The Dungeon Descended and I Became the Demon King Archon

Should I say it was no accident or should I express regret? From the discovery of the treasure of the next hero to the completion of the sacrifice of the hero, I watched Silly Kui as an unfinished eunuch all the way You guys say this Silly Kui How many vests have been changed one by one It has been changed. Changing the soup does not change the medicine Ye Midnight Kui also has a reason to say What was the standard before? It's a lower standard You ask me to write at your current standard What level is Shakui now? Just such a imaginative writing style One underwear has become a family heirloom Can he write? I can't write. I'm not at this level, you know? It won't be put on the shelves If it's not on the shelf, it won't be signed. No new book will be published. A book like yours doesn't have a good outline. Can you promise me that he can finish the next book well? Be pragmatic I advise Shakui to clarify his own writing concept first Learn from each other's strengths, make a good outline, and make reasonable settings according to your own level You can even stitch it up It doesn't matter if you have a previous work or others have good ideas Write a book that can be read well Now there is another eunuch Tell me, how do you explain it? No shame

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Is the profession of bandit just for the sake of being a waste material? This is meaningless.

The first ten chapters are very smooth, but after that, it feels like the characters are forced to lose their wits. Even the author's jokes didn't make people laugh at all. On the contrary, the dialogues made people feel awkward. Overall, the author's writing style is very good and the plot is creative, but some of the dialogue parts are very embarrassing and forcefully persuade me to quit, so I will say goodbye.

As a protagonist, you should appear as a third party. The indigenous protagonist is now attacking the demons, being a submissive dog to humans, and treating the regiment as a father. Wasn't it the man in white who saved you? He boasted that his organization was strict and efficient, only to find that his two training candidates were both scum? That's it. Taking the author's previous books as an example, it is estimated that the protagonist will have some great love in the future, and the world's races will be married to each other. It is really a disease of not being close. Acting as a spy for the devil on the human side, and acting as a human spy for the devil on the side of the devil. He talks about benevolence, justice and morality, but jumps left and right on his feet, and he is like a Wang Jingwei.

After reading the previous 47 chapters, is it another routine of pretending to be a pig and eating the tiger and tolerating it all the way? I have been hollowed out in the past few years. I really can't stand this kind of character who can be a human but has to be a pig (personal opinion, don't criticize if you don't like it). If you give it a try, your style will change and I'll be kicked.

The following is a complaint: The plot starting from the star is just like a running account. The background and shaping of the characters are there, but they are basically fools and madmen. The protagonist's new characteristics as a brave quality inspector are not reflected at all. He is like a headless fly chasing the wall while following the omen of death. The plot is also forcibly advanced. After the omen of death, the character of the protagonist who could be said to be a bit stubborn before was not easy to write, but after memorizing the pronunciation, he forced himself to open the harem. Giving tasks to the two new members was also messy. The stronghold plot that was supposed to bring some depth to the behind-the-scenes operations turned into a casual team-building party of gangsters. Just for the new harem fool, I wrote several pictures of an old licking dog and an 80-year-old prince. The snobs from the big family are basically written in the same way. They look down on it at first, but then they stick to it when they see some strength. After this kind of plot is written, what choice does the male protagonist have besides rejecting it? Will there be more endless plots like the dungeon? Also, the dual professions originally set up turned out to be useless at all when the bandit said that the professions were abolished at the beginning. There were no passives and no general skills. They all relied on the Archon bonus. I don't know where to throw the shield skills I just learned at the beginning. They were thrown away too fast. . . And to begin with, the protagonist is still considered a top student? Now it's not even about picking people off, but relying on the goddess-enhanced spinning ax to kill them? (ﾉꐦ ⊙Quఠ)ﾉ┻━┻

After reading it, I really couldn't help but want to complain. The setting of this book is really difficult to describe in words. It's a good dungeon novel. Why did you travel through time and change history? Why didn't I see that the power system of this book is so high? When it comes to the power system, I am speechless. I understand the author. You want to do something fancy and create a different power system! But can't your attribute be described more accurately? For example, expressed in numbers, E-level correction + 5% D-level correction + 15% C-level correction + 25% and so on. If you do this, I will ask A, whose four-dimensional attributes are supplemented by 20 points, C+ , and B, whose four-dimensional attributes are supplemented by 15 points, B+. The other two are the same, who is stronger? Another thing that makes me feel uncomfortable is the level setting. They give you some attributes when you upgrade to a level, and the experience of upgrading is very high. Doesn't that mean that a level 1 warrior can easily kill a level 50 ordinary warrior? Then what is the use of your hierarchy? Are you kidding me? I found three poisonous points when I saw this. It was originally a dungeon upgrade novel that I liked to read, but you ended up like this. You have nothing to say, nothing to say, bye! ! !

