The Lord Who Was Carried Away by Magical Animals

Brother, times have changed, weak starts are no longer popular.

I've only read four chapters, and I can't read them clearly in many places. Didn't the author go over it himself after finishing writing?

Thoughts on the logical closed loop of the power system Personally, I feel that the novel is a classic, popular, and very important issue - the logical closed loop of the power system, which is what this power system is and how it came about. It is like the system of cultivating immortals. Spiritual power is born naturally from heaven and earth. Cultivation of immortals is a system in which people with spiritual root qualifications absorb spiritual energy through the techniques created by humans and continuously become stronger. Many Western fantasy novels are not used to thinking and describing this kind of logical closed loop, but because of this, many novels inevitably become a running account, because this is an inescapable part of the newly created power system - the logical closed loop that explains it. If you can explain this problem well, the novel will naturally look much more interesting, such as the famous Above the Sky, Mystery, and Sword of the Dawn. An important point that is popular with many people is that they all explain the logical closed loop of the power system created or innovated by the author, what is ether, what is magic, and the protagonist even plays with this origin. This is a common point. This book is the best interpretation I have seen of the power system of professionals, which is not new. The author has not described much yet, but I have seen many interesting points and thought of many possibilities. I hope the author can think more about several aspects later, such as the source of professional power, the connection or similarities and differences between the power source of the exclusive professional of magical creatures and the power source of ordinary professionals, the way to create the professional path, whether a breakthrough can be made at the end of the professional path, and if so, how to break through, can there be only one kind of profession, the life span of the professional, the source of the promotion ceremony and whether it can be innovated or replaced, etc. These are what I am looking forward to and what I want to see. There are two things that attract me about this book. One is the aspect of magical creatures. I am very interested in some magical creatures and I like to see more of these descriptions in novels. The other is the professional power system. I see the possibility that the author can explain this power system well. Looking forward to seeing more exciting content later, come on, author! I invested a thousand coins in you as a small boost.

I have read more than 20 chapters and will tell you my feelings. The plot problems can be said to be big or small. First of all, the first point is that the plot is too deus ex machina. The first time is when the follower explodes, and the second time is Sylbert. The first time before the explosion, there is almost no description of the follower's character and daily behavior. Is it a little bit when you suddenly told me that he has awakened the hero profession? This way of writing makes me afraid that one day you will suddenly say that the male protagonist is weak but actually there is a god living inside him. . The second one is a similar situation. There were many opportunities for foreshadowing. For example, he actually came to the town first to ask for directions, and then picked up the plot. He returned to the town and saw that the town was affected by the disaster. This kind of writing method without foreshadowing has the beauty of writing wherever it goes. . Also, the male protagonist coaxed the stone man to come out. I acted as the stone man. As soon as you woke up, you took away the magic crystal (even though the male protagonist killed it), and then drained the spring water. He told me that if you mix with me, there will be more magic crystals. I can only say that even though I am a three-year-old child, I have not seen even one magic crystal. How can I listen to you? It would be better to directly describe the achievement as obeying the words of the male protagonist's contracted beast. There are two or three other minor flaws of a similar nature that I won't go into details. In general, both Deus ex machina and several flaws will affect the perception, serious but not fatal. It still depends on how the story unfolds later, but Deus ex machina really needs to be changed. This is not a question of writing inspiration, but a question of writing ability such as foreshadowing

The world view I set up is a world where extraordinary people are supreme. It is not that people can pile up extraordinary people to death. Extraordinary people can even pluck stars to a certain extent. Nobles are not that noble. In addition, the consciousness of lords is Chinese. Don't bring in aboriginal people, and don't bring me other novels.

What kind of person becomes a noble? I feel that no matter how corrupt and rubbish the so-called nobles are in the end, they must be outstanding people in the beginning, just like the gap between the founding emperor and the last emperor. They used their strength and wisdom to gain power, and then power slowly breeds desire. Therefore, if it is a world where power is paramount, the so-called nobles should have power, whether it is personal strength or legendary weapons. If humans did not have strong people who were generally inferior to other races, then humans would not dominate the world.

