Hongyun's Life Simulator

Tell me your thoughts after reading it. First, the imagination is very good. Among many ancient works, the imagination is more attractive. Secondly, the writing style is acceptable, much better than many novice novels. Third, there are too many typos, and the author has been stubborn about not correcting them, resulting in a reduced sense of substitution. Fourth, the protagonist is a bit too naive, has a low IQ, does not show the abilities of an innate god and demon, and does not use the simulator well, resulting in a lack of enjoyment. Fifth, the setting of this book is confusing and there is no detailed and unified standard. Sixth, the protagonist always takes one step at a time and goes with the flow. It seems that his ability is not as good as that of an ordinary adult. He also changes his own plan over and over again without making a plan to use the simulator. Seventh, the plot can barely keep up with the author's imagination. The plot in the first thirty chapters is so poor that it is not attractive at all. If I hadn't insisted on reading about chapter 40 and saw the author's special settings about various calamities in the ancient world and the so-called mastermind behind the scenes, this kind of imagination attracted me and made me endure typos and the protagonist's embarrassing performance to read on. I would have deleted the book and left. Finally, I hope the author can see it. There are not many other requirements. Please correct the typos.

I found that this kind of simulator novel has a common problem, that is, the protagonist is the center of the world, everyone wants to kill the protagonist, everyone is a conspirator, the protagonist will be killed during the simulation, and they like to suppress the protagonist. For example, in this novel, Hongyun has practiced for more than 20,000 years without making any progress. It is so speechless. According to the normal settings of Honghuang novels, Hongyun is born innately. How can his qualifications be poor? If it is really so poor, how can he cultivate to a quasi-sage? Let's not talk about it, let's just go to the picture. Chapter 4: Death due to poison, so we can get together and part ways, and hide away.

Pangu didn't leave even a hint of a backup plan. This novel wrote about Pangu in a trashy way.

Alas, chaos. Obviously there have been so many opportunities to swap out four lotus pads to synthesize treasures due to bugs, but I ended up with a bunch of white lotuses and purple lotuses. I can't change them in Zixiao Palace. Do I know if I can change them after leaving Zixiao Palace? Hongjun just gave it to you and you asked for it in front of others. I'm afraid you've never been beaten before. Isn't the integration of the Four Lotus Platforms more powerful than the integration of the twenty-four heavens of Nao Shizi? Each lotus platform is originally one step away from the treasure level. It takes two deduction opportunities, one to exchange the Hongmeng Purple Qi for the Golden Lotus of Merit, and the other to exchange the Red Lotus of Karma with the Styx. It is as difficult as a hammer. Since you have set that the twenty-four heavens are innate treasures, then you should know that the innate treasures cannot be broken even by saints. But since you have also set that the treasures can be broken, you still use up all the opportunities by getting those beads. Isn't this nonsense? It took so many opportunities to understand the power of the law once. You don't want the law but the beads, which is even more nonsense. Knowing that this pile of magic weapons can't help you avoid being killed, if you insist on confronting Zhuzi and White Lotus and Purple Lotus, you will be shocked. There are two people in the ancient world who cannot die, Ming He and Zhen Yuanzi. The ancient world can be broken into pieces, but the two of them absolutely cannot die. The cause and effect of the death of either of them is no worse than the cause and effect of Hongjun and Luohu's bombing of the west. Whoever kills someone, even a saint cannot bear the consequences. Also, even though I know that I will still die as a pimp, I won't say anything about arranging Queen Mother Xi to marry Zhen Yuanzi. After leaving the Zixiao Palace, I still have to arrange Xi and Changxi to marry the ancestral witch. I won't say that the union of lunar and sun is inevitable. Let two goddesses marry two goddesses. What a reckless man, this is just as outrageous as you marrying two rich and beautiful women to marry beggars on the street. The key is that they are so happy, and the protagonist himself gets a little bit of merit and a rubbish magic weapon... And then he happily repeats this operation several times... Outrageous. Finally, it was rare to see clearly who wanted to kill me, and I also knew that the other person was also a quasi-saint. As a result, the protagonist of the memory did not want it, and instead asked for the duplicate magic weapon... Knowing that he would not be able to advance to the mid-stage quasi-sage in the next 100,000 years, he did not take advantage of the opportunity to get the memory to kill the other person, and he went to ask for the duplicate magic weapon. After reading more than a dozen chapters, there were so many questions and the same operations were repeated over and over again. I even fell asleep once while reading. If possible, I hope the author can change the problems I mentioned. You can not have a female protagonist, but don't do this kind of pimping behavior. Most readers are from the perspective of the protagonist. The protagonist's behavior of giving the two lunar goddesses to the ancestral witch is very terrible.

I'm just confused. In this prehistoric era you set up, he is already a Daluo Jinxian, but he hasn't understood the laws yet, so what is he cultivating?

The most rubbish novel, the author can go to the factory to punch screws instead of writing a novel

From my point of view, if Hongyun has such an IQ, he really shouldn't become a saint.

The author is too good. Currently, the author has written fifty-eight chapters, and the useful content is only a dozen chapters at most.

It is true that Shui and Hongyun were not stupid to death by themselves, but by the author.

Just this kind of simulator? What do you think Sanqing Tiandao uses to calculate the world? They are all born with their own simulators. The last simulation result is different from the next time. Do you think they will do this?