Restricted Naruto

I have read two of the author's books and found that the author's character creation and psychological control are very good. Writing about Naruto fandom. I can also see that the author is aware of his own level, so the author of the original book will definitely want to try it. Let's give original suggestions directly. The difference between original works and fan fiction is that the story and characters cannot be ready-made. You need to spend more time and energy to create a character and plot. Naruto itself is a world where high martial arts is intertwined with various conspiracy theories. The author who writes about high martial arts fictional history may have a better grasp.

The thirty-eighth book was fully ordered and I read it in two days. In terms of storytelling, the writing style is relatively novel. About halfway through, I really thought it was just a political Martian novel. But I couldn't stand it at the end. Oh my god! Continuously breaking through my limits, I was repeatedly struggling with whether to watch or not. In the end, it was the extras in the group that really made me enjoy it.

I have finished reading it, and it is generally good, but there are still some flaws. Let me tell you a few points 1. Danzo loves Konoha very much. He targets the Hokage and regards Konoha as his own property. Precisely because he regards Konoha as his own, he can sacrifice some people in exchange for benefits, but he will never exchange it for Konoha's defeat or even the crisis of Konoha's destruction. I don't think anyone would care about his own property. Don't love it 2 As long as you do something like treason, there will definitely be traces, and it is very easy to detect. The most basic thing is whoever benefits, the one who is the mastermind. There are too many people who can think of this basic political method, let alone political veterans. The best outcome of treason is that both sides will lose. You take it for granted that you write about success 3. There is no way to remove Hinata's caged bird, and even the Zong family has no way. But the moment is for life, and the dirt can't be removed even after reincarnation, and the Byakugan is also compatible with ordinary people. Without the caged bird, Hinata will become the target of hunting in the ninja world, and the ending of waiting for Hinata will not be good 4. You have misunderstood Hinata's clan and branch families. In the description of your article, the clan only has the patriarch's family. In fact, although there are not many clan members, there are also many. Every child born becomes a clan member. After becoming a branch family, the relationship between brothers and sisters is the link between the main family and the branch family. Even if the branch family is dissatisfied, it will not lead to rebellion 5. Although the marriage between Hinata is arranged, it is not the parent who likes the child's wife. Come on, author