The character of the protagonist is not very likable. What the hell is he always in embarrassment? I have been a human being for two lifetimes, and I don't have this kind of concentration. Moreover, when something happened, he raised it in front of all the residents. When he found that the residents were in a low mood, he did not ask about it, nor did he ask the town mayor for details in private. Isn't this a big mistake? The mayor also needs to take the initiative to help in private. If the mayor doesn't come to help, will the protagonist be prepared to die? It's a bit like being stupid. It should be noted that a gentleman does not stand under a dangerous wall. He makes a decision before taking action. He knows when to stop and gains something. I feel that the character of the protagonist is more suitable for the aboriginal people and he will grow up slowly.

Entering the main plot or the title of the book is too slow. I can't see the magical animals after turning through more than ten chapters.

To be honest, it's almost 200,000 words. The protagonist's personal strength is almost non-existent. Whether it's his own combat skills or professional combat power, the first pet Rourou has no combat power yet, and Brother Tu can't follow him around. This is a bit unreasonable. It's not a problem to always rely on guards.

I can't bear to read Chapter 8. How can I put it? My wild boar can't eat fine chaff.

The direction of the book is quite interesting, but the content of the writing is indeed a bit lacking. It looks good and smooth. The author can read more and refine it after finishing it.

Maybe the tone at the beginning is not good, but the rest is relaxing farming. I hope you can read it patiently 😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭. Everyone should watch it. The discomfort is only a little bit earlier, because the plot requires it, and I will listen to the advice.

