I've Leveled Up

If it is digitized, you will be disappointed to find that some people have their own "smarts: experience gain +900%", "draw inferences from one example: gain a small amount of related skill experience", "multitasking: gain experience with up to 5 skills at the same time", "concentrate: when only one skill is gaining experience "When using a skill, the experience gained is doubled", "Talent: The skill effect is the current level + 3", "Memory: Each time you use the skill, you will get more prompt information", "Inspiration: There is a 1% chance of directly upgrading this skill when using the skill continuously", "Agility: Automatically use the optimal skill combination"...

The author's thoughts are too free and his imagination is very rich, but his writing style is also very casual

Why don't you just write about society directly? It's really a waste to write about having cheats in college but not trying hard. In this world, only those who are rich or hardworking are liked by people. You have no reason to play with anything.

One suggestion I would like to make is that the screenwriter participates in the box office share. I checked the information and it seems that in our country, editors rarely participate in box office sharing, and even if they participate, they are unlikely to get 10% of the total box office share. This is too high. For a domestic movie, the total number of movie producers seems to be able to get less than half of the box office, and it is unlikely that 10% of the box office revenue will be given to the screenwriter. I suggest that this aspect be considered to make the plot more reasonable.

The sword must be stronger than this one.

These last few chapters... The author didn't want to write them anymore, so he changed them.

I personally don't understand why there is an element of cultivating immortality in it. This is the biggest flaw. After the element of cultivating is included, the whole thing becomes nondescript.

Come on! Your rise in the house is so beautiful,

I hope the author will write another good book like The Rise of Otaku

There are many people who don't want to work hard without plug-ins, but there are not many people who don't have the motivation to work hard with plug-ins. Watching the protagonist waste his life with cheats, I am speechless.