Hogwarts: More Magic Than Magic

The writing is quite good. The protagonist is in the simulator. He shouldn't be too obsessed with the truth behind it. He should be obsessed with improving his strength.

There are good things written and there are bad things written. I personally think that this is mainly caused by the author's lack of caution in being alone. Coupled with the lack of writing skills, it's a pity. The simulator has no real sense of functioning. Children's feelings are greater than those of adults, lacking in old-fashionedness and maturity. Part of the plot feels unconnected. The author still has a lot of room for improvement, come on

Come on , good

Even the plot itself is attractive enough, and there is no need to pretend to slap people in the face or pick up girls to open a harem There is no overly flashy second setting, what kind of magic pattern structure The fighting spirit of knight training made me frown at first glance, but fortunately it is just a soy sauce The world view is indeed very grand, and the combination of Ke and HP magic systems is perfect In fact, the steam age and the electronic age feel that the magic world is no different It seems that the author has a complete outline, keep writing!

The author has a strong tone and feels that the world of Harry Potter is too petty. Indeed, this is a children's fairy tale. I also feel that there is a lot to be explored in the world view of the Wizarding World. However, the author's writing style does not feel like he is digging deep into Harry Potter. It seems to be grafting other elements, and then it seems very messy.

How come there are so many conspiracies in such a magical world for children as the original novel? I was wondering why every simulator novel has so many conspiracy theories! It's tiring to watch

Too much force, one of the protagonists who is least able to use golden fingers

I chose two magic stones, they are useless.

Hermione is 32 this year. Give back (repay) society. Hermione was originally set to be at the level of ordinary people. The most beautiful one is Ron's sister Ginny, who is more beautiful than Fleur, who has Veela blood. People think Hermione is beautiful because the actress is beautiful.

The wizards in the world of Harry Potter give people the impression of neurotic blood warlocks. They clearly have the magic power that belongs to them, but they do not engage in love affairs. He is so preoccupied with his bloodline that he doesn't know how to make further progress. It feels like the Empire on which the sun never sets.

It's really imprudent. You've simulated it so many times, knowing that the three pure-blood families are watching you, and you still distribute so many gold galleons to Judith. Then the little girl starts spending money to give you a lot of snacks every day, and then the protagonist can face another setback.

The author has quite some ideas, but I don't know if the author can hold on to such a grand story background in the later stages.

I don't understand why the author is so interested in Harry Potter? Anyway, the more I read, the more awkward I became. Writing an imaginary western fantasy would be better than this, even if you use the setting of Harry Potter to write it.

I feel particularly uncomfortable because Harry's period was clearly after World War II. The great devil of the generation was brought down by Old Deng during the war, and it took several decades before the Harry Potter era began. Is your setting the industrial revolution? What about the train and Weasley's car?

The author's idea is very good, but there are a lot of things packed in, including simulator + HP fan + second set, which requires high writing skills. Especially the simulator, which feels completely useless. It's obviously Shuangwen's Golden Finger, which has performed so many cerebral hemorrhage operations. Exchanging this setting is not feasible. You can get LV4 black magic in one simulation. How many times do you need to exchange for LV2 knight training? I feel like this was done by the author to slow down the development of the protagonist. Also, the protagonist simulates being cowardly in reality, which looks very strange. With the simulator, you can simulate and then act before important actions. The simulator itself relies on trial and error opportunities to help the protagonist reach the top in a good step. However, the author still has some ideas. This book should be used as a training tool to stop being a eunuch.

The author felt that Harry Potter's worldview was too small, so he added gods and conspiracy theories. The protagonist in the novel had a simulator. As a result, the real world went crazy and tried to die, and the simulated world managed to end? What is this operation?

It would be pointless if the protagonist has a simulator and is not busy improving his strength but looking for the mastermind behind the scenes. If he doesn't have the strength, anything he says is useless.

I would like to ask why you don't just simulate directly, but save energy to redeem it. Obviously I feel that the reward for each simulation is only one energy, and generally as long as you don't die too early, the rewards are very good, and you can also set a direction. You can always simulate a goal, so that you will live longer and longer, and then achieve the goal. After all, once every three days, that is more than a hundred times a year.

It is recommended to change the mechanical heart to digital thinking. I feel that after the protagonist has this ability, he will act like a computer program. At first, I thought he would combine magic with steel to directly ascend the soul to immortality and the body to mechanical ascension.

It can be seen that the author has no outline at all. He probably only has a general goal.

This protagonist is really useless. After so many simulations, I have never tried to kill Harry before he turns black to see what magical reaction there will be? It's really shameful that he is killed by Dark Harry every time. Anyway, just simulating Harry will not die. Maybe this way we can get the final answer, and then reverse the process based on the answer and many people will not have to die.

The magical world doesn't choose magic affinity? You are still an Obscurus. Really convinced.

The author's idea is very good. Indeed, there can be a wider world in Harry Potter's fairy tales. However, it is a bit too conspiracy theory, and there are pitfalls everywhere. Although it is self-consistent so far, the pitfalls are too big, the enemy is too powerful, and it is a bit tiring to watch. The problem with the simulator is that you can see the end directly, so the future difficulties are notified in advance, but it is too far away from the future, making people unable to see hope. Of course, if the author doesn't write it like this, there is nothing he can do to avoid conflicts, but there are still some. . . After all, most people who read books now still want to see some bright things

The first second I saw the title of the book, I thought of Brother Jie: "More exciting than magic." I don't know why.

The writing feels really good, but there is so little.

So far, everything looks great. I hope the protagonist will continue to become stronger in the future and not have any weird emotional lines, hahaha

What arrangements does Adli plan to make Blackened Bento in the future?

Basically, it is certain that "Adley" is the son of the devil. . . . .

Finally updated again

This chapter is really a big turning point