Please pursue reading, don't support me😦😦

Some thoughts on territory professionals and territory construction The following are just my personal thoughts to provide the author with some ideas. I hope the author can have his own ideas. 1. As for the cultivation of professionals, in terms of the money system the author writes about, the gap between extraordinary and civilians is huge. The value created by tens of thousands of civilians cannot even support ten black iron-level professionals. This is no problem, but next, the author writes about extraordinary things and hopes to spread them more quickly, such as geographical areas. I quite agree that the author did not describe the actual geographical distance in detail, but the general scope still needs to be written, such as the approximate area of ​​the territory, the number of citizens under his command, and the construction in the territory. Until now, I am still a little confused about the town. I can roughly infer that this town is also within the protagonist's territory, but it did not state how many villages and towns are built in the territory at the beginning, so I am quite confused. In fact, I hope to add some descriptions later. With the concept of region, we will have a clearer concept of the scope of influence of extraordinary beings and the resource soil that provides extraordinary growth. Readers will also understand better that in the era of fast-food online articles, some things cannot be explained too slowly, otherwise it will test the author's writing power and patience too much. It is difficult to feel like you can't see the end. I'm sorry, it's very difficult to persevere. For a novel that's about 2.5 Million words long, if you haven't explained the basic framework and development direction as well as the protagonist's growth direction (power composition) at 5.6 Million words, I might leave, not to mention that most authors' outlines can't support writing 2.5 Million words. 2. Next is the point of territorial extraordinary people, because under the world extraordinary system initially constructed by the author, individual extraordinary people basically do not exist, but those who can become extraordinary people have inheritance, and those with inheritance basically have power, and the influence of influence controls the area (the soil for extraordinary growth). Even barbarians have a resource land of the jungle, a large number of tribesmen, and inheritance. Even if you get some inheritance by chance, such as the beast tamer made up by the protagonist, first of all, you must be a child of destiny who has traveled so much and accidentally obtained the inheritance. Secondly, you must have the qualifications to practice that inheritance. Thirdly, you must have the money to support extraordinary training. This step by step basically eliminates the existence of extraordinary people in the wild. After confirming this point, let's talk about the training of Territory Extraordinary. The little girl from the Black Iron Moment Red Wolf Clan. Let's not talk about the issue of canceling the seal. I reluctantly attribute it to the protagonist's great kindness and wanting to win people's hearts instead of relying on coercion to gain a subordinate. However, the little girl described later took Lina out of the castle many times. It can be seen that there is no loyalty to the protagonist in her heart, and she even has a strong personality. It is just temporary because of nowhere. So I live under the protagonist's command, but what I want to know is, what is the author's definition of this little girl's future, an extraordinary person who can be trusted by his subordinates? One of the harem? Or maybe I haven't thought about this character yet? description, especially since she is an extraordinary person with a rare territory, a sensitive alien bloodline, a hostile force, and the owner of a triple identity with extraordinary inheritance. This is a double-sided sword for a truly ambitious person. After the protagonist takes her in, she keeps her in the castle like that. She is neither a maid nor a subordinate nor a guard. She is just raised in the castle. If she is an equal collaborator, the protagonist supports her and helps her rebuild the tribe and then feeds the protagonist back. Isn't this nonsense, for such a so-called genius? Without the protection of the power and the supply of resources, unless she is the kind of peerless genius who can be given enough conventional resources and then greatly increase her strength in a short period of time, otherwise she is not qualified to be equal to the protagonist at all. My suggestion is that if you want to take her as your subordinate, you should take the initiative to show her how extraordinary the protagonist is, such as being able to control a powerful bronze monster like the Rock Demon, or the mastery of the extraordinary heritage of the Guardian of the Earth that the protagonist has (there is no shortage of such a subordinate, so hurry up and show her ability to provide sufficient growth resources for the extraordinary people under your command). There are also concerns about her current situation, whether her extraordinary inheritance is bound by the ring, whether it can be handed over to the protagonist, the resources needed for her professional system training, and her detailed experience. She knows herself and the enemy of the future Blue Wolf tribe. No matter what, as long as she is kept, she will definitely face the Blue Wolf tribe in the future. It is not meaningless to mention it now even if she does not have the strength to face it. On the contrary, it will form a fuller impression of this character and enrich the plot. Of course, in all the previous discussions about this character, I didn't say anything if it was a harem setting. I laid out so many environments for the growth of extraordinary beings just to emphasize one point - the extraordinary beings who are cultivated must be loyal to the protagonist. Relying on people's hearts is very advanced, but it must be written carefully and purposefully. For example, some obvious rewards can win people's hearts, or severe punishments can establish majesty. The team has not yet been formed, but it must be written. Set some rules. The protagonist must also have his own behavior as a subordinate. Don't always rely on kindness to impress people. Kindness can be an embellishment, but strength, interests and majesty are the necessary elements for a person in power. To write a lord story, these things must be present. If the wolf girl is not written well, it will be a disgusting poison. 3. The next step is about the cultivation of other extraordinary beings. The protagonist has always hoped to find more extraordinary inheritances so that his territory can cultivate more extraordinary beings. My suggestion is to directly create a group of magical creatures with high universality and exclusive extraordinary inheritances similar to fighters, such as That queen ant, or another extraordinary creature, with only one star or a lower level, such as one with the same level as Rourou but can have dozens of exclusive extraordinary beings, not only solves the problem once and for all, but even if it is a little weaker than the Earth Guardian, it is much stronger than the ordinary inheritance, and can better display the theme of this book. In the process, we can further think about the power system of this book - the logical closed loop of the professional system, such as thinking about the source of professional secrets, such as thinking about professional training resources, such as thinking about the similarities and differences between exclusive professionals and ordinary professionals, etc.

There is no official recommendation for this book. Just like those unpopular anchors.

The preface does not match the postscript 😢

The most annoying thing when reading a book is when I see someone writing about potatoes. When you see potatoes, it means that the book is very big and very childish.

Come on, come on, it's not long before you become a god. Great support.

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