Mechanical Bug Swarm

Today's science fiction articles: combine scientific terms with the realm of fantasy = science fiction

It's a good book, and at least for now I feel it has great potential. However, I have a few suggestions. One is the "Insect Tide" in the title of the book. The route in the book is not very clear. So far, I have only seen that there is a race of mechanical insects. The insect tide gives me the feeling that it should be very inclusive and develop very quickly. Maybe we can consider absorbing different races in the future to evolve different insect races (not only in the universe, but also based on the various creatures on the earth at the current stage). Otherwise, there is only one scouting insect (if I remember correctly), which is actually a bit uninteresting, and it will not be easy for readers who come to see the insect swarm to follow the book. The second one is runes. At present, it seems to be a combination of runes and machinery. Then we may try to automate the mass production of runes on machinery, using machinery to carve lines and then charging the protagonist with energy, or other methods. After all, the protagonist was a great player in his previous life, and he was also very talented. To be honest, his current performance feels a bit mediocre (personal feeling), especially in the development of machinery. The third one is the use of machinery, which I personally feel is a bit monotonous. Although I have an airport backpack, I still use the reconnaissance bug. It can be understood that the setting is to use mechanical insects as a burden on the protagonist, but universal machines may also be applicable (simple semi-intelligent machines, or even machines that require manual control). Speaking of this, I have a question, what are the limitations of the protagonist's control of the machine? Mental power? After that, controlling the insect tide will definitely require strong mental power (even with the help of intermediaries such as brain worms), and then mental power will definitely be the priority. If this is the case, is it possible to combine it with runes and use runes to create something like a 'spiritual amplifier' or a 'brain matrix'? In short, I can feel that the potential is great and the writing is not bad. Although it has said a lot, it mainly depends on your own grasp of the content and outline. Come on 👏👏👏

It started off very well, I got in and pulled out right away. This book does not have the imaginary formula of Exploding Productivity > Raising Soldiers > Upgrading Technology. Just treat him as a normal monster-fighting upgrade, just covered in technology.

I can't stand it anymore after reading Chapter 40. Tell me what you think. Let me briefly talk about some minor problems I saw. The main problem that I can't stand is the writing, starting with rebirth, killing people, studying a little, taking exams, necessary transitions in a few chapters, and then fighting, fighting, fighting. It feels like twenty-five of the forty chapters are fighting, either fighting or on the way to fight. It can be said that these battles only reflect very few functions of nanomechanical bugs. After finishing, assembling a mecha, or even a venom symbiote with a special setting can display most of the same functions as this. There is no requirement that it be mechanical at all. Of course, it is also possible that there are not many powerful mechanical equipments that can be written in the early stage. Second question, when I read Chapter 26, nano-mechanical bugs were used to form a mecha, and then transformed into a sword to kill people. This means that the blade of the sword is very sharp, and the nano-mechanical bugs are very small. Also, the combined mecha looks smooth to others. Does that mean that at least in the eyes of ordinary people, it is impossible to distinguish the actual appearance of the mechanical bugs, and the naked eye can see the hair clearly. How big are the nano-mechanical bugs? If you can't see it clearly with the naked eye, then the nanomechanical insect that interacts with the protagonist, and the expressions and movements of the nanomechanical insect are not very reasonable. And I think the author did not expect that if the nanomechanical bugs are really small enough, they can replace molecules or even atoms. They can directly use nanomechanical bugs to replace the molecules in the body. The genetic ability of the Zerg is right. Using nanomechanical bugs to replace genes is no different from the Zerg on the surface. In fact, the nanomechanical bugs have replaced it; in martial arts, if the nanomechanical bugs are combined into your body or even your brain, what you can do is what I can do; in terms of runes, what I want to combine can be directly combined by the nanomechanical bugs. As one comment said, this is the reincarnation and rebuilding of mechanics, not the reincarnation and rebuilding of immortal cultivators. As long as it can withstand gravity, nano-mechanical insects have been developed. As long as there are blueprints, they can make any item infinitely and become stronger. Machinery is a tool, which is different from a system that must rely on the energy in the body to do things. Having knowledge means having power. This sentence is not just a saying in this kind of world. Make a high-precision machine tool using existing large and small nano-mechanical insects, and use high-precision machine tools to create higher-precision nano-mechanical insects. Once they are small enough, they can directly transport molecules and atoms without machine tools, combine them into nano-mechanical insects, and take off directly. The rest is enough to learn all kinds of knowledge. Where can there be so many other things, just crush them directly.

But something a little strange is that the protagonist showed the ability to reconstruct the body in the first chapter. Logically speaking, his body is actually a piece of nanomachines. It is very inmba. It can directly copy the violent soldiers. It has the scientific research of the previous life. The energy and materials are just minutiae. This does not mean that the old monster who has ascended to immortality can re-cultivation.

I don't know why, I was a demigod before rebirth, and I still have to go to school after rebirth. The mechanical demigod must have a lot of advanced technological knowledge, and you have leverage to store knowledge, so why do you still have to go to school? The level of human technology before rebirth is not particularly high.

Using epoch-making technology, hacking the computers, phones, or terminals of the president's top leaders, and communicating face to face. If the operation is good, it is not impossible to directly become the leader. Why choose to stick to the rules? The plot is similar to other novels.

The title and introduction of the book are very impressive. At first glance, it reminded me of The Super Mechanic. But after reading one chapter, I didn't feel much attraction. Maybe I've become numb to the common opening?

The most important thing in scientific and technological civilization has always been technology and industrialization

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You should not build a machinery factory first.

Routine writing is still the older kind. As for science fiction. Nothing sci-fi.

Mechanical insect swarm? I suggest you refer to the replicators of ancient artifacts in the American TV series Stargate. They are also a group of mechanical bugs, ranging from various initial insect forms to battleship forms and human forms. And the most perverted thing is that the replicators can not only learn any known technology, but also greatly enhance known technologies. The replicator once strengthened the superspace engine of the villain Dog Ooo's spaceship tens of thousands of times, and it only takes a few dozen minutes to travel 4 million light years.

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Has the author taken the editing exam again?

May I ask what time it is updated every day?

Is this book going to be cool?

10.13, It should be cut

The beginning was okay, but it collapsed in the middle. I thought I was starting a road of revenge, killing and killing all the way.