The Sun of the Peerless Tang Sect

Because I recently discovered that the original ending of the protagonist walking into the universe alone is not suitable, so I have to change it. After the change is completed, it is best to add a female protagonist. Please give me your opinions. Wang Qiuer will not have to think about it, because her original body, the Emperor's Auspicious Beast, has other functions in the book. If it is changed, it will affect the subsequent plot. Also, I found that a few book friends like Silver Dragon King very much. Are they too old?

Dual protagonists, both protagonists have wives in the end, no ♂♂, the first dozens of chapters are all the plot of the original work, the adaptation is not big, but the book starts to enter the state later, so don't just abandon it when you see so many original plots in the early stage. When the protagonist makes some decisions about Huo Yuhao's behavior, the narration will describe the author's feelings about the Douluo series. Readers can take a careful look and don't let their own subjective prejudices lead them to think that this is very poisonous. This book is good, and according to the author, it is impossible to be a eunuch.

It's hard to read what I wrote before. How can the Ultimate Martial Spirit be at level 7? It doesn't matter if you say it is born at level 10 and then healed to half a level. Also, the protagonist's surname is Xu and he has a Sun Martial Spirit, but just because he doesn't look dark, he doesn't think of the Sun and Moon Royal Family at all. Do you think Shrek is a fool?

Suddenly I understood the author. If the current Dou Er fan fiction is generally divided into two categories: those with the original protagonist as the protagonist and those with the self-created protagonist as the protagonist, the nanny novel will be a type that will not please either end. In this case, it is really not easy for the author to persist in completing the novel.

Huo Yuhao's male mother, very warm feeling

I personally feel that the plot is okay, but the skills of the protagonist are a bit low-priced. The fireball technique and warm wind are all out. Can't we make it more awesome? Flares, solar storms, the magnetic field of the sun itself, the gravity of the sun, if it is not possible, another helium flash supernova will make this awesome.

After reading the previous part, I don't understand why the protagonist wants to stay at level 30 and leave Shrek Academy for two or three years after Shrek Academy has shown that it has given up on the protagonist. Doesn't the author think it's outrageous to write like this?

The first part was okay, but when the protagonist became apprentice to Long Xiaoyao, it became a bit unbearable. Long Xiaoyao and the group of evil spirit masters are in cahoots, not to mention they are of the same kind. I don't know why the protagonist can think of him as a good person. As for pairing Huo Yuhao with a would-be war criminal, it's nothing compared to this.

After reading Chapter 20, I was caught off guard and took a big sip of poison. The martial spirit was too strong and the soul-devouring power was stuck at level 30, unable to be upgraded. The Douluo version of "Ancient Holy Body" is boring

When I looked at it, I felt it was very strange. What on earth is the protagonist going to do? Should he prevent the Sun and Moon Empire from unifying the continent and then unify the continent himself, or should he wait until the Sun and Moon Empire has finished unifying the continent and then rebel and overthrow the nobles to create a new world? Why do I feel that I am so desperate now that I want to help the original Three Empires fight against the Sun and the Moon, and then steal the Three Empires' butt to rebel and then fight against the Sun and the Moon? I've read a few words, and the biggest discomfort I feel right now is that the protagonist doesn't have a very clear direction of action (personal opinion, not necessarily comprehensive)