My Hero Development System

In a word, just don't have a female lead. I feel disgusted when I see this type of dragster and troublemaker, and it's all for nothing and has no brains.

The protagonist is really stupid. He killed a gang leader and only touched the body without searching his house.

Isn't the original owner of the body dead? It's not like seizing a body, it's outrageous to borrow a corpse and resurrect the soul but also to bear the karma.

We have finished killing the bandit dens and clearing out the wave. There are no surprises. Where are the adventures? Don't save any gold or silver? Men don't love money? It doesn't feel good if you do this. I can't stand it anymore.

Why do you always like to talk when fighting? It's because you are the protagonist, so you won't die from talking too much.

After looking at the previous part, I think it's okay, but the resurrection of the female protagonist feels very awkward.

The first nine chapters are still okay. After enduring Chapter 10, Shennong died in Chapter 11

I feel like Pig's Knuckle is like a person who has cheats but his brain is not very good. He has less brains and less domineering, so he gave up the book.

The heroine is well written, don't write it next time.

The heroine, I didn't even say what kind of beast that girl is.

It should be written as my demon education development system. Do whatever you want, say you have brains to operate as if you have no brains, eliminate evil and do all the evil things, the protagonist doesn't even know? After reading Chapter 12, I was poisoned and died. Farewell

The world of martial arts is filled with monsters and monsters, so why not just write about immortals?

For kidnapping the daughter of the leader of the Mo family, even if someone pleads for mercy, there will be no price to pay at all? If anyone pleads for mercy, let them go. Where is the majesty of your leadership? If nothing else, at least there have to be a few scapegoats or a price to pay, right? You don't even have a scapegoat, and you don't have to pay any price. Everything is handled with care. Then next time, can you kidnap your daughter and then find someone to plead for mercy?

What are you doing as a woman, trash? The front is fine, but the back can only say haha, bye

The protagonist just doesn't have a harem. In fact, it's better not to have a heroine. The strong one is always lonely.

Personally, I would like to suggest that internal skills should not be practiced casually. It is easy to go crazy and have conflicting skills. For example, in the Mingyue of the Qin Dynasty, Lao'e, Huang Nvying, the water minister of the Yin and Yang family, turned into a two-faced personality.

I've read more than a dozen chapters, and it's okay. The writing is okay and the plot is good. Keep it up.

That one-eyed Zhang Feng has endured it for so many years and suddenly became stupid?

I really can't understand that the author has created a pretty good character for the protagonist, but when something happens to the father and daughter, they don't even take a good look at them. Even if they are..., How come even if they casually ask about the handling of future generations, it is better than the protagonist's performance. No normal person should be like that. I really can't figure it out.