Elf: I Am Adopted Son Sakaki

In my opinion, the biggest flaw of this book is the identity of the time traveler given by the author. It's understandable that I don't know anything. After all, not everyone plays Pokémon. The biggest problem is psychological. He is so naive that I suspect that he traveled through time when he was eleven or twelve years old. If he cannot travel back to his age, just change his mental age. But the author also writes that he is an experienced Internet surfer, which is a bit contradictory. How else can I correct Sakaki, freeze bank cards, not use poisonous orbs, and a series of other things. While saying that I can accept people who wander in gray areas, I am a black and white person, giving people a feeling of being both upright and independent. The protagonist is very childish. The novel is like a cartoon on a children's channel more than ten years ago. It feels like it is not for adults. If this book was written about the indigenous protagonist, he would be a proper seedling of food and grass, but the result would be that the time traveler is a big poisonous point. In short, if you like to see the psychological growth of the protagonist of Time Traveler, you can watch it, Liangcao; if you can't accept that the protagonist is particularly childish, I suggest you not watch it, Toxic.

If you don't understand the plot, why bother setting up the identity of a time traveler?

Nidoking Classic physical attacker, the characteristics have not been written yet (I may have missed it?), But I think it will be easier to use if forced (laughs) Big Mouth Bat (should evolve to have a very high degree of intimacy) Let's just talk about the cross bat, it has a good speed line, but other values ​​​​are too low (all points are given to speed), physical attack is higher than attack, mental power characteristics will not flinch, and Mente penetration is rare. It depends on how the author distributes Abo Monster Only the physical attack can be seen (another physical attacker?). It is worth mentioning that the distribution of racial values ​​​​is relatively good in terms of speed and special defense. The trait Molt/Intimidate is fine, no bells and whistles needed. Ghost Let's talk about Gengar directly, a classic high-speed special attacker. Speaking of characteristics, since Gengar is from Kanto, the characteristic must be floating (laughing). The cursed body is useless (floating Gengar will always be a god!). It can also act as a mega hand. In short, how can there be such a cute pokemon like Gengar! Afterword In short, the protagonist seems to be in the poison team. It is not very necessary to fill the blind. These skill pools have a wide attack surface (total). For joint defense, I personally recommend Dragon King Scorpion (but where is the evil in Guandong!), The attack surface is good and the racial value is good. In addition, you can look for water poison (the first one) Thinking of Super Bad Star) Weed Poison (Shield Mushroom) or simply just use Grass Steel (laughing) It's so interesting to be in the team (laughing) I am just a Pokémon cloud player. If there is anything wrong with the point I made, please discuss it rationally~ (At the end of writing, I suddenly realized that the author did not seem to mention the characteristics of the protagonist Pokémon)

还没开始看，那个……emm，那个，那个娜、娜姿     （苍蝇搓手+一脸讨好）

Prologue Liu Bo ordered Feng Wang to capture the gifted children (Lan is 5 years old and Yin is 2 years old) ↓5 years later, Lan and Yin escaped and took away the important Rainbow Feather and Silver Feather First Generation Red, Green, and Blue Chapter The three protagonists first appeared in age: 11 years old Memorables: Defeating Team Rocket, Red became the league champion (In the Johto area in the same year, Ruby saved Safia, which led to the liberation of Rayquaza) ↓2 years later Yellow Chapter Major Events: Battle of the Four Heavenly Kings ↓1 year later Second Generation Gold·Silver·Crystal Chapter Major Events: Defeat the remnants of Team Rocket, Guliu is lost in time and space ↓2 years later Third Generation Ruby·Sapphire Chapter Major Events: Red Flame Pine and Water Sycamore are involved in the turbulence of time and space ↓Half a year later (the following year) Re-enactment of the First Generation Fire Red·Leaf Green Chapter Major Events: Red, Green, Blue, Little Yellow and Little Silver were petrified ↓Same Year Third Generation Emerald Chapter Major Events: Battle Area, Water Sycamore Resurrected ↓3 Years Later Second Generation Reissue Heart Gold·Soul Silver Chapter Major Events: The Four Generals of Team Rocket, Arceus

I didn't agree with the comments earlier that complained about the protagonist's identity as a time traveler. After all, I don't care much about whether the protagonist knows the plot or game knowledge. But when I read Chapter 47, the awkward feeling became stronger and stronger. To be honest, the protagonist's performance so far is no different from that of a slightly precocious indigenous child. However, the identity of this time traveler has become very embarrassing, because it does not bring any necessary help but is different from the protagonist's. Expression conflict (self-discipline and other things can also be achieved through strict education or character setting). For example, I said earlier that my age in two lifetimes combined is older than Xiaolan's and I don't like her attitude of treating herself as a sister. However, judging from the performance, the combined age of these two lifetimes does not make him more mature than Xiaolan... I really like to read novels with the protagonist coming of age, but maybe as other readers have suggested, it is better to downplay the identity of the time traveler.

The seniors are right. The book review section accepts reasonable and well-intentioned criticism, but immediately deletes it if it comes up.

To share some happy news, I would like to recommend it. Although it is just a mosquito leg, I am still very happy. It will start next Monday, April 17th. The recommendation period will be changed to 3 updates and 6k updates every day. Thank you readers for your support. Thank you very much!

The Strongest Man

Special fanfic, yay (✪▽✪)!

It looks like it's gone. Let's put some fragrance on it.

Reject the heroine Xiaolan and support Ah Xing

This book is published directly, and I have been afraid of not being able to sign a contract, so I dare not reply to comments. (Mainly because I am afraid that I will run away and face Jiangdong's elders without words.) Now that I have received the station message, I can finally stand up! Thank you very much for your favorites and recommendation votes. It is the data in the background that keeps me updated until now. Before I came to the website, I would finish two chapters and 4,000 words every day and then stop writing. I didn't save the manuscript. You should be able to tell by looking at the update time. But now that I have signed a contract, I will definitely start saving articles for occasional outbreaks. I also hope that if you have any suggestions, you can put them forward in the comment area or in this chapter, and I will read them. Here, I would like to thank all the book friends who clicked in. Especially my friend Songbai Changmian, who sent a lot of comments about this chapter in the early days of writing, gave me great encouragement. Thank you!

It's quite good. After the Liu Bo chapter is over, I personally suggest that the author write some original plot to make a transition. The rhythm of the special episode is too tight. In the beginning, Gin and Watari made a half-year agreement, and then it felt like half a year has arrived not long after. I have done so many things and so many days have passed, but I don't feel at all. The plot of Celebi has just come out. Anyway, it is a fandom. Have you ever thought about the integration of TV worldviews? And how old is the protagonist now? If there is a birthday later, will the main characters be invited to come over and make a transition chapter?

Why do you need to get this little fan value? I feel so uncomfortable😣😣😣

Lately, it's all about the plot, and the protagonist seems to be a transparent person.