
World of Warcraft: My Health Bar Is a Little Long
魔兽:我的血条有点长
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- Completed
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- 1.2M Words
- Genre
- Gaming
- Subgenre
- Game Otherworld
- Updated
- 3y ago
- Source
- Qidian
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This is a discussion post about my personal thoughts. Please speak in a civilized manner and do not post advertisements. Thank you.
I have a question, what type of warrior does the author intend to create? High agility High damage High output Or round (we usually call hexagonal warriors with six basic attributes, but there seems to be more than six in Warcraft) Actually, it doesn't matter which one you plan to develop. I don't know how to write your outline, but you have to remember that Warcraft is the most complete version of the early mrpg game. You can consider writing the background story of Warcraft and the background story of World of Warcraft. And the most important point is that as long as the main background doesn't collapse, the side scenes don't matter. I remember that a big boss once wrote a novel with six main story endings. Of course, the result was that there was no main story, so it didn't become popular. There are also numerical issues that you can handle yourself. If you are still playing this game, just pretend that I didn't mention it.
The timeline is so messed up. Where did the orcs come from without the dark door opening? Where did the tribe come from? Where did the undead come from? Where did the natural disaster come from? Do you really know a little bit about Warcraft and start cheating on nostalgia?
Emm... Author, do you know how to make the protagonist a wise fool? It should change a bit, but remember not to deviate from the original goal. If you can't understand, I'm sorry that my ability to describe can only go so far. You can ask the master in the comment area to help me explain it.
It is recommended that the author clarify the background. Although the theme of Warcraft is good, but if you don't grasp it well, after reading a few chapters, it doesn't look like a game, and it can't describe the style of another world. It will definitely collapse in the later stage. I don't know if you have read the books Death Trail/Shadow Trail in Azeroth. They are very good books about otherworldly monsters. As a hardcore gamer, your writing can obviously lead to familiar locations, environments, quest lines, etc. In World of Warcraft, which are familiar to game players. But as a novel, you cannot use games to limit your thinking. Players and readers want to see a lively, more realistic, logical and fantasy Azeroth, rather than a simple game mission and plot repeater.
I have opened a new book. I hope you can collect it and contribute more. I also hope you can criticize and correct it, so that the author can learn from experience and present better chapters to everyone.
An online game novel with a time-travel skin, the protagonist is still a SB
I can't look straight at the name of the protagonist. Whose name is Hui Sun? 😂😂 It's very weird especially in the context of Warcraft.
The author obviously wrote a good rhythm, but why should he tamper with history? 🤔 Things before the protagonist's time travel must not be changed, otherwise he would just be wearing the skin of a World of Warcraft. Now after the time travel, the impact of the protagonist on the future can be freely exerted by the author. The butterfly's wings haven't been flapped yet, so why are the original things changed first?
The timeline is very messy and the race settings and history are also messy. Is the author really a player? Have you read Chronicle?
Writing so far, the biggest highlight is that there are no highlights. Since writing a complete game world. Have you seen the online game Melee Mage? The plot is copied from his.