In the Weird Apocalypse, I Can Inlay Negative Costs

I have read more than forty chapters of this book. The overall content gives me the feeling that the world is actually crazy, and it gives me a feeling that I will kill others and not let go.

I don't know what the author's current setting is for his protagonist, but let's talk about what I saw. A medical student has not graduated yet. If I count him to be able to perform anatomy every day, there are only a few gross body teachers. So I count him 300 times, okay. So in this world, there are too many deaths, and there are many forensic doctors who perform various autopsies. How come their autopsy skills are worse than the protagonist's? It's really about the theory of modern invincibility. Also, if I read the protagonist correctly, it's a medical record. It doesn't seem to be a file. I thought I read it wrong. What's the difference between it and a file? Doesn't the medical record record the cause and complications of the disease? Why do you even need to watch life? Also, is the protagonist mentally determined to be from a medical school? Not a mental illness? How did you get through psychological counseling?

I just read a few chapters. Author, there is something wrong with the title of your book. You wrote about negative costs, but all the protagonist gets is negative resistance. Looking at the title, I thought that the protagonist relied on a bunch of negative entries to show off and take off, but the result is only negative resistance. I think your content is okay, I'll take a look at it again, but do you need to change the title of your book?

The writing is so confusing. The plot and extraordinary profession seem to be written wherever I think of them. In order to forcefully correspond to the four gods, the attributes and medicine of the protagonist were inexplicably classified. Since there are inappropriate inlays, why doesn't the protagonist remove the attributes and put them in the appropriate place? Why doesn't the protagonist make efforts to gain knowledge, such as understanding the extraordinary system? If this society is as described by the author, how can the population be maintained?

Goudan, is it okay to send the data template like this? The difference between before and after is clear at a glance. Otherwise, if you post it, you won't know what the difference is from the last time. After all, who would remember this [Neurology Unlocking Degree: 31→35] [Number of Acupoints Unlocked: 1→2] [Current Inlay 1: Level D Lust] [Current Inlay 2: Not Inlay]

My name is Li Wei, I feed myself bags of salt...

I don't know why this Whip of Truth is aimed at the protagonist. If you suspect that he is illegally using infected organs, then kill him directly before he joins the El Force. He had to be held back by a little city lord's daughter. Then the protagonist was specially recruited, and he was able to resist the commander and attack forcefully, so he was convinced. Or is it because the protagonist can remove other people's extraordinary organs, and in order to prevent others from helping others to remove their organs in the future, and to maintain the authority of the Whip of Truth, he was killed. The same sentence. Since he could be arrested by force against the commander of the Eye of El, why not take action in advance for fear of a city lord's daughter? Even the city lord kept it a secret even if he had benign organs, fearing that the Whip of Truth would cause trouble and be forcibly removed. How would he be afraid of a city lord's daughter? Don't tell me that it's because of the few talents who were also tested during the assessment that they were like this, just because they entered the Whip of Truth? Can a new recruit have such a great reputation?

Are there only two heroines and two supporting characters in Chapter 120? There are so many female protagonists who don't understand this weird novel.

Look at the name, click in, read the introduction, and want to get out. Think about it again, wait for Shennong, then raise it, and read a long article.

The setting looks pretty good so far, and it can be regarded as getting rid of the unchanging routine of this genre (anatomy/burning corpses), which is good

The only shortcoming is that the plot is really like a thunder drama that can be made into an anti-Japanese drama.

It feels like everyone in the plot has been affected by the aura of reducing intelligence to everyone.

I've seen it, it's not poisonous at the moment, it's ok

It's not necessary to have a psychotic protagonist, nor is it necessary to have a sister with problems. I think the simpler the setting of the protagonist, the better.

Why hasn't the author updated it? Is this dead or cut?

Now that I see the introduction is full of names, I don't even want to click on it.

There hasn't been an update for a week. It's probably gone, sigh.

Isn't this a bit more refined? 😜

Goldfinger and the subject matter are actually good, but there are some problems with the plot. There are some sensational points, or in other words, logic has been completely abandoned in order to advance the plot. It makes people look a little uncomfortable. In addition, the supporting characters are not well established. Among the previous characters, there is only one who can handle it reasonably well, that is the sister. Although it is a bit rough, several key points of the character design have been grasped. Generally speaking, the characters and world are not fleshed out enough, and the plot and emotions are a bit stiff. It feels like a pity. I thought it was a fairy grass, but now it can only be used as a backup food. It is recommended to revise and revise earlier, use more words and ink on the demeanor and action, and add some small designs to the supporting characters. When the more important supporting characters appear, you can add a few more strokes to increase the frequency of their appearances. Use events or actions to gradually give out their character characteristics instead of forcing the readers to set up the characters. Some scenes that promote the plot should be polished and rounded, not too blunt. Reduce the element of coincidence and luck. In addition, consider some basic logic, that is, the difference between strength and weakness, the development of the situation, and empathy. The fighting scenes have a turn-based feel. If you are not good at this aspect, you can try adding modifiers and scene descriptions. In novels of this type, it is very important to fill in the details. There is no need to limit it to the first-person perspective. You can appropriately use the stories of supporting characters to promote the plot. Just sauce

Add refinement, add refinement

@Hangoudan, author, 4 gods A. B. C. D. In order of priority, shouldn't it be 12? 1-A. B 2-A. C 3-A. D 4-B. A 5-B. C 6-B. D 7-C. A 8-C. B 9-C. D 10-D. A 11-D. B 12-D. C