Captive Demonizer

Most authors don't write about female protagonists because they are too rubbish. The emotional scenes are like rubbish. Most of them are written in such a way that the heroine drives the plot. The heroine is a drag, and the heroine's parents and sisters are all protagonists. They are drags.

The author's writing style is very good and the future is promising.

The beginning is tense and the storyline is well controlled! Great article!

The author of the bar without a heroine. Isn't that right? Answer your little readers.

I'll wait and see first, my first impression is pretty good, and the writing is also good.

After reading a little bit, I feel that the structure is not compact enough. Nowadays, there are many short and refreshing articles. The early stage is not very attractive, and the writing is a bit hazy. I can only say that I need to work harder.

Dear author, I saw you on Bizhan two days ago, but you still use this name This name and introduction are too regular, I can't say it's not good, it's just not attractive... You can try to make a more shocking name. , Such as "My demon has the qualities of an emperor", "My demon is Lao Liu", Lao Liu or Lao Ba will do, as you like To keep up with current events, you can use "The demon boss only eats instant noodles with pickled cabbage" Don't write so many settings in the introduction, just a summary. "In the middle of the night, the sows howled from the dragon pen. Is it the distortion of the dragon's nature or the loss of morals..."

It's a rare good book I've read recently, keep up the good work 😃😃

I feel so uncomfortable watching this segment.

The overall pace is too fast, the author could pay more attention to details