My Super Gear Has a Slight Side Effect

I don't understand why a martial artist is inferior to a madman. A madman can enhance his physical abilities by controlling the heart, and has a series of abilities. A martial artist has been practicing for more than ten years, but his heart beats as much as a madman's. I want to know what their heart is made of. One beat beats the heart of others for more than ten years. A madman has such body control ability. Comparing it with his professional name is ridiculous. Damn, the lunatic profession can have such body control ability. Shouldn't the martial arts profession be more powerful in controlling the body? Why can't the martial arts master control the muscles of the whole body, enhance the nerve reaction speed through secret methods, and increase the physical ability by controlling breathing. Now it seems that the martial arts master should be renamed as a strong person, a person with slightly stronger physical ability. The lunatic profession can destroy the heart of a child by relying on the beating of his own heart, and can sense the beating of other people's hearts. With this intensity, good people should not be beaten and just kneel down and surrender. I don't think martial artists can practice until they die. It is better to rename the lunatic Superman. This is just a part of the lunatic designed by the author. At this stage, if the lunatic profession goes up a level, I estimate that the hearts of the people around it will explode if the heart beats. Then, the heart of others can be sensed in a very large range. There is also a heart hunting mark, which cannot be run away, and the shape of the body is changed by the beating of the heart. If the heart beats, you can get whatever you want. It is unparalleled in the world.

Suddenly I thought of some of the functions of this gun that a thief can smoke. For example, a pig's trotters are going to steal a house, but unfortunately the safe is relatively hard, so the gun sucks the land clean, leaving no hair behind. For example, in a certain forbidden area, anyone who enters will die, and the gun will suck it in. The air is either maintained by spiritual energy, or it is some strange poisonous gas that sucks it clean and squeezes it out until there is no hair left. For example, if the corpse of a certain sworn enemy is difficult to dispose of, let the gun suck it until there is no trace left. When the young one is beaten, the old one will be shot with bullets made of small ones. Also, doesn't this gun suck something into it and make bullets? Find particularly hard rocks or iron objects to synthesize armor-piercing bullets. Find cursed weapons or other debris to synthesize cursed bombs. Find the infected parts of the infected person's body and synthesize infection bombs. Find items that can cure various difficult and complicated diseases and synthesize treatment bombs. Find Lao Ba's delicious food hidden in the toilet and synthesize the secret bomb. Advanced use Retrieve the used bullets Wood bullets x2 → Compressed wood bullets Hard bone + liquid → Injection bullets Explosive bullets x2 → Compression bombs Water bombs x2 → Compressed water bombs Molten iron → High temperature bullets (ಡωಡ) The author can use it for reference. I feel that throwing this gun to anyone can turn that person into a low-end version of a pig's foot.

Abominable dog and fox, do you need the bones from my left hand or the grapes from my right hand? Could it be that you need that shotgun behind you? Choose one! Whether you want to renew or be caught by the Spurs, you can't choose a dead end!

It's really fun to watch, but the bad guy's strength is too high. I really don't understand why the bad guy didn't rule the world before the protagonist appeared. He was completely overwhelmed by his strength. One bad guy can crush the whole city.

I can't understand the world background and I don't know what is introduced. The characters are a bit confusing, the plot is unclear, and the occupations are vague. Maybe the author started writing before he had figured out how to write.

After reading Chapter 40, write a book review. The advantages are obvious: 1. The items made by Goldfinger are very imaginative and interesting 2. The use of Goldfinger is not brainless and has divergent research thinking 3. There are many cool operations used by Goldfinger Obviously poisonous, so far I have only seen the "enemy's IQ is not high", but there are many shortcomings: 1. The world background is not clearly explained. What kind of world is the protagonist in and how is the distribution of power? What is containment? Does everyone know about the containment objects? What is a professional? 2. The plot advances too slowly. It has been 40 chapters and I have only fought 3 enemies. There are too many daily routines. 3. It doesn't matter if there are too many daily routines. The plot is incoherent. For example, what someone else wrote is a narrative of a major event. You Are You is a narration of trivial things, as small as having a meal and talking about them alone. The content is too jumpy and it is very strange to read. 4. Forget it, the matter is not explained clearly. For example, when a big event happens, it has a beginning, a process, and no end. Did it jump right to the end? Every time it jumps directly to the beginning of the next plot... (See attachment for details) 5. The objects created by Goldfinger can talk. People who may like this will like this, but personally I feel like Goldfinger is conscious and I don't like it Finally , this book is for fun and fun, not the passionate monster-fighting I thought... It's not bad, it's interesting, it's really interesting Attachment: 1. Fighting the first monster is the only one that has an ending, but it only says there is a reward. The process of obtaining rewards, what they are specifically, and what their uses are are not explained. You get rewards for defeating monsters, and the rewards are quite cool. The author actually mentioned it in one sentence... 2. There is no ending when you defeat the second monster. What about other people's surprises and changes in the protagonist? This is quite cool. What about the supporting character's change in the protagonist? This is the link between the plot that follows. 3. Fight the third monster, there is no ending. This one actually doesn't have an ending, it's just... Teammates go to ambush, the protagonist kills the monster, doesn't he say a word to his teammates? Otherwise, they will continue to ambush stupidly? And this involves containment objects. What is the reaction of teammates to the containment objects? Are teammates aware of the existence of the containment object? This is important, okay? Because the following plot has a premise that "everyone knows what the containment object is", but you didn't even mention it...

After reading a few chapters, the descriptions of physical phenomena are very general. If you don't know how to write, don't force it. Just like six bullets consume 2 cubic meters of soil, how much does it consume if you encounter steel? You are a typical incompetent person who cannot write.

The author has already started a new book. This one is basically Eunuch. The last book was the longest one, but it was only 650,000 words. I have also read it. To sum up, the author has some ideas, so his book is very interesting in the early stage, but it has no rhythm at all, so it falls apart soon. I would like to make a suggestion. First, write an outline honestly and write one or two million words according to the outline. Such a crazy and unfinished book will not be good to readers. At least I will detour from this author in the future.

The lifespan of madmen should be weakened. Martial arts practitioners have a long lifespan, while lunatics have a short lifespan. If you don't advance within the time limit, you will die Just like in Xianxia, ​​the progress of the righteous path is slow but solid, and the progress of the magic path is fast but high-risk.

What I wrote before is quite good, but suddenly the gun became conscious and could talk, acting like a clown. It was really superfluous.