The Ability Users' Survival Game

I sent a girl to the game at the beginning. She dared to touch such poisonous points. How brave she was.

After reading dozens of chapters, I'm a little disappointed. It's been a long time since I've seen such an attractive subject matter, and the writing skills are up to par. The above are the advantages Let's talk about the problem. After reading the title introduction, I believe everyone's default expectation for this work is a battle royale survival game. There is no doubt that it should be a traditional apocalyptic survival game at its core But the cruelty of the killing is almost invisible, the collapse of order is not seen, the pressure of survival is not seen, the protagonist is just like playing The most important thing is that I meet the heroine in Chapter 23, I start to contact other people in Chapter 4, I find that there are more than ten people in the community in Chapter 6, and I rely on an unnatural event to force the child. People in the area gather together to strengthen contact, and then there is a copy of the community... OK, to summarize, this book only has 1 chapter of battle royale survival elements, and then it directly changes to exploration, strategy, organization... There is no doubt that it is off topic It is not impossible to have a female protagonist, it is not impossible to have organization, and it is not impossible to explore. No, but these should be branch lines under the main line of survival. With many years of bookworm experience, at least the first twenty or thirty chapters should be about single-player survival. You can meet the heroine during the period and avoid each other, and then become comrades and join a group for warmth, cherish each other, and decide to survive together because of certain beliefs... This would be more suitable. In short, the disappointment is greater than the expectation. The author still needs to work hard. If he is willing, I hope the author can readjust the outline and re-publish it if there is a chance. I will support him then Above

Nowadays, there are too many novice readers, so many good online articles are well received but not popular. Like Van Gogh, they became famous only after their death.

Such a good-looking book has so little popularity. What is the starting point for? I am still a daily guide 😭

Personally, I feel that if I really encounter this kind of game! I believe in gay friendship more! Women really affect the speed of drawing a knife

The first volume was okay The second volume turned into a team competition with the whole family On the contrary, it became boring The reason why jojo is exciting is that it controls 1v1 and does not have a team competition

After reading the beginning, there is no need to conflict with the dragon-clawed man. .

After seeing this introduction, I wanted to come in and take a look 😍

Yes, it's quite interesting. After reading the first volume, I don't see anything bad about it.

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