I Really Just Want to Keep a Low Profile and Cultivate Immortality.

This sect is so embarrassing. After the official disciples are challenged and fail, they have no way out. Either live or die. So the sense of urgency has emerged. Where is the cohesion? If a sect has no cohesion, how can it withstand natural and man-made disasters? There should be at least one chance to come back. I am very curious about what this sect has inherited.

To be honest, the writing is quite good, but I personally don't like it. I don't like the sudden change of the map. Sudden change of the map means that the author will write a lot of nonsense, which is boring. Going back to the old map from the new map is a lot of trouble. Personally, I prefer to sort out the old map things and then change to the new map.

The author has great ideas. In the realm of spiritual practice, one does not follow the crowd. Instead, you set your own name. But Wonderland, right? Your realm setting is a bit of a drama. Every time I see swallowing one's breath, I think of the idiom "suffering one's breath". Come on, author. I'm waiting and watching.

Personally, I suggest opening a separate chapter to briefly introduce the power system or realm distinctions.

The previous building was inexplicably swallowed up, so we need to rebuild it! Come on, boss! Waiting for the follow-up update (＾＿＾)☆

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First of all, the Zaxiu Hall is only responsible for the daily chores of Liuyunguan. It is not a way for Liuyunguan to recruit disciples. It is just that Liuyunguan gives Zaixiu disciples an opportunity to challenge. This opportunity comes once every three years, but it is not necessary to challenge. There is an age limit for formal disciples of Liuyunguan to be challenged, and formal disciples also have resources provided by the sect. If they are successfully challenged by the first miscellaneous cultivator under double protection, then either their qualifications are too poor, or they are lazy, and there is no need for the sect to continue training. It's not that Liuyunguan didn't give the opportunity, but that it gave the opportunity but didn't cherish it. This kind of challenge is just an example. It will mainly put enough pressure on those disciples in the early and middle stages of the Qi Swallowing Realm, and will have little impact on the entire sect.

The title of the book should be My Pretending to Become an Immortal

The starting point was originally 3,000 words per update, but now it has become 2,000 words, and only 4,000 words per update twice a day. I finished reading it in less than five minutes, which is too little!

Okay, okay, the setting is interesting, the writing is good, and it's worth reading.

Why don't you say something about opening a new book 😰

Great book! The writing is smooth, the characters are vividly drawn, and the plot is logical. It has been collected. Come on!

Update quickly, update quickly, update quickly, say important things three times 😄

The first half is very good, but the secret realm and elves in the middle make it unbearable, and the back part cannot be connected with the previous part. It's like there's a different author

I've only read Chapter 6 and it feels very boring!

It's not interesting, just take a look. It's all this kind of routine

It's a bit ridiculous. It's my first time to make alchemy and I have no spiritual power. I need help from others. If I can't practice it well, I will die. Even if I find a master, I can't guarantee that there will be no accident.

It's hard to believe that this is a work by an old author. The challenge setting in the first chapter will directly drive away most readers. What Zhao said in the chapter about Brother Wu practicing medicine is also inconsistent with the character's position.

No

I suggest the author start a new book. By the way, I would like to correct the questions raised by book friends, or if possible, I would like to correct them, if not, please encourage them.