
Hogwarts' Professor of Holy Light
霍格沃茨的圣光学教授
- Status
- Completed
- Length
- 192k Words
- Genre
- Western Fantasy
- Subgenre
- Modern Magic
- Updated
- 4y ago
- Source
- Qidian
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81Chapters
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First, I can't quite understand why a fifth academy is needed. The protagonist has no reputation, no connections, and doesn't even have the resources and capital to build a fifth academy. Its only use is treatment, so where is the infirmary? Second, there are inexplicable conflicts. Magic itself is dangerous. For example, various injuries, separation, and death caused by a wrong spell are possible. Why does a student who is injured while making a potion bring the protagonist directly to the door to start a conflict? Besides, Dumbledore, the boss, didn't even say anything. It's really puzzling to me that you just came to attack me without understanding the situation.
I personally feel that your plot connection is too abrupt. Two strangers with different languages, cultures, and races, can they open their hearts directly like this? As a Delaney who grew up on the battlefield, how could he be so naive? Dumbledore directly revealed his core plan when faced with a creature he had never understood before?
Explain some of the settings of the work and what people are confused about.
First, the protagonist is a time traveler and I don't know the plot of HP. I didn't write this clearly before, but I have revised it now. Second, regarding the fifth academy, every fanfic will have points that are different from the original work. My point is here, the logic will be self-consistent, and I will explain it as the plot unfolds. Third, there is a female protagonist, a single female protagonist, not Hermione. Fourth, the magic stone part is the foreshadowing part of this book. The original work is the one with the most disjointed content and the most confusing logic in the entire work. Many authors are unwilling to write it and start directly from the secret room. I still hope to add some logic to it. Fifth, please add it to your favorites, please.
It doesn't look good, words and deeds are inconsistent, the Holy Light and the Shadow cannot be used to the end, it is completely chaotic, the front foot is to fight, the back foot is to apologize, it is completely meaningless
Let's not mention the problem of pig's feet not remembering the plot of HP and some conflicts with the original HP, let's just talk about the ability of pig's feet to express magic. According to the author's setting, Pig's Foot is one of the strongest members of the Draenei tribe. The two shadow spells fired by Dumbledore and Snape had no effect at all! You can't say that learning Occlumency will make you immune to the Shadow Priest's shadow spell, right? Against Snape, he neither dodge nor open his shield. Is this the performance of a battle priest charging on the front line? Don't be disgusting!
Coming, coming
Kirk
The author has a big suggestion for you. Strictly speaking, compared to the classic characters in World of Warcraft, everyone in Harry Potter is a small character. Don't just say that so-and-so in Harry Potter is equivalent to a certain classic character in World of Warcraft.
With only one or two hundred thousand words, he is going in and out of the palace. Who dares to read this?
Let Voldemort go to advance the plot? Is this the level of the so-called top pastor in the world? Professor Shengguang was promised to teach two students? You clearly separated the fifth house and still let the students go to Gryffindor? Shameful