Who Doesn't Have a Sword Yet?

The first hundred and fifty chapters of this book are quite interesting, but after the first hundred and fifty chapters it really gets annoying. The heroine feels like she is always out of state, as if she hasn't woken up. She doesn't do what she should do, isn't cautious when she should be, and is procrastinating when she should be proactive and decisive. Moreover, the plot design is always a routine, starting from one hundred and fifty chapters. From Chapter 5 to Chapter 400, almost all the difficulties the heroine encounters are solved through random teleportation. The heroine is accidentally teleported here, and then teleported there the next moment. The heroine's master, uncle, and parents are also either teleported here or there... Or they are experiencing illusions...

In the first few chapters, I was a little confused? How did you get here? Modern? Then why are there two immortal cultivators? How come there is an original owner of this body in the local area? How old is this body? Why did you start calling your parents? I didn't know the protagonist was a child until someone came from the City Lord's Mansion and said this child. Nothing was explained clearly, and the plot suddenly entered. If it weren't for the introduction, I wouldn't even know that the protagonist is a woman.

The heroine is just like Tang Monk. She is obviously still a little shrimp, and those who plotted against her are just starting out as gods. It's very frustrating for her to be submissive. I don't need to read the cool article, but it's too frustrating to be suppressed and beaten.

From personal experience, I read it and cleared it up. The female protagonist, the Holy Mother, was stupid and had a valuable treasure. She gave it to others without caring about it. She never thought about the possibility of others killing people and taking the treasure.

This Li Chuan eats and uses the protagonist's things every day, but in the end he still cares about the protagonist's opportunities and has an arrogant attitude every day. He has no academic connection in the first place, so he is looking for an ancestor to support him, right?

Beginning of Summer

No CP, not a particularly enjoyable fairy tale. The heroine is a bit stupid. Please read a few chapters and remove it from the bookshelf if it is not suitable. In the comments, I deleted the comments that I still disliked the heroine after reading it for twenty or thirty chapters. The first time I met and read it was the beginning, the wind and rain dispersed, and I drifted north and south. He met by chance and laughed at the past, standing in a clear cloud, standing east and west.

This heroine's name is really ugly. . 😅😅Chen Xia sounds better than any Guanyu. . I'm probably the only one who gave up on my name. .

I'm a little angry. The heroine is so plotted against her that she can't express her anger? For example, burning family land, digging ancestral graves, etc.

There are too many typos and the plot is so slow that you can catch up with the previous plot even if you skip it. On the whole, the structure is not big, and the small family spirit is obvious. There are many problems with the setting of the heroine. Other posters have mentioned the problems with the heroine, so I won't repeat them.

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The book ended suddenly, and I couldn't bear to part with it! I thought I would at least write about being reunited with Ao Xian in the sky The author's layout is very large, and his thinking is very broad and jumping. It is difficult to follow the author's thoughts without reading them consecutively. Moreover, the language is very concise, with almost no watery words. Every sentence is very necessary (I even think I should write more, otherwise I can't understand). It's very novel. You think it will be like this, but the result is always beyond your expectation. You really have a lot of ideas! This is a great work, highly recommended! New works will be released soon...

There is no shortage of gold fingers in cultivating immortals, so why do you need to travel with modern items? From time to time, some modern elements pop up, which I can't accept! Maybe it's a deliberately created "feature"?

So, who is the heroine's second apprentice?