There are a lot of praises in the comments section, so let's talk about the shortcomings. 1. The map of the third battle is wrong. Uchiha is on the battlefield in the Kingdom of Water to prevent Kirigakure Village from fighting the autumn wind. Yes, the description is correct, it is the autumn wind, water defeats fire. The Kingdom of Water and Konoha have never been mortal enemies, as can be seen from Kakashi's attitude when he met Zabuza. The main opponent in the Ninja War in the Land of Water is Tsukushi, yes, Iwagakure. In the third battle, Uchiha was dispatched by Danzo to the battlefield of Kirigakure Village to give away their heads. Yes, the adjective "giving away their heads" was to give credit to the Ice Clan and the Bones, two families that specialized in defeating Uchiha. The main purpose is to prevent others from coming to fight the autumn wind. Similarly, Onoki's main opponent was not Konoha, but Iwagakure, and Ohnoki's design forced the third generation of Rai to death without losing almost a single soldier. Ten thousand ninjas are what Dodai said, and Onoki didn't care about him. Moreover, they chase one of ten thousand ninjas and chase them to death. The third generation tired himself to death. At this time, Iwagakure Village must not only be prepared for the retaliation of Kumogakure Village, but also prevent the retaliation of Kirigakure Village. Let me say here that the earth is round, and the earth in the Naruto world is also round. Therefore, Kirigakure Village and Iwagakure Village are neighbors whose territorial waters are adjacent, and there is no need to detour. So when you come to attack Konoha, it's not easy to just drag Konoha into the water. A total of only 1,000 ninjas came to Kannabi Bridge, which is also an attack on the autumn wind. Similarly, the seven people met Gai and the others after the war was generally over. The negotiations were not completely over, and a small number of battlefields were still being finalized. After Minato cooled down, Danzo learned that the third generation had been reinstated as Hokage, and he bought information to other ninja villages and came to rob and kill the third generation. The same thing is to beat the autumn wind. The main opponent of Cloud Hidden Village is Konoha. The 1,000 elites who were spared their lives by the Third Raid at the cost of their own exhaustion. Under the leadership of the Fourth Raid, they have been fighting Konoha, and from time to time they have to sneak attack the troops of Iwagakure Village. In fact, Sandaimei did the same thing. He led 3,000 elites to attack Konoha, and then saw the emptiness behind Iwagakure Village (Onoki's trap). Because he was sure that Onoki was not there, he took 1,000 people to fight against the autumn wind. When he arrived, it turned out that Onoki was indeed not there, but many of the 10,000 main members of Iwagakure Village were waiting for them. As Konoha's main opponent, Sunagakure Village is the battlefield where Konoha invests the most energy. At the same time, he really restrained Konoha. The wind attribute is the strongest attribute, and it also has the ability to defeat fire. Sunagakure Village is the ninja village with the most wind attribute ninjas. It is wrong to describe Iwagakure as the main force that Konoha needs to deal with in the third war. The correct food chain, water overcomes fire, fire leads to wind, wind to clay, thunder to earth, earth to overcome water. The main attributes of each village will restrain one and will be restrained by the other. Normally these two are their main opponents, but due to the division of interests, a ninja village will have three opponents: a master, a pair, and an autumn wind, plus an ally. But the hatred in the First World War changed the situation. The two shadows, water and soil, died together in the first war, resulting in dissatisfaction with the soil and water, and the Kirigakure and Iwagakure villages began to fight to death. In addition, Iwagakure often teamed up with Sunagakure Village to fight against him, and they didn't have much energy to deal with Konoha. Therefore, unlike World War I, the purpose of Kirigakure Village to fight Konoha at the beginning of World War II changed from "I restrain you and I bully you" to "Come over and fight against the autumn wind". Konoha and Kumogakure also started to fight each other because of the death of the two shadows. Originally, the overall attributes of the two were incompatible. The fight was for the order of the daimyo. They didn't have much hatred, so they were partners who could join forces. But the two Kage Liangliang also became feuding, and the wind direction of Kirigakure Village also changed, so Konoha stopped paying more attention to Kirigakure Village and tried its best to take revenge. Other ninja villages are similar. So the three-war pattern is. Konoha Village, the main opponent, Sand Hidden Village, Vice Cloud Hidden Village, Autumn Wind Kirigakure Village. (To prevent the autumn wind) Ally with Iwagakure Village, later defeat Sunagakure Village, focus on Kumogakure Village, fall out with Iwagakure Village, and become allies with Sunagakure Village to resolve the misunderstanding. Kirikakure, main opponent, Iwagakure, sub-Sunagakure, Autumn Wind Konoha, ally Kumogakure. Sunagakure Village, main opponent, Konoha Village, Deputy Kirigakure Village, Akifeng Iwagakure Village, ally Kumogakure Village. Later, he negotiated peace with Konoha, focusing on attacking Kirigakure Village, helping Konoha to attack Kumogakure Village, and went to Iwagakure Village to attack Autumn Wind. Cloud Hidden Village, the main opponent, Konoha Village, Vice Iwagakure Village, Akifeng Kirigakure Village. The ally was Sunagakure Village, and later the ally became Kirigakure Village. Iwagakure Village, the main opponent, Kirigakure Village, Deputy Kumogakure Village, Akifuge Sand Hidden Village (to prevent autumn wind), and ally Konoha Village. Later, after fighting Konoha, there were no allies, and all four families were offended by him. So far, the Ninja Village has not been beaten by the autumn wind. 2. Write about Byakugan for a long time. Konoha is ambushed every day. The protagonist's Byakugan is crippled. Are everyone else's Byakugan blind? Was it possible for you, Orochimaru, to easily ambush you by buying information? Not much to say about this. 3. The number of people is wrong. During the Third War, there were ninjas who were still alive in Konoha and able to go on the battlefield. If there were too many, the number would be 5,000. If it is not based on the original work, please indicate it, otherwise a group of readers who have never watched Naruto will be preconceptions and spread rumors everywhere. From Konoha to Naruto, there are only more than 10,000 ninjas. Not counting those who died in the 1-2-3 battle. Forget about other things, let's not talk about your description of the characters. Including the three points I mentioned are not big problems.

Although it was just a joke before... But the author would not really write the protagonist as the spokesperson for the interests of the Konoha Great Ninja clan, the leader of the anti-D faction, a cold-blooded animal that does not respect life, a scum who plays with women's emotions, and a loser who suppresses the civilian gentry? ? ? Okay, author, please take it easy, you don't want this book to disappear after writing it 😏

The previous article was very good and I read it in one sitting. Until the new chapter makes me dumbfounded, shall we just continue writing? The nouns in the title become verbs. It feels so fragmented to me that I really can't stand it anymore. If it doesn't work after a few more days, I have no choice but to give up.

The old noodles that have been transferred over still have the same taste.

For ordinary people, the real oppression does not simply stem from taxes and servitude; it comes from land annexation, and the resulting land rent and usury; it is also squeezed by the joint efforts of bureaucratic groups and powerful interest groups. Generally speaking, the taxes and servitude collected by the imperial government are relatively loose, but it does not mean that the people will be squeezed less. What's more important is that the empire's never increasing its endowment is usually not due to any noble sentiment, but due to two reasons. First, if the empire wants to increase taxes, it will always be resisted by the entire society. To put it simply, censusing the population and surveying the fields are always taboos for the rulers of the empire. This is not just the case in the Ming Dynasty, but also in all eras. The reason why population censuses and land inventories have become taboos for those in power is that similar actions will definitely offend the interests of powerful groups. Everything is obvious. The large amount of hidden farmland and population must have been completed under the operation of powerful groups, and they are the biggest beneficiaries. Second, the total wealth of the empire is not in the national treasury, but in the private sector. We often have the illusion that the so-called folk here refer to the bottom society. Therefore, when we look at the competition between the government and the private sector for wealth, we think it is excessive expropriation. Actually, the folk category is too big. It is no exaggeration to say that even the wealth owned by the daimyo in a private capacity is also included in this private sector. Not to mention the wealth owned by nobles, dignitaries, monasteries, and officials in their private capacity.

