The Battle of Two Cities: I'm from Terra

Brothers, I want to finish writing this book properly. This post is to record some of the problematic parts you see. After seeing them, I can know where I wrote that was discouraging and avoid making the same mistakes in the future. Or, there are some reading problems. Some brothers mentioned the paragraphing issue before. Sometimes a paragraph is indeed too long and can be a bit dizzying to read. If you are not used to it, I will divide the paragraphs properly in the future.

I haven't played Calamity, but I have a deep impression of the original. For some potions, such as the Regeneration Potion, using Glimmer as the main ingredient makes sense. The Life Boost Potion is Glimmer plus Core. I think the Obsidian Skin Potion should be changed. Iron Skin Potion can already provide a significant increase in defense.

Seeing Terra in the description, I thought it was Holy Terra 😁

Holy Terra

Oh, it's Terraria. I thought it was Hallowed Terraria.

I knew it! If this were really from Holy Terra, wouldn't they be going crazy? It's all aliens.

I thought it was about the Holy Empire Terra, a fanfic of Warhammer 40k.

Chapter 5 completely captivated me; there was hardly any buildup before the real deal with Vanderlei was made. Frankly, the author rushed the writing; there was no build-up before the sex scenes, and it was both dry and damn saccharine. Let's go, let's go, brothers.

Those who mention Terraria are all good people. These days, when people think of Terraria, they don't think of Terraria anymore. There are probably no more than ten books on Qidian that mention Terraria.

My first impression of Terra was that it was Holy Terra.