Huo Yuhao's Sister in Douluo Dalu

Let me start by saying that I see a few questions. The first punctuation mark. Such as what we saw in Chapter 2. So-and-so said there were no punctuation marks. For example, "" has already been spoken. This... Although it does not affect reading... But the details are not handled well. The second paragraph is too dense. It's too confusing at first glance when reading the book. There is no need to stay like this. You can write them separately. The third one... The way of presentation is a bit unclear. It just feels weird. At the same time, I also hope that the author will work hard. Deal with these issues a little bit. 😓😓😓

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The author updates very slowly. I started writing it in 22 years and haven't finished it in 26 years 😰

The author's writing is good. I would like to recommend the book he wrote. Friends who are book-hungry can take a look. Just click on the avatar. It is non-toxic.

I really want to laugh. Are people who follow this book surprised? I thought he had stopped updating, but he ended up updating again.

Although I can't understand the chapter... But the update is really outrageous Let's keep it.

I want to join the group you mentioned, and I want photos. Without photos, just reading the book feels a bit lacking.

The author will update it soon! ! ! 😆😆

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Let's take a look at the main storyline of Douluo. What about after forgetting Yuhao?

So in the early stage, how did the protagonist reach level 40 without absorbing the soul ring? Could it be that Lingmu absorbed it?

It is recommended that paragraphs be separated a bit, too dense is sometimes a bad thing

. . . Does this martial spirit have anything to do with Huo Yuhao? It's a completely different type.

The characters are all well-developed, and the plot is also very innovative and original. It can be used to pass the time if you don't have any brains. However, there are many places that are not in line with the original settings. Especially the part about earning the Saintess position. First of all, the Holy Spirit Church does not have so many Saintess candidates, but it is okay if you are original. There is not a big problem here, but it is a bit unreasonable if you have someone whose martial spirit is the Dark Phoenix. Ma Xiaotao's martial spirit, Evil Fire Phoenix, evolves into the Dark Phoenix. Also, the soul ring configurations of these Saintess candidates are at least a thousand years old. What's going on? There is no divine test. The Soul Ascension Platform can help you increase the life of your soul ring. It relies purely on talent absorption. There is no such genius in Dou Er (except Huo Gua). Also, isn't there the divine skeleton of the Ice and Fire Dragon King in the eyes of Ice and Fire Liangyi? It seems to have a certain instinct. How did the Rain God's inheritance be put in? Wouldn't it reject it? Of course, I don't remember this very clearly, and I don't know much about it, so I just mentioned it. Finally, why is it that the protagonist's first soul ring absorbs a hundred thousand year old soul ring, and the second soul ring absorbs a hundred thousand year god-given soul ring, but it is not a big deal, but the third soul ring absorbs a hundred thousand year old fairy grass, but it almost fails. Isn't this a bit strange?

Author, when will you update this?

The author is great. Update, update, update, update.

It is recommended that the author reduce typos.