I Built a Hyper-Realistic Game

If you read without thinking, your brain will get rusty, but there are too many interesting articles, which made me embarrassed. I was embarrassed by the poisonous points, so I went to the comment area to complain.

I hope it won't float away after the strength is expressed. Suppress it. You must suppress it. The power system of Mortal Cultivation of Immortality has several thousand chapters. See how long you can hold it down.

The writing is great. It covers the reality, the game, and the player's play process. It's very well organized. It would be great if there were foreshadowings. At least I haven't thought of them now. I might have seen them, but I didn't think much about them. It's too confusing to read other novels of the same type. This one is good.

In fact, I like Zhou Qingyang's pyrotechnic character more than the female college student who is a bit out of touch with ordinary people. Maybe it is more relevant to real life, and it makes me feel more involved than the female character who is getting more and more outrageous So far, I feel that these people's understanding and acceptance abilities are really outrageous. , According to the world view described by the author, the level of technology in the real world is actually similar to that of our world, so it is impossible for those of us to be so calm when encountering these super technologies and the use of magic or props in reality. In terms of my feelings, there are only two words: reduce intelligence There are also some personal suggestions. Of course, the author doesn't have to worry about it. After all, this is my personal opinion: 1. The number of explorers doesn't actually need to be too many. Developing into an organization is more mysterious or cliché than becoming a game, otherwise it feels too cheap 2. The author doesn't need to interfere too much with the explorer game and give the explorer a little freedom. Otherwise, it feels like a linear game and is too passive br> 3, 24:1 can do a lot of things. I feel that things in the article happen too fast or too urgent. It can be appropriate for explorers to slowly integrate, such as exploring dilapidated castles, lost ancient kingdoms, mysterious legends, fairies, giants, mermaids and other races in the mythical world. Wouldn't it be interesting for explorers living in the real world to collide with them? 4. Please don't follow your facial features. Beautiful women are good people or have some unspeakable secrets. If there is a conflict between a male character and a female character, there must be something wrong with the male character or there is something wrong with both sides. Although there is nothing wrong with this approach, the epic feeling is too low.

What kind of crazy intelligence do these characters have? They are too poisonous.

The idea is great and the writing is beautiful, but there are so many bugs in the plot and settings that I was really put off by it. If possible, I hope the author can revise it again.

Don't wait, there's basically no chance if it lasts more than three days.

It's nice to look at, but it's a little bit toxic in some places.

Come on, author, the potential of your novel is 8 points, which can be compared with some masterpieces. If you work hard and write steadily, you can become a god in one book.

Has the author written any other books? I always feel familiar