The internal affairs chapter can be mentioned a little bit as it is too weak, connecting conspiracy lines and power lines. Checks and balances should be given to delay time. Anyway, the Sheyi Technology line is coming to an end. For example: 1. New district development, individual merchants and wealthy business districts (sell houses and land, lend money to war widows' families to new cities) 2. Post-war commodity distribution in various countries, ordinary people and hired mixed teams (by the way, they take in the blood of orphans and train confidants, Aunt Snake's subordinates in the original work are connected in series) 3. The establishment of a science and technology bureau and a nursery (liberating productivity) 4. After the war, the responsibility is divided into war zones, leaving some idle forces. (Disperse the roots and the three-generation forces, and digest the remaining forces. Anyway, if Auntie Snake's technology line is successful, it will be promoted horizontally) A new city, a science and technology industrial park (normal operations after Auntie Snake came to power), partially supporting civilian hospitals and nurseries (to win the hearts of the people and cultivate forces), and take Uchiha or Yuan Fei or others. (There is also a small question. Is the Hyuga Clan the same lineage and the protagonist is so smooth? Internal affairs talents. Winning over the Konoha team, there is a science and technology line to finish, be bold.) Other internal affairs, let the book friends add, mention it Come on ~ very exciting

I voted for both monthly votes and recommendation votes. I advise the author not to be ignorant of praise 😏

Not bad

Hmm~ I have read more than 40 chapters. It is considered a good book. The pace is very refreshing and it is good to read as a refreshing novel.

I thought it was the one I thought it was, but it's a pity

If you can accept harem stories, you can read this book 💀💀💀 But this is the first time I have read a Naruto fanfic that even Kushina has read. The cornerstone of NM Naruto world (NARUTO) has been lost, and there is no one who can continue writing 😡😡😡

I clicked on this book many times before, but was dissuaded by the comment section and the title. I thought it was the kind of mindless stallion's cool writing routine many years ago. After reading it, I only had one thought: update soon, update quickly, update quickly.

There are really fewer and fewer Naruto fans who can read it at the beginning. At least this one really makes me feel amazing so far. In terms of character creation and plot, it can be said that this writing style can write anything well. As expected, as long as the writing is good, the lower limit is used to break through. If I knew from the beginning that this was the direction of this harem, I would definitely not touch it. Now the door has been welded, it smells so good

It's rare to find such an uncomfortable harem, and I don't recommend it to any lovers of pure love, but harems are not very pure love.

The plot layout is very good, but the protagonist likes others to be awesome. Rin should not be considered awesome, but I really can't stand Kushina's part. I can accept that Hinata and Hizashi fell in love with his wife after his death, and I can also accept that he snatched Hizashi's wife away. But in Kushina, you are just a pure minotaur behavior. I can't accept it, so I gave up. There are more than a hundred chapters here, and there may be a lot of minotaur plots later. Please pay attention when reading.

I feel that the author has a good pace. While being Machiavellian, he does not forget to use daily interactions with other female characters to promote the main plot. For example, using Anko to get close to Orochimaru, using the ambiguous plot of eating ramen to add a position to Lin, using the incident of Minato and Kushina wanting to get married to create a conflict between Orochimaru and Minato and then benefiting from it, what is there to complain about? I really don't understand why so many people are afraid of women when they see them?

In this era where 404 is rampant, it is really rare to see such a good book! By the way, this book title is really good👍

After reading them all, this book can be abandoned once you reach the fifth generation, and then there will be Baba.

I can't stand it anymore. It's ruining my childhood. It has no bottom line. It's still a different kind of satire on reality.

Fuck, when I read Chapter 134, I realized that this was a harem story, and I ran away. See you again by fate 🙏

On the surface it is written as Liu Beiwen, but in fact the plot is great. The characterization is also vivid, and when Minato is forced to rebel, he faces the first or second generation of Orochimaru's reincarnation, which is so smooth that it doesn't look like a plot, but like an arrangement of fate.

At first I thought the name of this book meant that Pig's Knuckle became Hokage and used his strength and charisma to illuminate Konoha. But after reading more than 100 chapters, I realized that this is literally what it means.

Recommended new book "Cracked Wall", it is still true, the perspective is unique and the imagination is wide open

It's rare to find good writing, and the plot is exciting and unconventional. The original plot can also have this kind of skill, making readers unable to take their eyes off it and vaguely looking forward to the new chapter. Come on, author, no matter what the ending is, you will definitely accompany this book to the end. Come on, author, you will definitely have a place among the big guys in the Qidian fandom!

Lin

The writing is really perverted, just like the previous book "Kuanyue", it's too perverted. This one is even more perverted than the previous one. I can't stand it, so keep reading.

Today I found the author's previous masterpiece and read it. Two words of awesomeness!