Hurry up and upgrade, you don't have to have experience. I keep saying it's level 16. I rely on explosive seeds every time I fight. If it doesn't work, I just scream death omen. I really vomit. So much experience is not used, is it just for fun?

When I read Chapter 107, the brave men have killed each other, but the protagonist still spared his life. This really means that he is not afraid of revenge. The Holy Mother is almost the same. Even if the protagonist is not afraid of revenge, he still has a family. Let alone the fact that the protagonist has not revealed his face, can the protagonist still hide for the rest of his life?

Stop writing online articles and go to the factory to drive screws.

Harem novels are not so seductive. If you are not convinced, come and argue. Remember to mention the title of the book 😊

Shakui has published a new book. Can you please give me a kick?

Listen to my advice and write less dialogue. You write a lot of inexplicable dialogue.

I haven't posted a comment for a long time. I personally feel that the character creation is not very good. It's not that a certain part is inappropriate and the performance is too prominent, but I personally feel that the character's personality and personality are not complete, and there is no clear direction and it is very vague. As for the part that brings a sense of reality and interacts with people, the senses are half good and half bad. If you can't bring the good part, this option is a bit abrupt but reasonable. For the bad part, let me talk about that chapter. The protagonist guaranteed others 60,000 worth of supplies [the quality is very good]. The other person frowned and said 20,000 in a non-threatening manner. The protagonist laughed and said that this supply will be given to you, it is free. I couldn't stand it after seeing this. To be honest, I couldn't understand it, even though the following sequence was both good and bad for the protagonist. This is not how we describe the reality of human relations and sophistication. Why are you making such a fuss? These also caused my senses to feel fragmented from time to time. I just want to make some comments. Generally speaking, it's okay now. It's logical and the plot rhythm is relatively clear. Come on, author.

I ran away from Shui and the Abuse Lord. Hurry up and upgrade the plot. If you drag it on, it will drag the readers to death, right?

It's a very interesting book. Let me tell you how you feel after reading it from the beginning At first, I thought Nightingale was just a supporting character, but I didn't expect that she was one of the heroines. However, once I accepted the setting, it was actually quite easy. Many people said that Nightingale was too snobbish and would be disgusting. I think why can't these be her priorities? In this world view and the human circle, there is no perfect outward iron plate. In this environment that can be called filthy, it is a luxury to ask for innocent and perfect women to appear. Nightingale has been able to well reflect the image of a working woman who relies on herself There is also Hydrangea. The arrogant image of a little girl is well written. If it feels similar to the perfect and completely arrogant young lady like Kujo Mihime in "Love Travel", it will be more appetizing to me. Of course, Hydrangea's extra weakness is a good embellishment There's not much to say about the plot. After all, it's about killing monsters and upgrading. It depends on whether the arrangement of the sub-plot is excellent. Possible disadvantages? This book, based on the intrigue between monsters in an adventure dungeon, does not feature a major crisis for the protagonist. It is the kind of tense situation that can be called a life-or-death danger or reversal. Every time the plot advances and every time a problem is encountered, the male protagonist will have hidden strength beyond his current level. Grandpa with the ring? A safe guarantee, room to challenge multiple times, and a protection mechanism that will not cause death. The lack of a hearty last-ditch battle, the lack of cunning and difficult opponents, the lack of events in which people risk their lives to survive and then win slightly. To me, these are like eating a Michelin set meal, and then overall I feel that the whole story is excellent but there is no surprising point. It is a pity The novel is very interesting and I will continue to read it.

Isn't this cover the Witch of Oz? Is the author also a poker player?

Mom, it would be great to read such a well-written book, and a bunch of people are still pointing fingers at it. Isn't this book much better than other garbage? If you don't like reading it, then don't read it. Saying it will affect the readers' mood and also the author's mentality.