Naruto: Digital Arrival

I want to change my name, what should I change?

(ﾟ⊿ﾟ)ﾂHi Haihi!

To be honest, I understand if you don't get good grades and want to stop writing. After all, it is a need of life, but I suggest you give it an ending, with a beginning and an end. Even if the outline is unfinished, it is better than being a eunuch.

According to the market, your book is useless at the beginning. It would be ok if it just opens with the characters living in Naruto. This kind of routine where all time travels are clearly explained is no longer written. Firstly, it is not important, and secondly, it can easily expose the problems of writing. Secondly, the pacing of the time travel was too fast, and nothing was clearly explained. Then, when I started to get in touch with the main characters, it was too straightforward, the structure was messy, and there was no sense of substitution. The readers ran away in the first chapter of the three golden chapters. Take a look at more popular fan fiction, their beginnings, and the way they portray the characters and describe the background. The fandom already has a good background framework, so as long as the rhythm is good and the desired points are clearly portrayed, it will not be difficult to retain people. The author probably hasn't signed the contract yet, so it's best to cut it and rewrite it. There are too many problems at the beginning.

I hope you can continue writing. To be honest, although the first part of Digimon is the most classic, I like the third part best in terms of the way it evolves. It combines with Digimon and then goes on its own. It's rare for someone to write a third volume, so I hope you can continue writing it.