Everyone Is a Game Developer

Hello everyone from National Producers I have been practicing for two and a half years Personal trainee He Jiu I like singing, dancing, rap and free music

Read some personal comments on this book in Chapter 70. Advantages: 1. The writing style is good, there are not many embarrassing descriptions or words that do not convey the meaning, and it is relatively smooth to read. 2. The setting is novel. Compared with other game production articles that comprehensively crush different world games, this book is mainly set in a single game type, so it requires a variety of novel games to stand out. Disadvantages: 1. Content, the game part of this book is about 4:6 or even 3:7 in the daily emotional part. The game is a tool of identity, which is used to communicate with the female top student. At present, the top female top student is also guessing the identity of the male protagonist. She can even foresee that when the identity is revealed, there will be a long description of increasing favorability. The fun of the game can only be said to be there, but it is not very obvious. 2. Corresponding to the above advantage 2, to be honest, such a novel setting can attract some new people, but it also loses more advantages that describe the characteristics of our real-world games. Not to mention the plot of Fairy Sword One, the free exploration mode and equipment mechanism of Fairy Sword One are subversive settings for their word game, and the playability is greatly improved. It cannot be dismissed by a small popularity, not to mention. In reality, Angry Birds, 2046, and Digg are smaller games with simpler mechanisms, and they still get out of the game. Readers think that the fun points are not enough. The protagonist and even the map have not yet been explored clearly. Only the top 100 rankings have some clues. 3. The emotional line is wrong, the character is very natural, and it follows a path of long-term love. However, the description of this thing is long. I can give you so much space when you write an emotional article. I am just here to eat dog food. This is the theme of this book. Summary: I can watch it, and I can enjoy some novel settings, but I shouldn't be able to follow it. The game line is lackluster, and the game line everywhere hints at the need to innovate to break the monopoly of game mechanics, but the setting is unclear. After each innovation, someone tells the protagonist that we are optimistic about you, but there is no feedback at all from other aspects. Who is the enemy in the first stage, where is the dawn, and where is the direction? Don't tell. Good luck, author. Goodbye.

I see that many friends in the comment area are recommending games, so I just opened a separate post to collect everyone's suggestions. Friendly note, I may not necessarily adopt the games you mentioned. After all, I have never played many games, so it is difficult to write in detail. But if there are certain games that are particularly popular, I will consider using them~ Thank you for your support~

Let's revise the introduction and add a sentence about daily love. The comment area is so messed up. The author takes the blame. He wants to attract game fans but doesn't want to change his writing style. He is really both upright and upright. The last time I saw this kind of peddler was Lao Liu who came from Porcelain Sword If you don't want to write about the main plot of the game, you should give up on game fans early and change the introduction. The title of the book, write dog food well, like Sister Hua, the results are not bad What you have done now, game shell, love lining, game fans come in and find love lining, feel cheated, leave a post and leave with curses, dog food fans will not come in after seeing the game shell I hope the author will think about it carefully

How can I put it this way? The reason I read this book was to see the protagonist make money by playing games, not to see the male and female protagonists falling in love. You are completely off topic, and I feel that your game is not worth watching! Come on, author!

At first I thought it was a story about angrily criticizing traffic producers, but after a few chapters I was so excited that the cold water poured on me. A large part of it was devoted to the description of love, which felt a bit like trying to sell someone else's dog. I was a bit disappointed.

The protagonist should teach players less about how to play games. Players are better at playing games than game makers, and there is no need for the protagonist to remind them.

You should change this to let everyone watch you fall in love

Don't forcefully write a slap-in-the-face plot. It's not a passionate and enjoyable novel about bullying young people into poverty. A forced slap-in-the-face plot is neither blunt nor exciting.

This is the first time I have read a book about Rusty Lake at the beginning. Unfortunately, the follow-up feedback was not enough and it was ended hastily. The same goes for subsequent games. There was too little feedback from players. This is the cool thing about game production writing.