Kill That Villain!

First of all, I don't think this book is generally poisonous. First of all, there is no prioritization. Since we know that the fire poison on the first night is a difficulty, we should make more preparations. However, after the protagonist finished using the editor, he ignored it, ran to brush up his favorability, and then observed the daily life of the sect disciples. This operation really made me numb. You really believe in your golden finger. Then if the fire poison suppression is not going smoothly, you will scold the editor and laugh to death. I don't want to think about why you didn't make any preparations. It really looks very weak. What's even weirder is, since you want to ensure that you don't hurt the heroine, why don't you go into seclusion in a secret room yourself, or find an excuse to drive the heroine away? These two extremely simple methods are useless to the protagonist. I really don't understand. Then the protagonist destroyed the main hall and looked for a house on the mountain. It turned out to be the heroine's house. I really didn't expect that there would be such a bloody plot in 2022, but if you look inside, you will know that this house is occupied. What's even more outrageous is that the world will disappear once the heroine is gone. I can only say that this kind of papery world is really meaningless. Finally, a personal point of view. I don't like the heroine because her favorability is really inexplicable and she doesn't want to be a normal person when she is too energetic. Above.

The setting is too stupid. They have traveled through time and do not rely on their own actions to change cause and effect. What kind of editor are you using to change the plot?

Surprisingly good. I didn't expect much from the title. I ordered it all so the author can update it quickly.

I read the comments section before reading the book. Many people said that the second chapter was poisonous. I thought they wrote something. Isn't this normal? As a normal person, if you know that doing evil will bring bad consequences and even lead to your own death, then you just don't do evil. There are actually many people who think that the victim should be beaten to death directly to prevent the victim from retaliating for the evil he has not committed. It is simply ridiculous.

I read two chapters and found that the comment section is the most interesting. If you didn't read it, you wouldn't know that there are so many Middle Eastern war gods hidden in today's peaceful society! Each and every one of them kills people as easily as drinking water, and destroys souls as easily as blowing air. What? The mercenary king of the Middle East returns to Huadu and comes here to read novels, right? You may not be the same age as my shoe size, but you are still making such nonsense. It really makes me laugh all day long. I can read the reviews of this book and smile.

The road to the rivers and lakes is long, we meet again if we are destined, poison, death

I was pushed to it for no reason. I read the title of the book and the villain came in. After reading a few chapters, the storyline, writing, and protagonist's charm was about 0 for me. I admit that I am a bit picky, but I couldn't read this book ten years ago. And even if you are a great god, it is impossible for you to earn tens of thousands of monthly votes in just a dozen chapters...

This kind of mentally retarded book doesn't have female content but only male content? I'm always shocked when something bad happens.

This is how much money you have to pay to get to the top of the monthly ticket list... At least Xiaobai's writing has some writing skills. This feels like there is no logic... No matter which novel the Yuanying peak is in, it is easy to cross the river and climb the mountain... Here he is a second-rate fool...

I've read Chapter 20, so I'd like to give you a little review. Personally, I think this article has several obvious shortcomings. First, the worldview is insufficiently established. For example, there are only two staple foods in this article so far, one is spiritual porridge and the other is bran porridge; there is no basic differentiation indicator for immortality such as spiritual roots; even the cultivation method seems to only need one cultivation method, and the system only has a ruthless decision. It seems that wherever the author writes, the world view is constructed in such a way that the world view matches the plot. The author does not have a complete world of cultivating immortals in his mind, he is just writing a novel. Second, the character design has a clear sense of separation. The article explains that the original memory is not inherited, so the character design is made by an online writer playing a cold master. It was supposed to be cold yet warm, but instead it turned out to be cold without taking it seriously, and licking without paying attention. Moreover, there was an obvious difference in behavior. No one except the heroine doubted this, which will be discussed later. Third, there are serious logical contradictions. As mentioned above, there is such an obvious difference in the protagonist's behavior. Except for the heroine who was suspicious, no one else reacted at all. Moreover, the heroine just tried it out and nothing happened. Wouldn't she pay attention to the sudden change of a person she hates so much? There is also the problem of -75 favorability at the beginning. If I just keep sucking her spiritual energy, I don't think it will reach the level of -75. After all, the heroine seems to have never needed cultivation before and has not regretted it and developed hatred. Is -75 too high? If the male protagonist tortured the female protagonist, it didn't seem like it. It was only mentioned once when he went to the Foreign Affairs Pavilion, but after that, he didn't torture the female protagonist and didn't have any doubts. And for the part about the direct biography, I don't know why the heroine's favorability dropped. I just didn't doubt it and didn't think about it. Why was she still disgusted? Fourth is the problem of favorability. One is that the favorability has always been increased or decreased two or three times at a time. It is very strange. What kind of person can change the favorability like this? Can't it be more direct to increase or decrease the amount at one time? Or is this just for the sake of word count, and the change of favorability is also written in a unclear way. If you really read the novel, I would have to guess what the girl is thinking. Another thing is that there are some additions and subtractions that I really don't understand. I don't know if it's because the author brought up the sense of contrast and the unexpected meaning of the protagonist. I really can't understand it. It's completely distorting the psychological logic to achieve the result the author wants. tip: If you want to specifically respond to a certain point, please state it at the beginning, such as: Assume you respond to the second point: Two: xxxxxxxx

