Hogwarts' Professor of Holy Light

First, I don't quite understand why there's a fifth house. The protagonist has no prestige, no connections, and not even the resources to build one. His only use is healing, so where's the infirmary? Second, the conflict is inexplicable. Magic itself is dangerous; mispronouncing a spell can cause various injuries, splitting, or even death.

Personally, I feel your plot transitions are too abrupt. Two strangers, speaking different languages, with different cultures and races, can just open up to each other like that? How can a Draenei who grew up on the battlefield be so naive? Dumbledore directly reveals his core plans to a creature he's never met?

First, the protagonist is a time traveler who is unaware of the Harry Potter storyline. I didn't make this clear before, but I've corrected it now. Secondly, regarding the fifth academy, every fanfiction will have points that differ from the original work. My point is here, and the logic will be self-consistent, as the plot unfolds.

It's unsightly; the words and actions don't match; the use of light and shadow is inconsistent and completely chaotic. One minute they're about to fight, the next they're apologizing—it's utterly meaningless.

Leaving aside the issue of the protagonist not remembering the Harry Potter storyline and other inconsistencies with the original Harry Potter setting, let's just talk about the protagonist's magical abilities. According to the author's design, the protagonist is one of the strongest members of the Draenei race, yet he was completely unaffected by two shadow spells from Dumbledore and Snape!

Here it comes!

Kirk

The author has a suggestion for you. Strictly speaking, everyone in Harry Potter is a tiny, insignificant character compared to classic characters in World of Warcraft. Stop casually saying that someone in Harry Potter is on par with a certain classic character in World of Warcraft in terms of strength.

With only a couple hundred thousand words, yet he's constantly moving in and out of the palace, who would dare read that?

To advance the plot, Voldemort was released? Is this the level of so-called world-class pastors? Wasn't it true that Professor Sheng Guangxue would only teach two students? Why send students to Gryffindor when they've clearly separated into the Fifth House? Shameful