his own, so go for it!

The setting is so magical that it devours the original work. The original work sets the world beast to devour the original universe to a certain extent, and the original will turn into the original, but the original will may die. In other words, the realm beasts cannot destroy the original universe at all, but can only seriously damage the original universe.

The clone is a gift from the universe, right? A cosmic-level secret method to create a clone? I'm afraid the Lord of the Universe, who has no clones in the entire universe, will come and kill him 😅

There is a small bug. In the Devouring Starry Sky, as long as the mental power is not exhausted, the mental power is two small levels higher than the physical quality. Only when the potential is exhausted, the mental power will be at the same level as or even surpassed by the physical quality.

The universe that appeared together with Luo Feng and the other three. Luo Feng is already in Chaos City. The protagonist is still working hard in the training camp to rise to the ninth level of the Star. As one of the five giants of the human race, Virtual Universe Company. It takes 10 years to train a special genius from the third planetary level to the ninth level!

Personally, I think there is really no need to detail the growth history of the male protagonist in fan fiction. The feeling of reading it is not much different from that of the original novel. Even if you create many plots yourself, you cannot escape the setting of the original plot. Then, compare it with the growth rate of the protagonist. In the novel, the protagonist improves much faster than others. Well, there is no male protagonist in the fan fiction that improves more than the main character. The character is slow, and it feels like using various plug-ins to forcibly improve the male protagonist's strength. It feels boring while reading. When writing fan fiction, it is best to arrange the male protagonist in the protagonist's first few decades. It is best to write a behind-the-scenes story. Don't grow up with the protagonist at the beginning and then leave the protagonist behind and then play behind the scenes. It is really boring.

At the first level of the Gold Domain, I wanted to combine hardness and softness, so I went to understand the Water Domain. The Law of Gold itself is correct and can be fully understood. Why can't we just understand the Law of Gold? Is the Law of Gold wrong for you? There must be water to be the correct Law of Gold? And only by understanding the Law of the Five Elements can one advance to the second level of the field. What is this setting? Why don't others need it? According to you, the Five Elements are not all the laws. Why not go hand in hand when there is still time? Why should the Five Elements advance to the next level?

Come on, don't read book reviews. Some people will criticize books regardless of whether they are good or not.

The protagonist has been in the training camp for decades and has no secrets or guidance? Author, do you want to read what you are writing?