The Great Power Minister of the Warring States

What a cliché plot. To conquer the world, one naturally needs to be ruthless. What's wrong with marrying a princess like Emperor Wen of Sui, Yang Jian? He's lived three lifetimes and is still like this. Just like those two scoundrels in "Twin Dragons of the Tang Dynasty." Ultimately, they can't amount to anything. Conquering the world? Dream on.

To be honest, there's a reason this book flopped! A protagonist like this, living three lifetimes, is clearly lacking in intelligence! In the Li Mu storyline, the protagonist gets excited upon meeting someone—does he even know you? In the Lu Bu storyline, after receiving money, you either recruit him or kill him—cooperation?

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The State of Zhao? 😏😏😏 Hmm, has Zhao Ji, this woman, made any plans for her life? 😏😏😏😏

This book is too narrow in scope; if you're writing about the Warring States period, it feels like you're only writing about palace intrigue.

Who's watching your palace intrigue? What's the point of the "Princess wants you" plot? Are you trying to say the protagonist is incredibly powerful? That he can go toe-to-toe with Empress Dowager Zhao? Or is it just for showing off and getting humiliated? So, the previous theoretical discussions are already done, what's the point of this plot now? You're out of ideas, so just say it.

The protagonist is a time traveler. He knows that the unification of Qin is inevitable, that Qin Shi Huang is a king among kings, that the King of Zhao is a tyrant who caused Li Mu's death, and that both Qin and Zhao are part of the Chinese civilization. Yet, he chooses to defend Zhao to the death and even sacrifices himself for Zhao.

You've used the same old plot again; I doubt many people will read it anyway, since it's your book.

Based on the synopsis, I thought the protagonist was serving in the Qin state, and I wondered how useless he had to be to be so easily defeated by the ruler. But after reading it, I learned that in his past life, the protagonist was determined to hang himself on a crooked tree in the Zhao state.

I feel that the reign of King Zhao during the Warring States period was the pinnacle of power.