The Journey Starts from Zhongnan Mountain

The protagonist is like a Taoist priest, with a quiet personality and a kind heart. As for the Holy Mother, it means that you are selfish and have read too much. You make a fuss when others do good things. Many martial arts novels are either about upgrading the experience of killing someone or collecting martial arts secrets from everywhere to pretend to be a slap in the face. They also talk about the dangers of the world and then go on to be selfish with peace of mind. Martial arts only look at the martial arts protagonist without a chivalrous heart, that is Young and Dangerous.

What I dislike most about reading is: the introduction is weak, please read the text. You can't write an introduction of dozens of words, but can you write a novel of a million words?

The protagonist doesn't have the Virgin, but he doesn't have the "decisiveness to kill" (in fact, he kills all the villains who should be killed), so don't be fooled by the comment section! Personal poisonous point: When the protagonist goes down the mountain, he encounters people from the Beggar Gang who break the hands and feet of children and let them beg (a classic villain), and then punishes the evildoers. Later, he meets Hong Qigong, who teaches Guo Jing. Hong Qigong said: Although they deserve their punishment, it is not your turn to kill the members of the Beggar Gang. If you come and receive my three palms, I will let you go, and the protagonist happily accepts! It really makes me sick!

The system is a bit redundant! This kind of experience system for killing monsters that makes your character crazy! Just write it as a scholar! Stand and stand again!

After watching it, I read in the comments that there was no Virgin Mary problem, but there really wasn't one. The protagonist was relatively dull, but he didn't hesitate to attack when he really encountered a bad guy. That's why I changed my mind from the part where the protagonist kills Ouyang Ke. The personality of the protagonist and the system do not match well. This is also a point criticized by many people. This system is typical of killing and upgrading, but the protagonist does not kill casually and does not need to upgrade martial arts through the system. To be honest, apart from upgrading weapons and armor, this system really does not have much sense of existence. This leads to a problem: those who come for the system feel that the system is not playing its role, and those who come for the protagonist, the Taoist priest, feel that having an extra system that is dispensable is meaningless and does not please both parties.

The plot is bland, without the imagination of a time traveler, just like a native. I have no desire to read any more. In fact, there is no need to put shackles on oneself like a Taoist priest. After traveling through time, one can either live in the world of demons, or live in the heavens, where humans have no desires or desires and are devoted to transcendence. After all, all living beings are just ants.

How can we practice Taoism without kindness? I think what you commenters are saying is that it's magic cultivation!

The comment section mentioned that the main character is the Holy Mother, and I just laughed. She punishes rape and eradicates evil, kills bad people and does good deeds. She neither shows mercy to others, nor lets go of those who do bad things, nor does she do good deeds beyond her ability. How come she is the Holy Mother! ! ! Have you never seen Our Lady of Bitch? !

There are too many selfish time-travel protagonists. Finally, there is a time-travel protagonist with upright views. The writing is good! Come on, author!

He was not a monk at that time. He is the emperor, and his wife cuckolded him. He also gave his wife good food and drink, and let him give birth to the child. Then he had to lose the qualifications of Wujue to save his child. He was originally going to save it, but then he saw that the child had a token of love between his wife and another man. Ordinary people would get angry if they were cuckolded. What's more, he was an emperor and was well fed and fed. His wife asked him to save the adulterer's son, and he would lose his position as the Five Greatest Emperors. You have the nerve to make trouble like this. In modern times, your wife cuckolded you and gave birth to the adulterer's son. You didn't cause trouble to your wife, but you still fed and raised him well. One day the child got sick and your wife asked you to save him. If you save him, you will lose your status as one of the top five most powerful individuals in the country. You can save it or not. Disgusting cuckolding plot, or the emperor's cuckolding

You have the power. If a wicked person comes into your hands, why don't you kill him and let him kill more innocent people? Laughing to death.

If you really come to the world of divine sculptures, you will become a Taoist priest with a golden finger. There is no need to interact with the characters in the original work, just peacefully cultivate immortality.

During the Anti-Japanese War, you had been living as a Japanese in Manchuria. Your father and mother were very good to you, and your master (a Chinese) was also very good to you. Suddenly, a Chinese told you that he was your father, and your mother suddenly said that you were really Chinese. What should you do? I just want to know what they have been doing in the past ten years. Your mother Bao Xiruo, Yang Kang, and why his master Qiu Chuji didn't tell Yang Kang that he was a Han, but let Yang Kang grow up as the son of the Sixth Prince of the Jin Kingdom.

That's not the case with Holy Mother, but what's the use of this plug-in if it's written or not? Is this a plug-in to write about traditional martial arts? ? ? And it's very, very dull, and the writing is very bland, and there's nothing eye-catching about it.

Generally speaking, Madonnas are still eunuchs. They are not crisp at all. They have graduated from kindergarten and know how to make corrections. The writing is very good.

The writing is good, but something feels a little off. The plot is a bit awkward. Maybe it's because I've read so many Shuang articles, but I always feel that the protagonist's words and deeds are too pretentious! And some settings are illogical. For example, the Black Iron Sword that was purchased at a great cost can even cut Ouyang Feng's crutch. What kind of magic weapon is it? You must know that the Yitian Sword, which is also made from the Dark Iron Heavy Sword, is as sharp as clay. The weapon produced by your system is not as powerful as the weapons made by others. So why spend a lot of money to get it? You spent a lot of time describing why it was so difficult and what did you describe?

Emmm, the protagonist's character is a bit unlikable.

It felt good at first. In my impression, Taoist priests should be pure and devoid of desires. But I had to add Li Mochou, which looked uncomfortable. Maybe the benevolent sees benevolence and the wise see wisdom. If Li Mochou can be dealt with later, I will still be interested in taking a look.

After reading it, saying that the Holy Mother is a bit too much, what should I say? The protagonist is considered to be the person in the new generation who has been most affected by education. It's like he has never been beaten by society, but it can't be all like this, just a little kind? Or it can be said that apart from those descriptions, it is completely unimaginable that this thing is a time traveler. A time traveler will not kill people and set fire to gold belts, but it will definitely not understand anything like him.

This Li Mochou is too weak. A few snake slaves can still be faster than Li Mochou. Is Li Mochou's martial arts so low?

People nowadays are so violent. It's hard to find a protagonist with very upright views, but I still wonder why the protagonist doesn't kill anyone. Is killing someone good? You must be merciful and merciful. You haven't even attended the compulsory education provided by the country, right?

It's a shame, but it's fascinating. This book cannot be read by all ages. Full of sage's sense of lack of time and desire, don't read if you are under thirty, it is not suitable 🤫🤫

My grades are pretty good, why don't I write them down?

This book is indeed average and kept me busy for a few hours...

Cut? ? ? Last update on the 4th?

Can the ones updated 11 days ago be included in the popular books? ? ? ?

He died after raising it for a month

I really don't believe this protagonist is really a time traveler.

The protagonist, a time traveler, has system plug-ins, but they are basically not used. It is said that practicing by yourself is more helpful for mastering. The protagonist belongs to Taoist ideology and is a pure good man. He has no desires in human nature and lives like an ascetic. He eats hard cakes and drinks mountain spring water. Not fond of women, White Lotus generally behaves in a manner that emphasizes persuading people with virtue, and does not kill people unless absolutely necessary. Even if it is a bad guy, he must first give the opponent a chance and then kill him if he is stubborn. The protagonist's martial arts level is equivalent to the flying bat among the Seven Monsters of the South. He can't beat the heroine Li Mochou in a one-on-one fight.

I feel that it is better to remove the identity of the time traveler. Maybe the indigenous people will not be scolded so badly in the beginning.