Why is the protagonist not affected by the original ruthlessness? Even if you don't completely transform into the original person and become as inhumane as you are, you should still be infected to some extent. If you don't use some logic, wouldn't it still be the type of mindless cool novel?

This author must be a female author, her writing style is too feminine. Normally a male author would construct the world first and then write the plot. This book is about writing stories and constructing a world. This leads to a fairy world that is empty and illogical. Book lovers have all read Xianxia novels to some extent, and have a basic world view of Xianxia. The settings of Xianxia are basically the same, and you can just add a few secondary settings of your own. To be honest, this book is not as complete as the invincible system tutorial.

It's so toxic that I don't even know how to complain about it and persuade them to quit.

How should I put it? It clearly established a relatively serious atmosphere at the beginning, but immediately inserted some seemingly funny plots. As a result, there was no gradual change in the character of the characters at the beginning, and the sense of fragmentation was extremely serious. The most obvious part is when the apprentice was looking for a room to rest after the fire poison was eliminated. He found that the apprentice was hiding on the rafters when he came back. I was stunned by the poison. To be honest, according to the status of master and apprentice, even if he tells the truth (if the room is damaged, just find a house to rest), nothing will happen. Later, he will offer some compensation or vaguely express his apology for absorbing his cultivation for many years, and say that he will receive corresponding compensation and training after the fire poison has been resolved. Isn't this transformation coming out? He just came to hide on the rafters and was discovered. What the hell? 😰

It's hard to hold it tight, I can only say it's not a little poisonous😓

These are all posts by the author... This novel is really outrageous and has all kinds of poisonous points. It made me stupid.

Call me an expert. It gives you a Nascent Soul cultivation level at the beginning, and then directly forcibly lowers your cultivation level. It is also a book that suppresses the protagonist. I really don't understand it. All such villain stories have this tone. No one read it ten years ago. The protagonist of this column is written like a perverted dog licker. It is so classic.

This book, so many monthly tickets, paid for it? The male protagonist lived like a child, childish and ridiculous. Liangou shook his head and said: No! I'm not like this

Haha, I am the anchor Kaisheng Zhizhi, an audio anchor, and the audio recorder of this book.        ，，，，，， Unlike other books I have recorded, this book is very comfortable to play. Big thumbs up I hope this book can reach the third place on the list, or even dominate the list, come on

After reading more than a dozen chapters, I thought, eh, are female-channeled novels illogical?

The owner of this secret realm is Ling Feng himself, right? Right, right? Otherwise, how could he control this world? This otherworldly wonderland and Feng Shui treasure land is quite nice to come and stay for a while when you have time in the future! Abandon the hustle and bustle, stay away from the hustle and bustle of the world, take your "loved disciple" and your loyal servant with you, live quietly in seclusion, understand the mind, and study the secret books... You wouldn't trade it for a god, right? 😁😁

The Chang family really picked up a rock and hit it on their feet! Originally, he wanted to instigate the four sects to besiege Lingxiao Sect, but Ling Feng used clever tactics to defeat them one by one. Although the four sects were severely damaged, there is a saying that "a skinny camel is bigger than a 🐴." The Chang family, who is a wolf, is being watched closely by the four families. It depends on how the Chang family will cry next! Wonderful writing, looking forward to the follow-up! …

I didn't want to watch the male protagonist after seeing his height and weight.

At the beginning of the chapter, he travels through the Internet article he wrote and becomes the villain set in the book, and is about to enter a turning point in the plot. The male protagonist knew that there was a cheat in the plot, so he thought it was an extra layer of protection. It is worth looking forward to how the conflict between the heroine and him will be resolved next. For a work in its infancy, it is a test of the author's writing ability to come up with new ideas.

，，，，😁，，！

With such good results, why don't you write about it? Not Sister Li. It feels like the subscription is very high

After reading dozens of chapters, the writing is good and the subject matter is relatively niche and novel, but it does feel a bit awkward. The story line, plot development and characters all test the author's skill. . Just watching it, I suddenly had a whim: What would happen if the pure vaginal body was a boy? Is one knife special? Hahaha, look forward to the next one😄