Magic Alchemists Plunder the Heavens

Collection posts for spells, advanced techniques, magical powers, and magic weapons. Everyone's ideas are welcome.

It's creative, but it doesn't look good

The second world of Chen Laosi of the Taibai family (∗❛ั∀❛ั∗)✧*. Has Taibai finally started to increase his dimension? (Finally, someone has written about this subject!! Every world in Taibai's works can be written in a separate book! But why are his readers so poor? (*꒦ິ⌓꒦ີ)

I feel that the structure of the person reading this novel has not been opened up. Say this and say that exaggeration. Multiverse. Countless parallel universes. The light galaxy is a barred spiral galaxy with a diameter of about 100,000 to 180,000 light-years. It is composed of stars, nebulae, interstellar gas, interstellar dust, etc. According to scientists' estimates, there are 100 billion planets and 100 billion to 400 billion stars in the Milky Way. The volume of the star and the sun is 1.3 Million times that of the earth. These dynasties are just different. Sub-level spells are different. Why are you surprised? Pattern Open

To be honest, the first conflict was not designed well. That Luan Xuehua was too smart, and even the people in the sect were also smarted. Before advancing to Qi training, they can choose family loans. Since these monks with perfect inner Qi are for the resources promised by a dynasty princess and her beauty? To kill another disciple of another sect who has perfect internal energy, and not to investigate at all! Just after hearing that the protagonist of Luan Xuehua is a loser, but with perfect internal energy, he went straight to ask for a fight to the death? Can we turn it around and say that Xuehua is inciting a fight within the sect, and is plotting against the monks of the sect? Author, you can say that if you fall into a calamity, you will be reduced to wisdom, but the few monks from the sect will not be counted as a calamity, right? Can't you see that Luan Xuehua is harming them? Just do a little research and you'll find out!

Is it a novel written by a machine? It's automatically generated

The settings are okay, but the writing should be improved! After reading almost ten chapters, it is always written in the same way as a system accounting book, and there is no sense of substitution at all. Reading your article, I don't feel like it's like writing a novel, but like keeping accounts.

A running account novel is like keeping accounts

Brother, it's a shame that you came from a gang. That Feifei told you a long time ago that you can just be a tool, and then what? After watching 92, I was confused. How can I say that I have a crush on her, and then I owe her a favor and then exchange favors later? ? ? What's the meaning? ? You, I don't even dare to look down.

It's true that the writing is like a running account, and I can't see the appeal.

It's an inexplicably different novel. I don't know what I'm writing about.

This combat power has increased so fast. It has already covered the solar system in less than fifty chapters. How should you write the next two hundred chapters?

There is no heroine, but there are women. After all, why can't there be eunuchs per capita? Can the author?

The setting is pretty good, and I'm quite excited to watch it. However, the protagonist's character is too villainous, which makes me feel that there is no pattern at all. This may be a problem with the author's way of describing it. Looking at these pictures and the narrative ones, if you want to find a sense of immersion, you can't find a place where you can get involved. I suggest the author think about it carefully. For example, like the section about the sect, let's introduce the basic situation of the sect, the sect's living environment, entry benefits, etc. There is nothing but a direct transition. How can this give a sense of substitution?

I came here from a black bar, please support me!

Have you modified everything before? Chapter comments and content are completely wrong

When will Tatsumaki die?

There are too many small realms in the design, and there is no pleasure in upgrading. If there are too many small realms, the small realms must be upgraded quickly, and the big realms must be upgraded slowly. If the level of junior high school gradually increases, it is better to go to the late middle school period. There is too much Qi refining in your world, otherwise it will feel like your strength has not improved as you advance to several minor realms. If you are promoted from the early stage to the middle stage, you will feel that you have improved.

New book? Can't find it? Cut?

The combination of cultivating immortals and magic is neither fish nor fowl, and you think it is good, or you should write a new framework and mix it here and there to make people feel awkward.

The writing is not good. The idea is good, but it's like a running account. I guess the author has not thought about many of the things he wrote, and there are still many questions.

Don't make the power system too high in your next book, it'll be easy to lose sight of

I simply don't like the main character in it and can't stand it. In the first small world, countless civilians are killed and innocent. I can't accept it.

Come on, I finally found a copy.

Okay, everyone who is doing this is your own person

The novel is well written, why is no one reading it?

I think the writing is quite good. Will the author write profit articles in the next book?

Isn't the ending so exciting? ? ? ? ?

The name Li An reminds me of Tang An

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