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No matter how many rubbish novels you write, I won't read them. If you don't believe me, try reading ten novels a day.

My suggestion is that the younger sister should not have too many scenes, because if there are more girls, the younger sister will have more scenes and she is not the heroine, and it will be very uncomfortable to watch.

Please don't save the book. I'm reading it now. If you want to save it, please scroll to the latest chapter and then return to the original chapter. By the way, if you have anything to ask, you can ask here. I will try my best to reply to those who can.

Let me talk about my little thoughts: There is no transitional plot, and the plot changes very suddenly. I can't say this well, but when you read the novel for a long time, you will understand that there is no transition between plots. One second is a plot, and the next second is a direct transition, which is very abrupt. To put it bluntly, there is no "reason", no reason for the transition. I think if this is changed, the novel will be better.

I read it all in 91 minutes. I should say it or not, it's really good.

I have read Chapter 20 so far, and I feel that the pace is a bit fast, and my favorability has suddenly increased so much, but the viewing experience is okay. You can pay attention to the pacing problem, and the male protagonist seems to be purely to complete the task. It is recommended to weaken the system and strengthen the personal charm of the male protagonist. I haven't seen the back part yet. If there are improvements later, just pretend I didn't say it. Anyway, I wish you better and better writing.

Is there a Shura scene, a large stomachache scene, or a girl who is difficult to conquer?

The novel is really good-looking. The author made Futaba Ikemei very real, which made me feel really sick. Sometimes I really hate pushing the plot like this. Maybe I have never experienced this type of thing. When I looked at Futaba Ikemei, I felt angry when I thought that she might not lose anything at all.

It's not unpopular for no reason, it's too selective of readers.

Take your time, just don't be a eunuch

Ping Qingyue

How should I put it? The character of the male protagonist at the beginning is too conspicuous, but there are very few thoughts and ideas of the male protagonist. He just follows the system and feels like he has no soul. Apart from being handsome and following the system, he really has no personality.

The character design is too imitative, and the character's personality is not clearly written, which makes it look uncomfortable. The ending of Futaba is also very sudden. As a chaebol, even if he is targeted by two chaebols of the same level, he should be able to resist. Moreover, the status of the male protagonist is really not worth the effort for someone with such a background to help him. He is just a friend of these two people, and cutting off his own interests to help him should be more reasonable even if it is a fantasy novel. In the end, the collapse of Futaba's character is also terrible, and it is indeed stupid.

Author, have you not promoted your book elsewhere? Still quite interesting.

Why is there no Shennong? Is this book purified?

I was just about to start watching it, the update time was one day ago.... It ended before it even started?

So, does the author not read comments at all? Even if there are typos, they will not be corrected. . . . . .

Why are there so many repeated chapters?

I don't understand what it means to write this kind of system that binds women, and then write this kind of Japanese comic innocent romance novel. Let's change the system, and don't bind to bind!

At present, it seems that it has a single female protagonist, but it currently lacks plot impact. It's too bland, everything is good, but it's boring. Asura fields are being set up, and adultery arrests are being set up.

😭😭TJ again?