Something's Wrong with My Love Simulator

I feel like the male protagonist Yazi is not very smart....

Why does the protagonist have to get in touch with Takahashi as if he has been brainwashed? That's weird

It's an interesting setting, but I don't know how to complain about it being made so boring by the author. The creation of the protagonist in the opening chapter failed too much. I don't see anything like the reincarnation of an adult social animal, and he behaves exactly like a timid high school student. For example, "being laughed at for writing a light novel" may be a big mental blow to a high school student, but for a reincarnated person who decides to become a literary copywriter, who would care about such a trivial matter? And even if you really care, is it difficult to prepare in advance so that others don't discover you? The simulation really simulates loneliness. Because the protagonist in the simulation became a bitch, it is correct to care about the heroine. But shouldn't the protagonist's top priority be his own survival, money issues, and his original memory and interpersonal relationships? I traveled through time for a month and basically accomplished nothing. Such a protagonist is really unlikable.

At first glance, the writing wasn't a big problem. It was probably the conflict with the settings at the beginning that led to the decision to quit. The author said that the protagonist was a social animal before time travel, and he was still the type who knew how to take time out from the busy schedule. Then he was an adult with work experience, and it seems that he was not a technical geek without social interaction. He was also a type like Chinese people who usually feel more reserved, steady, and patient. In the end, his performance was really no different from that of a high school student.

The more I look at it, the more uncomfortable I feel. Like it is. A 1+1 question. You forcefully get 0.4-0.8-2.1-2.5, Where you keep pulling through simulation. And the most important thing is the simulated future. It's obvious at a glance that it doesn't fit the character of the protagonist, and the future of a sidekick has to be forcibly added to the protagonist. Just like what the protagonist said. How could my future be like this?

Why fall in love? After all, the system is also a tool, right? Why should the protagonist like her? The description feels a bit abrupt.

It's long overdue

I read more than ninety chapters in one go, and then I saw the author saying why no one is following it, so I would like to give a brief evaluation. I personally prefer to read Japanese, two-dimensional, and love-style books. Basically, I have read all the books in this genre. The author's book gave me the feeling that it was a bit empty, and the plot was a bit chaotic, with a feeling of anticlimactic. The highlight is that the character descriptions are in place. Kiyono, Takahashi, and the teacher have clear personalities, which is a very important point in light novels. To put it simply, the story was not told well but the characters were well established.

I've been flirting with each other for hundreds of times, but I'm still a virgin

Please give me some credit, author, I contributed two collections by myself!

I want to watch it but I can't stand it (눈_눈)(｡•ˇ‸ˇ•｡)（｡ò ∀ ó｡）

There are so few people @@, and a diver like me, a reader, can't help but jump out to help the author replenish his energy. I hope not to be a eunuch

After reading the latest chapter, I feel that the protagonist is really a loser. He didn't keep his ex-girlfriend, nor did he keep the girl who liked him. He also lived with his teacher who liked him for three years and nothing happened. It feels like a waste of my subscription!

The two choices are to either speed through the plot or complete the 300 chapters with daily updates. The conflict is not so rushed.

There are reasons for poor grades. . . Goldfinger + Rebirth has such a huge advantage. I just want to write light novels. It's really awesome.

Some suggestions Overall it is quite interesting But the progress is too slow The overall plot with the heroine is too thin I can't feel the charm of the heroine Everything else is fine And I hope the male protagonist will stop being a licker and be a normal person 😭

I feel like everyone feels angry when they complain. The writing is good, but the logic doesn't make sense (maybe the perspectives of boys and girls are different). You can add an explanation to this setting. Why can't you run the simulation without conquering the heroine? What you wrote is about changing the future now (development theory), but you also said that you can only change the future by conquering the heroine (causation theory)? ? ? Are you eating settings? Please explain. You said that even if the system is down, it is much better than forcing settings.

Why don't you change it to a social fearful social animal? The protagonist's emotional intelligence is too poor.

I feel like I don't understand what I'm seeing.

Yes, Yuanjia, my Yuanjia 😭 Let's not go to the dome, let's go back to the hero's house and enjoy it!

The setting is obviously good, and the writing is also good, but it is just watery (after I wrote about the heroine being an idol behind her back, I immediately became obsessed with the whole chapter and put it aside to introduce neon idols. I read the previous chapters in a hurry and didn't pay much attention to it. It's actually quite watery. And because of the watery content, the plot progress is very slow. I was a little impatient after finishing the book. It would be strange if people who follow the book don't run away). In addition, the male protagonist is written as a mentally retarded licker. In the end, your golden finger was tied to a person and made to be licked by the male protagonist? You can definitely have more female protagonists, so even if you just want to improve the word count, it will be much better than the current situation.

To be honest, why are we pursuing this Takahashi? I have to treat the teacher well, so it's good. It's not bad to turn it into a sweet love story. Anyway, it seems that only a few of us are pursuing Takahashi, and most of them don't like Takahashi.

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There is sand in the clear fields, isn't this Ini Minase! The author is also a water person.

It feels quite impressive. Good luck to the author.

Not bad, I hope there are 1.5 Million words

In fact, after the male protagonist has simulated it so many times, has he never thought that he might be able to simulate something that most men want to do? Give yourself two more wings than enter

After actually watching it, I felt that the heroine was really in trouble! The difficulty is too high. Are the various favorability events and the sweet love relationship with the protagonist just because of the simulator?

I have ordered them all, but the author wants to commit suicide. Come on, it's a little immature, but it's okay. I stayed up until 4 o'clock, and I'm sleepy =_=

I have ordered all the books and I support the author. I think the writing is very good. I checked and found that there are no pirated copies. It must be a problem with promotion. Books like Starting Point are really difficult. I hope the author is happy writing it. If you don't have the motivation, put it down at the right time.