I'm Copying Under the Swallowing Starry Sky

I can't stand it anymore after reading Chapter 26, it's too witty, bye

Let's do less conspiracies! In Swallowing the Starry Sky and Earth, the pressure for human survival is still very high. If there were too many conspiracies, the human race on earth would have perished long ago. A large part of the reason why so many people like Swallowing the Starry Sky is that the protagonist is decent enough and humans are relatively united.

Good guy, the author suddenly stabbed a seventeen-year-old warrior in the back. The extreme martial arts gym did not take the initiative to recruit him, and it took more than half a year for Master Haoming to go to Jia Yi to establish a relationship. This is outrageous. Do you know how outrageous it is? If this is the case, why call it an elite training camp? Let's just call it Guanxi/Rich Second Generation Training Camp.

I won't watch it if it affects reality. In the Devouring Starry Sky, the Lord of the Universe can only fish people out of past images but cannot influence the past. What does Devouring mean to the author? He can interfere with the past as soon as he reaches the apprentice level. In Devouring the Worldview. There is no such world view! That is a time paradox.

Just give the skills to Hong Bu directly through the Extreme Martial Arts Gym. After all, they are useless after leaving the earth. The world of Devouring Starry Sky is huge. It is really pointless to engage in these conspiracies and tricks on the earth.

After watching it, tell me your feelings. The layout is really small. The whole day is filled with little tricks that are not very useful. Let's just talk about Lingyin Temple. If it is handed over to Hong, nothing will happen, but it's really useless. Quite annoying. If you follow this way of writing, how many people can read it on the shelves? The original audience of the fanfic is the readers of the original book. The layout is bigger.

As long as you don't engage in the Three Brothers and Four Brothers of Earth and write your own story, you can continue to watch it.

It is full of loopholes, many settings are different from the original work, and it looks awkward. At the gate of the elite training camp, as a person who joined the camp in August 1956, can you see someone with a student number starting with 57? Learning from the original work does not mean that you copy it.

Does the struggle between the earth and the universe still have meaning?

Write your own creative ideas, as long as the original work is marginal, I support you! Come on!

Thank you all for your comments. I hope you guys can point out the parts that look boring. A newbie is starting out and needs your generous guidance.

I read the author's book today, and then read some reviews. Well, the reviews are very objective. The author's style is indeed not big enough, and there is no need to write those vain things. In my personal opinion, overall, the author's writing is good, but some aspects really need to be paid attention to. For example, after the protagonist obtains the spiritual cultivation method and goes to Lingyin Temple, the protagonist must know who Yan Hai is. Thinking about it from another perspective, if it were me, I wouldn't go even if I didn't know the subsequent plot. In short, there are a few points that need to be noted, and I won't go into details about the others. The other thing is about the spiritual training method. It is best not to add things that are not in the original work. You will make those of us who are original writers dislike it very much. In the original work, although Yan Hai is a congressman, he is just like that. He cannot be among the top five on earth, but you added the setting of spiritual power. There is no way it can be worse than the Fourth Speaker East (is that the name?) Well, it seems outrageous. It's best not to add things that you don't have. If you really want to write, you can say that Yan Hai didn't get the secret, but he has been coveting it for many years, so he has been sending people to keep an eye on Master Haoming.

The 17-year-old spiritual master is still a super genius as a martial artist. In the previous chapters, when he was arrested and interrogated, the Extreme Martial Arts School didn't even ask.

Seeing the 25th picture, there are two poisonous points. First, the copy can affect reality, which is interfering with history. Even the true god does not have that ability. Some people may say that the system is awesome, that's good. So what is the significance of this setting? It was fine in the early stage, but after immortality, even the Master of the Universe, under the influence of the copy, did some memories appear in the mind out of thin air in reality? Second, if you get the mental power cultivation method and sell it directly on the Internet, the appraiser will contact Hong directly. With Hong as your backer, isn't it easy to pass the Earth chapter? Or does the author think that you can write a flower about the earth? Not much to say, I wish the author better and better results. This is not my cup of tea. Say goodbye.

How can you write a fanfic if it doesn't follow the original plot?

Monster hunting in the elite training camp is based on odd and even numbers, which are the odd and even numbers of the ranking, not the upper and lower half months.

What are you writing about😅😅😅

It feels like the author doesn't understand Swallowing Starry Sky and the pretentious writing is too childish.