Great Qin: I Am Actually the First Son of Qin Shi Huang

Uh, the legitimate son? Brother, the First Emperor did not have a principal wife, or empress, so he did not have a legitimate son. He only had his eldest son Fusu and other princes, such as Prince Huhai. Please, in ancient times, only the sons of a legally married wife could be considered legitimate sons. Even if you were born before your mother was officially recognized as her wife, you wouldn't be considered a legitimate son.

You've really underestimated Guo Jing's character. His life motto was to serve his country and its people, and he was willing to risk his life for it. You think he could justify dying for his country by defying the imperial court over a sect? Serving both the country and its people is a principle that anyone with common sense knows.

I really can't stand it. How can a book of this quality be ranked? Let me point out a few things. The early parts are just okay, but there are quite a few flaws. Every battle scene is filled with "wind, wind, wind." Also, killing isn't just about killing people to get a title; there are conditions: "Whoever obtains a title will be rewarded with one rank of nobility, one additional acre of land…

The author set a fan value system, apparently to prevent too many negative reviews from ruining the book. So why not do proper research before writing? The internet is so convenient; if you put in even a little effort, you wouldn't force things that aren't from the Qin Dynasty onto it. The internet is so readily available; you can find almost anything you want to know. Why insist on writing based solely on your own imagination?

There are one or two people spraying you with water; they might be black. Everyone's talking about water, but that's your problem; it's because you're watery. Let me make a prediction: the long string of descriptions of other people's reactions that follows can be used... The courtiers were shocked! The military is furious! To describe Author change: "

When you start using filler words, readers will skip around. Once they get used to skipping, it's impossible to expect them to savor every word and sentence, and you'll be shelved!

If someone doesn't allow others to talk about their own shortcomings, that shows a lack of character.

Brother, I can tolerate everything else, but you flooded the entire city of Daliang, and even the messengers who came to report the disaster were soaking wet. Aren't you looking down on me? Aren't you? 😂

This is another one of those scripts where only the protagonist is unaware of their identity, while everyone around them knows. The title is enough; you don't even need to click through to the content.

You claim to be an experienced author, and your last book was about the Qin Dynasty, so why don't you study Qin history properly before you start writing? Even just searching it on Baidu wouldn't cost much!